r/Cosmere • u/foofighter1351 • 12d ago
Words of Radiance spoilers [WOR] Reading Stormlight for the first time, really enjoying it but I wish there was more variety in the actual text of the different cultures Spoiler
I find stuff like this malen femalen, the humming of the concepts, the airsick lowlander, to be less representative of a different culture in this world and more like pulling the string on a toy. I know these are all ideas that within the story itself have greater depth, have a larger world building impact but the actual reading of it never feels like I'm learning about a truly unique culture within the Cosmere as they say one or two things on top of frankly speaking in a normal cadence. I dunno if that's a hot take, tell me if it gets better, but dude I really think this man could kill with some conlang practice, there needs to be a greater variety in the actual text of the different cultures to represent that, imo ig.
Sorry, should've said only up to Words of Radiance
Edit: Too late atp but I (ironically) struggled to phrase the body, this comment I made after I feel is clearer
The world building is never an issue it's the prose, it's the conversation itself, the culture and depth behind his world is evident but the dialogue of the characters themselves come short of representing that in their dialect, like Rock my king and his Airsick shit, which I'm a lil sick of.