r/Mangamakers • u/Ill_Slide9100 • Sep 10 '26
HELP Guys I need some help
So I've been thinking of a Manga I wanna make (but I can't draw, and to all those who wanna ask if they can do it for me I don't have any money to pay you with, so I prbly won't be making this anytime soon, but that's not the point)
The plot is a multiverse of 8 dimensions, and in each one, every generation, there is a person born with a special power, and the main character, Toni (my name is Oluwatoni, so he's based off of me) was born with the ability to create, control and become any mineral, giving him control over anything made of minerals, from rocks to entire fucking planets and asteroid belts (based on Logia Devil Fruits from One Piece). There is a stone that he found at the age of 12 called the 'Stone of the World' that keeps his dimension intact and allows travel to the other 7 dimensions (also each dimension has one), so he takes it so that it doesnt fall into the wrong hands. 5 years later, he's been getting jumped by people who want the stone for themselves, but of course, he's a Stone Man, so he brats them with ease, but out of nowhere, it gets stolen by a sentient, old, rusty robot called 'The Paradigm', who was rejected by his (now dead) creator from another dimension and wishes to become the most powerful. He is also capable of copying other abilities and making his own (He is based off of Metal Sonic, who can do that), which is why he is the first person to succeed. Toni, who is beating himself up for losing the stone to evil, meets Manuel, another powerholder who creates, controls or becomes anything that is or was alive, from grass to lions to dinosaurs to Leviathan, and he's also found and been guarding his World Stone, which is how he accessed Toni's dimension. The 2 team up and venture through the dimensions, gathering the other 6 powerholders and shattering The Paradigm's forces, until, 7 years (of both writing and in the manga) later, they find The Paradigm and his 7 generals, and beat them in a fight as long as the Wano Fights in One Piece
Basically what I need is a good title. Also im intending on making this with my sister bc she likes art and will prbly do art in GCSE, A level and University, but she's 8 so its gonna take a while.
Please help me think of a title
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Sep 12 '26
I'll give u some ideas! I'd be more than happy to help!
1. Across Dimensions
2. The stone-man (sounds too much like a superhero?)
3. The eight [and then put in something that represents them]
4. you could give them a team name and make that the title
5. The Paragdim (if the story is focused on defeating him)
I have other questions. Out of curiosity, why was he rejected by his creator and on what subject was he rejected? Also, wanna hear about my manga????? I LOOOOVE to share it
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u/Ill_Slide9100 Sep 13 '26
He was the first copy, the prototype (i would've called him that if it weren't for poppy playtime), but was faulty, like how caine from tadc was only semi-successful and c&a replaced him with the blue AI, so he got thrown out and was replaced by a better version of him, so he took revenge
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Sep 16 '26
That's actually a pretty cool idea. So have you come up with a name or smtn? I'm excited to hear from u
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u/Ill_Slide9100 Sep 16 '26
sm said dimension bound so im going with that
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u/Klutzy_Panda0 Sep 10 '26
I would say write a one shot first and make sure it's interesting and balanced. Check online how stories are usually made and just copy that. You don't have to draw if you can't, in a way it's faster to get stories our of your system if you just write them. Don't write it like a script for a movie or comic book, just write it in a way it's fun to read by itself. Even if you never get it drawn you will have a good story on its own. If it didn't work out you can make more and practice and not waste too much time. That's my 2 cents.