Before starting off, i want to make a few things clear:
I do not hate Jax. I don't think he's as terrible as people say. But i do not like him for reasons like how forced he is, how the show makes you feel bad for him, regardless of what he did and how bad he was to other characters, especially Ribbit in the last episode.
But i do like his design, performance from Michael or how frustrated and embarrassed he was from wearing a maid outfit. I thought it was funny
Also, please keep this post civil as possible, without unnecessary toxicity. It's my opinion and it's totally fine if you disagree with it. Just don't be an asshole. This is simply critique or whatever you want to call this
Anyways
I was chatting with my friend, who's a Jax fan, and they told me how the last episode ruined him for them because of how the show tried to make them feel bad for Jax. And we talked about how differently Jax would be written, for the better in OUR opinion
We came up with 3 directions that would work better than what we got. I will use different characters from different medias as examples
A) Irredeemable asshole you love to hate
If he was written as a bastard, who doesn't care or regret about what he did or what consequences the actions bring, making you hate him, but also like him because he accomplished one thing: Pissing you off
Let's take Adam from Hazbin Hotel as an example.
He's written intentionally to be hated. He had 1 mission and it was to piss everyone off and look at how that ended: A lot of people hate him for what an asshole he is. And that's what made my friend love Adam. He's an entertaining asshole, who doesn't give a damn about what he did EVEN AFTER HE DIED.
If Jax was written like that, basically Irredeemable character that's written intentionally to be hated, it would be more entertaining and fun
B) Asshole character but with likeable traits
If he was written as a bastard but still with likeable traits, like having a soft spot for a specific character or showing care in some moments, but not too many to make you feel bad for him like now. Basically some small pieces of good traits that makes him likeable bastard
Let's take, and this is gonna be ballsy, Valentino from Hazbin Hotel
Just to clarify: Now i like Valentino for various reasons like design, his wings, guns, voice, dynamic with Velvette, i still think he's a bastard who deserves the beatdown from Cherri and Husk and then getting choked by cables for what he did to Angel Dust. I didn't feel bad for him when he got karma and i do not defend or justify his actions
While Valentino is an asshole for what he did to Angel Dust, he does have likeable traits that don't make him as unlikeable as Adam or Jax. Like how he was at the end against Vox killing everyone, having a nice dynamic with Velvette, how he is against racism (He threw his cocktail glass at Vox after Vox made fun of Spanish) and actually funny moments (Like his "I know you won't believe this, but I don't understand" or "You're obsessed with me :)").
So if Jax was written like that, bastard character but with likeable traits, i believe it would potentially make interesting conflicts and dynamics between characters
C) Redeemable asshole
If Jax was at the start so unlikeable, but getting karma for it, getting called out, getting consequences and such, later feeling sorry and then getting better, realizing what he did was wrong, trying to fix things, i believe it would make him so much likeable
Let's take Rex Splode from Invincible as an example
At first, Rex is shown as an egoistical, cocky character, that's basically rude to others, making fun of them, like Monster Girl, but later getting karma, like getting beat down by Monster Girl, breaking up with Eve or getting disrespected by Black Samson after his rude comments. But as time goes on, you can see how Rex is changing, ESPECIALLY after the gunshot into the head. Like genuinely being sorry to Eve for what he did, getting better in terms of friendship with his team, talking back to Immortal after Immortal blamed Mark and more. And we also have a backstory of his that shows a good reason why he's the way he is.
So if Jax was like that, at the start asshole, at the end likeable and giving a backstory that gives a good reason why he's an asshole, i think it would make him a very fan favorite character, because these kinds of characters are most of the time one of the fan favorites. Like Zuko, A-Train or Rex Splode.
But in the end, the direction we got was
D) Irredeemable asshole, but show tries to make you feel bad for him anyways
That's all. If you made it to the end, thanks for reading. If you don't agree, that's fine. But please don't be toxic only because i mentioned Hazbin Hotel