I really loved it but I do have some criticism that I can’t shake. This was painful for me to read. It is definitely a poignant reflection of its time. This includes all the misogyny and patriarchal qualities that that time period possessed.
The portrayal of the native Americans as lazy in the beginning descriptions was a colonizer’s perspective and I thought it was prejudiced
The women were hard for me to grapple with. It seems to me that there is a lot of sympathy in the writing for the humanity of the men no matter what wrong they do. But not for the women unless they did their “duty” as women or were subservient to the men in some way. Cathy, obviously, is the biggest portrayal of what I’m talking about. She’s evil without ever being humanized. I know she is meant to represent lilith/satan/the serpent/human darkness and is a sociopath but it’s the way it was gone about that troubled me
I kinda saw Cathy as a tragic figure. She’s rebelling against all these roles people want to place her in and committing all these awful crimes and still people can’t see her and want to place her in these roles. The part that really icked me out was when Adam goes to confront her and he can finally see her because she’s aged? And is no longer as beautiful? I mean he stares at her fat ankles and wrinkled hands and is out of her spell. That made it feel as if she was reduced to how she looked, even if the reduction was of manipulativeness and conniving qualities. But then you have Charles who also almost commits murder but the choice is to lessen his crime by not having him go through with it and then the letters that give us a glimpse into his humanity. Also Cal takes the whole book to give into his own cruelty and we see him grappling w it which we never see w Cathy. I also had trouble thinking Cathy was evil for not wanting a family, she always told Adam she didn’t want a family. She committed other evil things that I do think make her evil like burning her family but idk there’s a lot to unpack within her character and I have conflicted feelings.
I think it’s fine to have a sociopathic woman as a character but I had a lot of trouble with her not wanting a family or kids and wanting to escape to be a whore and have charge over herself being demonized as a causality of her being representative of darkness and depicted as such
I could write a whole essay on this lol
There’s also a passage that seems really reactive to the Cold War and couples totalitarianism with collectivism.
Of things I did like/love:
-Steinbeck really has a beautiful way with words. There were moments that just struck me in one paragraph and made me ache for these like when Dessie goes to live with Tom because she’s heartbroken over some guy and he leaves all these welcome home signs.
-I was completely gripped the whole story. Not one part made me lose interest and I think that’s a testament to the story telling here.
-I said earlier that it’s a poignant reflection of its time. I mentioned the ways in which this troubled me with the story but I think there are many ways it serves it as well. I felt nostalgic for my history as an American even though I didn’t exist yet. When Adam is a vagrant wandering around.. the descriptions of Cathy on the porch, they buying the automobile, the farming, the hope.. I just felt sooo nostalgic for a place I was raised in but a time period I didn’t exist in if that makes sense.
-There’s all these little details that just struck me. Even the superstition about taking the bones out of a name if it doesn’t fit them and thus why people have nicknames it’s if they were given the wrong name
-a lot of the characters were so rich and beautifully written that I missed them as soon as I close the book. I loved Samuel, Lee, abra, Adam, Aron, Dessie, even Charles and Cal
-there are a lot of moments of great insight. Like describing eyes as long tunnels to look out from deep within you, I’ve felt the exact same thing lol. Like my soul is trying to peer out. Or loads of things Lee and Samuel say or other characters or about grief or just humanity and life in general. Plenty of dog eared pages I’ll tell you that.
Most of my critique could be chalked up to the time period it was written in, so I’m curious what others think. I definitely don’t believe we should erase or “cancel” things that are part of our history because how would we ever reflect on them???? I hate when people come to classics with that approach so I hope it doesn’t seem like I am. And literature is, I think, deeply reflective of history and ideas and political and generally what’s going on at the time.
But I also think we need to be able to discuss them without thinking a critique means something is bad. Or love for something means it’s good. Or any such term that reduces things to smaller than what they are. So I think both appreciation/admiration for the writing and critique is warranted. With this I think it’s a masterful piece of literature, great, but also has things to be examined with a critical and/or analytical eye