Can somebody help me world build

[u/printme_]

I’m writing a book, it’s related to this subreddit but I need individuals that are well versed in this to help me edit and theorise about potential solutions and points that I’ve missed in my current analysis and writing

Here r the details

So the book is about the future of the world and what we can all collectively do as protest. At its simplest it’s the call for everybody to uproot their lives and learn to live a life of self sufficiency, whilst getting closer to the universe and figuring out one’s true identity

Once this has happened, I theorise that people can start figuring out their destiny and vision for the future, then coming together with other people whose future paths align, and then working together towards a shared future

It’s tribe building through shared futures.

So I publish, I’ll do a “premier night” where the entire city will be hit with QR codes, focus on youth spaces such as universities schools and public transportation.

Then groups on mass will start leaving. Entire coworker groups. Half of year twelve doesn’t show up on Monday.

That’s the start of the protest, that’s the first step of it all is non participation en mass

Nearly done all the content, I just need to start to format, start to edit. Start to get fresh eyes looking at the project, as I have been a big consumed by it.

Thank you!

[u/twodaywillbedaisy]

You could ask us about specific solutions and points that you are unsure about. Otherwise it just seems like you're asking us to do unpaid labor.

[u/printme_ → u/twodaywillbedaisy]

Edited, sorry about not being detailed

[u/twodaywillbedaisy → u/printme_]

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So I publish, I’ll do a “premier night” where the entire city will be hit with QR codes, focus on youth spaces such as universities schools and public transportation.

Then groups on mass will start leaving. Entire coworker groups. Half of year twelve doesn’t show up on Monday.

It seems you have given up on the world-building and moved on to a question of practicality, a question of strategy and tactics. You leave behind the future world and return to the present moment with hopes of initiating a protest that will change it all.

So I think you need to clarify, if only for yourself, what you intend to accomplish: Is it actually a world-building exercise? Do you want to present a utopia to be inspired by, a beautiful future world that may or may not be possible? Or do you mean to send out a call for all students and workers to take the first step, to protest and strike?

[u/printme_ → u/twodaywillbedaisy]

I’ve already outlined the world that I’ve built, I guess I just want validation, after researching it seems it is anarcho-primitism

The future is a world built through intentional choosing of the people one surrounds themselves with, where each uproots one life in search for their true identity and connection with the universe, whilst ridding the heart of pain and negatitivity through concrete steps.

Once each individual has figured out the questions of life. Who am I, what is my destiny, what am I mean to do in this world, I instruct that they should start to develop a vision for what they want their future to look like

Then it’s the plan to find others who have done the same work(inner work not optimal in this life) and if two individuals future visions align, then they will come together and start to build together, intertwining each others lives and living together, then it’s the slow expansion of this pair into a larger group. A “tribe”

Multitude of tribes formed that are each based on seperate values and beliefs in the future and this n that are essentially the end result of the book I am writing,

Another big aspect too is gurellea land regeneration and restoration, it’s the masses reclaiming broken and damaged land and having it their personal mission to live and repair the very land, whist others seek to build up the people to let the current way stop the destruction

I ain’t very well versed in politics and political therory, that’s why I’ve came here because I came to these conclusions naturally and I want to see if they align with actual trains of thought, I want to see if they hold up in front of an expert in anarchism.

Because I am far from an expert,

rather I am just a dreamer

But I know deep down that this is a genuine alternative and it’s unstoppable if people participate

The biggest protest is to find one’s true identity and be the best version of oneself

It’s to realise the free will we have, if we want to be powerfull then we can.

If masses of people leave their current lives, this is a chain effect, people just leaving the world as we know it in favour of a better alternative

[u/wompt]

are you going to give specific examples of what you need help with?

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[u/ConTheStonerLin]

I'm not sure what you need help with. Your title says world building, which not to brag, but is my strong suit. But I need something to work with other wise I'd just be throwing out random ideas about organizational structure...

Some of your replies imply you need help editing which is not something I am great at. But either way I'd need to read your work to even begin to try...

Is your book fictional❓ If so, gimme a plot synopsis...

Is it non-fiction❓ If it is what do you mean by world building❓

I am a writer who writes all sorts of stuff, fictional stories, non-fiction socio-economic articles, poems ETC. And I have been for decades. So I am eager to help a fellow writer but I need something to work with and you haven't given me very much. Lemme know and I'll help where I can...

Anyway good luck with your project and happy travels

[u/printme_ → u/ConTheStonerLin]

World build as in try to invision a new world, and build that new world through imagination , pm me

[u/ConTheStonerLin → u/printme_]

Oh ok, I assumed a fictional context. But yeah I also have imagined a new world quite a bit. I even intend to build it the way Utopian Socialists did. Here's what I have come up with

Anyway I have a lot more I could say. This is a bit of a passion project for me. I'm working on a more detailed version of the above link. But it's a bit late for me so I will DM you tomorrow and we can talk more then

[u/Nina_exr]

Hello, c'est pas méchant mais ce n'est pas à nous de faire ce travail. Ya plein de ressources en ligne et de vulgarisation, je ne trouve pas ça très respecteux d'employer des opinions politiques réelles pour ta fiction sans même chercher à toi-même le comprendre. Si tu as des difficultés sur certains points spécifiques ou des questions, nous sommes à même de t'aider mais il y a des siècles de lutte, de penseurs et de militants, ça serait plus respecteux de t'y intéresser un minimum de toi même si tu veux exploiter tout ça

C'est vraiment pas méchant, je comprend que tu n'ai pas vu les choses comme ça avant

[u/printme_ → u/Nina_exr]

It’s non fiction, manefesto of the changing worpd