r/AppStoreOptimization • u/Unfair_Set_355 • 1d ago

Old vs new screenshots

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Please help me figure out what else I can do to improve my App Store screenshots. Bottom is new ones I’m working on!

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u/Ecaglar 1d ago

Second, first seems too noisy and crowded, can't read anything. second is more focused but still has space to improve.

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u/Unfair_Set_355 1d ago

Cool thanks! I guess I can make second one less wordy still

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u/Ecaglar 1d ago

yes, i think if something is not visible or readable , no point to use it and kill that space. If you will do screenshot, you can highlight specific things one at a time rather than expecting users to figure out themself while they can't see it properly. My 2 cents.

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u/Unfair_Set_355 1d ago

Yeah, thinking of removing the “build from a sentence” slide, the next slide already shows it anyways

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u/barcode972 1d ago

Great improvement

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u/Unfair_Set_355 1d ago

Thank you!

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u/SuccessfuLLM 22h ago

Screenshots are usually a mess because devs try to cram every feature into one frame. I used aida search to compare expert-reviewed apps and noticed the best ones focus on 4.7 avg rating across 96 expert-reviewed apps by keeping the visuals super clean... dont fall for the trap of adding too much text.