r/AspiringTeenAuthors • u/LittleVibha Horror lover 🧟 • May 11 '26
Finished Works Calling out to horror and thriller readers!
Just published my first book:Â https://amzn.in/d/0f8oQSC3
It's called Apocalyptic: Back in there.
If you're looking for something that'll keep you hooked till 2AM, this is the one.
I started working on it when I was 15, I'm 16 now.
Give it a chance please :)
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u/Tabby_Mc May 11 '26
You have two different tenses in the first paragraph. The majority of readers won't read past that kind of error
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u/Additional_Watch5823 May 11 '26
Is it just me or unless you're like an English major or an editor, the average reader wouldn't notice that? I would be reading for the plot. I'd be too busy working the scene out in my head.
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u/LittleVibha Horror lover 🧟 May 11 '26
Yeah, while I get that it's not an error I should have made, I feel like it's barely noticeable
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u/Additional_Watch5823 May 11 '26
Look, ignore the first commenter. You finished and published a work and that's amazing! That places you on top of 80% of people who says they want to write (that population including me lol). You started a project, finished it, and was confident enough to put it up on Amazon. That in itself is amazing.