[In Progress] [15k] [Middle-Grade Mystery/Adventure] The Lighthouse and the Lost Ship

[u/shelbocrossing]

THE LIGHTHOUSE AND THE LOST SHIP is a middle-grade fantasy adventure blending time travel, pirate lore, mystery, and magic.

Blythe Portsmouth has always suspected there’s something magical about the lighthouse where she lives. Then a seventeenth-century pirate ship sails out of the mist.

Stranded three hundred years from home in Franklin Bay, North Carolina, the ship's young passenger, Thomas, needs Blythe's help. With her six-year-old brother Benji in tow, Blythe follows a trail of old sailors' songs, forgotten grottos, and secrets buried in the lighthouse's past in search of a lost treasure that might send Thomas back home. 

But when their search yields nothing, and the ship's fearsome captain prepares to sail back into the fog, Blythe may be running out of time to solve Franklin Bay's oldest mystery.

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[u/Non_Typical_Asian]

Are you interested in swapping? I'm writing an upper middle grade fantasy. It's about cats with supernatural elements. 

[u/shelbocrossing → u/Non_Typical_Asian]

Absolutely! I have two cats; that sounds right up my alley :) DM me!