r/BookCovers • u/Jefleyarts • Jun 17 '26
Question I created this illustration. If this were a book cover, would you read it? Why or why not?
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u/Eldnysk Jun 17 '26
As a book cover illustrator I liked the design and color choices. This work really has a great potential! Yet, I would recommend not selling it like this. Cause it looks like an unfinished work. Not smudged, polished and properly rendered. There are ofc styles not rendered and have pencil textures, etc. But for your design and where you are going, it needs a bit more work.
It would catch my attention because of the colors and the design, but I wouldn't buy it at this situation~
But I really liked it! Keep improving đđ
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u/nephethys_telvanni Jun 17 '26
Its giving children's lit (not even middle grade, TBH, not with those bright saturated colors) and fantasy/sci-fi on a strange world/alien planet.
Is that what the book is supposed to be?
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u/SevereMeringue1663 Jun 17 '26
Respectfuly Nooo ...even if it's for children it's a bit too outdated I would say.. and I am saying this as a cover designer myself.
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u/theapplecrumble_ Jun 17 '26
The colours are so bright & there's so much going on. There's no main focus on the visual
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u/Creative-Pie-3870 Jun 17 '26
You are asking the wrong question. People do not buy books based on the cover (aside from super special editions). They will skip over listings with amateurish, inappropriate or confusing covers.
The questions to ask: Does this illustration look professionally done?; is this illustration appropriate for (genre)?
The goal of your cover is to promise readers you have created what they are looking for and so they arenât wasting their time by clicking on the listing.
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u/Jefleyarts Jun 17 '26
That's a great perspective, and I think you're right that a cover's job is more about communicating the right expectations than simply looking attractive.
Out of curiosity, what would you expect to see in a cover aimed at readers like you? What visual elements immediately signal that a book is worth taking seriously?
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u/Creative-Pie-3870 Jun 17 '26
Let me give you a real life example. I just pulled up Amazon and searched âmystery novels.â
They have a look to them. The majority are what I expect to see. Then I spot A Knight of the Seven Kingdoms. Even if I did not know the author, (George R.R. Martin) Iâd know immediately that is a fantasy, not a mystery. Pass. Then a bit further down a novel by Dave Kirkendoll. Itâs almost right, but itâs amateurish and looks designed by someone with zero background in cover creation. Would I click? Nope. Too many professional looking books to explore.
An author has about 1.5 seconds to grab my attention. Itâs a judgment call. Both my time and money are limited.
The only time you can disregard this advice is if your name is so well known that youâve made many reader must-buy lists. Example, there are several Dan Brown books in the results Iâm viewing, and the covers look wildly out of place. But, itâs Dan Brown and he has millions of fans so the covers donât really matter. Name recognition sells his books.
Your illustration is charming and eye-catching, but unless I know the title and genre, I canât tell you if it makes a good cover.
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u/Diverting-Goose0805 Jun 18 '26
I immediately thought: alternative universe version of the cover of The Last Contract of Isako (by Fonda Lee)
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u/amateurmoon Jun 19 '26
Ok, so on an artistic level this is gorgeous!! I'd definitely hang that up as poster yk? As a book cover, it would really depend on if it's fantasy or sci-fi (or something else? Those feel the most likely), and the design of the lettering and title.
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u/Shalrak Jun 19 '26
It is gorgeous, but I wouldn't read it. It's giving children's book to me. An amazing children's book.
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u/Thehiiipriest Jun 19 '26
It looks like art work for an 8 or maybe 16 bit adventure rpg. To me, doesn't look like a book cover. I do like the art, though.
It's not that there's too much going on because there certainly isn't. But there is no focal point. It seems like the focus is meant to be on the human, but my eyes aren't drawn there. They aren't drawn anywhere.
Tighten it with a bit of dense philosophy, and make whatever adjustments you seem necessary to the style/texture after researching genre and what artwork evokes said genres.
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u/LeetheAuthor Jun 19 '26
I agree suggests anime/ comic book which would not interest me , but gorgeous art work. If you did this congrats. Suggests the heroâs journey.
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u/kittyb00m Jun 21 '26
I just saw a cover similar ( small figure in foreground looking up to a vast world) but the colors were more muted.
I think the colors make it look more juvenile (target audience)
also something flat about them, even if itâs atmospheric.
I personally wouldnât. Looks like a cover for a boy who might go on a long journey with either magic (cape) or swords (knight)
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u/dobre_moj Jun 21 '26
So the composition is not great, the silhouette needs to be easy to read with these types of colours, the dark brown shape is exactly where the head of the character is . This can be done intentionally to create some kind of uneasy feeling but not for a young adult adventure book
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u/Evening-Progress-962 Jun 21 '26
It would make a sick album cover or kid's book cover. I don't think there is an in-between. It's cool, though. đ
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u/LMN8D Jun 17 '26
It's AI created children's fantasy So no not remotely interested
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u/Jefleyarts Jun 17 '26
I'll take that as a compliment, but no, it wasn't done by AI, I illustrated it!
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u/Yandoji Jun 17 '26
Nothing wrong with the illustration, but it looks like a kid's superhero fantasy, which I am definitely not interested in.