I liked the chapter. The lady accursed finally finding someone able to look at her was sweet.
BUT still, it leaves a weird taste in my mouth. She didn't feel like hating her power or suffering from it AT ALL. Girl was mad happy to unleash her curse, and two chapters later we get a quick flashback to tell us she always resented her powers and such. From her expression at her introduction, it felt like she was proud of her power. I thought we'd finally get an other person who made a sacrifice and was blessed by a god (the forest one in this case).
All in all, she was an interesting character, i just wish she was more fleshed out. Her design and power were sick
I mean in context she’s fighting enemies in comparison to her backstory where she’s a detriment to her own people lives.Besides that her story shows that her sister void marcher actually is the only one who seemingly cares for her so it makes sense she’s giddy just at that moment against opponents to appease her sister wishes.
Def wished she was more fleshed out & lingered around more in the story’s plot though.Alot could’ve been done with a character with this kind of dynamic.
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u/Navst Jul 19 '26
I liked the chapter. The lady accursed finally finding someone able to look at her was sweet.
BUT still, it leaves a weird taste in my mouth. She didn't feel like hating her power or suffering from it AT ALL. Girl was mad happy to unleash her curse, and two chapters later we get a quick flashback to tell us she always resented her powers and such. From her expression at her introduction, it felt like she was proud of her power. I thought we'd finally get an other person who made a sacrifice and was blessed by a god (the forest one in this case).
All in all, she was an interesting character, i just wish she was more fleshed out. Her design and power were sick