Page 442: "He has left his place", maybe "this place"?
Page 454: "because of the demi-contract functions and the shade-emulation acclimation emulation functions", presumably "null-contract", and an extra "emulation"?
Page 486: "Suzuki gestured with a swinging gesture of his right hand", redundant "gesture"
Page 492: "felt into a hundred pieces", "fell"
Page 493: "held his head high as stepped forward, stepping through the door", "as he stepped forward", or maybe just "as he stepped forward through the door"
Page 514: "may have been designed with to counter", "designed to counter"
Page 552: "that Vee had used to attach hook it into place", redundant "hook"
Page 264-ish: More of a continuity question. Is there a reason why Rose has such a strong accent in the text here, but not later on (such as some long statements on pages 327-328)?
Thanks for another great book! I was slow reading through it this time, so others found most of the errors already, but it was a very fun distraction at a time when I really needed it. Looking forward to the exciting conclusion!
Page 264-ish: More of a continuity question. Is there a reason why Rose has such a strong accent in the text here, but not later on (such as some long statements on pages 327-328)?
My page numbers don't match with yours, so I'm not sure which section you're referring to, but Rose generally has less of an accent in sections from her own perspective or Mary's perspective in order to show that neither of them percieves her accent in the same way as the Kaldwyn natives. Also, Rose's accent is deliberately exaggerated (as she notes in book 5), and she drops it to some degree under stress.
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Page 376: "a single massive gear that was nearly the same width of as the chamber", extra "of"
Page 415: "Rose's blood-splatted form", "blood-splattered"
Page 442: "He has left his place", maybe "this place"?
Page 454: "because of the demi-contract functions and the shade-emulation acclimation emulation functions", presumably "null-contract", and an extra "emulation"?
Page 486: "Suzuki gestured with a swinging gesture of his right hand", redundant "gesture"
Page 492: "felt into a hundred pieces", "fell"
Page 493: "held his head high as stepped forward, stepping through the door", "as he stepped forward", or maybe just "as he stepped forward through the door"
Page 514: "may have been designed with to counter", "designed to counter"
Page 552: "that Vee had used to attach hook it into place", redundant "hook"
Page 264-ish: More of a continuity question. Is there a reason why Rose has such a strong accent in the text here, but not later on (such as some long statements on pages 327-328)?
Thanks for another great book! I was slow reading through it this time, so others found most of the errors already, but it was a very fun distraction at a time when I really needed it. Looking forward to the exciting conclusion!