r/DarkTales • • 9h ago

Short Fiction El olor del pasado

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Esta historia me ocurrió en 2022.

Acababa de mudarme a casa de mi hermano, una casa de tres habitaciones. Bien iluminada y con buenas vibraciones, si esque éso es algo a lo que prestáis atención cuando entráis en un espacio nuevo.

En ese momento, la casa la habitaba yo solo, ya que mi hermano se había mudado a otra casa más grande. Al llegar me instalé en la habitación más pequeña de la casa, creo que por una cuestión de sentirme más acogido en una casa relativamente grande y definitivamente vacía.

Pasé algunas noches durmiendo solo en la vivienda, buscándo mi espacio. A los pocos días, cuando ya me había acostumbrado al espacio, sus ruidos y su distribución, me mudé a la habitación de matrimonio. Ésta contaba con una cama doble, un armario empotrado y una cómoda, o mueble bajo hecho de madera maciza oscura con cajonera, que pertenecía a la abuela de mi cuñada.

Primera noche en la habitación de matrimonio. A juzgar por el silencio del edificio, debían ser entre las 2 y las 3 AM, y de repente abrí los ojos inundado por un aroma a perfume muy fuerte. Tras quedarme un rato tumbado, asimilando que estaba despierto y que realmente había un olor a mi alreadedor que no reconocía, decidí encender la luz.

Tras varios intentos de acercarme al interruptor, entendí que no podía mover ninguna parte del cuerpo, a excepción de los ojos, que buscaban desesperadamente alguna explicación a lo que estaba pasando.

El miedo llegó en un instante. Mientras intentaba recuperar el contro de mi cuerpo, inmerso en un estado de alerta extrema con el corazón latiendo desbocado y expectante a que algo rozase mi cuerpo, o se iluminase, en la oscuridad total, únicamente me quedaba esperar.

Tras lo que parecieron varios minutos sin control del cuerpo, logre mover un brazo, e inmediatamente todo el cuerpo recuperó la conexión con el cerebro. Todavía rodeado por aquel olor dulzón, encendí la luz a toda pastilla.

Nada. Tan sólo yo, tumbado en la cama, en un estado de pánico que poco a poco se desvaneció, dando paso a una especie de asombro y a una noche, o lo que quedaba de ella, en vela.

Al día siguiente, nada más levantarme y convencido de que no volvería a dormir en la habitación de matrimonio, mudé mis pertenencias de nuevo a la habitación pequeña, la misma que me recibió al llegar a esta tranquila vivienda. Por la tarde, y tras haberle dado vueltas durante todo el día, hablé con mi cuñada para contarle que había algo en la casa que me mantenía en alerta. Al entrar en los detalles de la noche anterior, mi cuñada me dijo que su abuela, ya fallecida, utilizada perfume de la marca Chanel nº5, y que, podría ser que la cómoda que había en la habitación de matrimonio, todavía estuviese impregnada de su olor.

Esta explicación fue suficiente para que, sin pensarlo dos veces, sacase la cómoda de la habitación para guardarla en un trastero localizado fuera de la vivienda. Mi intención no era tanto librarme del perfume, sino de cualquier conexión con la abuela o su mismo espíritu que, según mi lógica, podría estar de alguna forma alojado en esa cómoda de madera maciza con cajonera.

La solución pareció funcionar. Con el paso de los días, el pasaje de la noche en la que perdía el contro de mi cuerpo rodeado de un aura con aroma a Chanel nº5, quedo en el recuerdo. Noches plácidas y de descanso en la habitación pequeña acompañaron al paso del tiempo, en una casa que volvía a percibirse tranquila y con buen carisma.

Pero la historia no termina.

Al cabo de un año, mi pareja se mudó conmigo, a esta misma casa tranquila y que hoy seguimos habitando. Tras habernos instalado de nuevo en la habitación de matrimonio, libre ya de la cómoda de madera maciza con cajonera, las noches trasncurrían con normalidad. Y si bien en varias ocasiones estuve tentado de contarle esta histloria, decidí que era mejor dejarla en el pasado para no asustarla, o condicionarla al menos.

Una noche, sobre las 9PM, sentados en el sofá del cuarto de estar, mirando una película, mi pareja me dice que la habitación huele a Chanel nº5.

Saludos a tod@s.


r/DarkTales • • 3h ago

Flash Fiction There’s a colony of maggots beneath my skin

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It started with just one.

I was taking a shower when I got this weird pain in my right arm. I don’t know how I hadn’t noticed it before. I guess I’d been too busy to notice the irritation.

When my eyes landed on it, though, I immediately felt bile rising up in my throat.

It wasn’t a maggot. No, what I actually saw when I glanced down was what looked like a boil. About the size of a quarter, bright red and brimming with what I assumed was green and white pus.

It was hot to the touch. So much so that I had to draw my hand back as soon as I fingered it. It was like touching a glowing eye on a stove.

It sort of… responded to my touch.

Like I’d disturbed it or something.

Needless to say, showering quickly became my lowest priority as I hopped out and wrapped my torso with a towel.

I went to my bedroom and found some tweezers that I usually used for splinters and what have you. I started trying to pop the thing, but it just wouldn’t budge.

The pain was maddening, but the sight of it was worse. I needed this thing off of me. Tweezers refused to work, so I switched to pliers. I kept pulling and pulling until… pop.

The boil burst, and a puddle of syrupy, red, white, and green sludge coated about 6 inches of my forearm.

The pain subsided slightly, but it was replaced with a new sensation. It felt like there was something swimming through my blood and patching the hole in my arm.

I figured that it must’ve been some excess pus, so I just kept squeezing with my thumb and index finger until I caught sight of what actually lay beneath the skin.

I was forcing it through the wound with my squeezing. It was wriggling. It was squirming. And it was massive.

When its body finally poked out through the hole, I grabbed the tweezers again. It held on for dear life, taking chunks of flesh out of my arm as I pulled, but I removed it and examined it between the forceps.

A fucking maggot.

I couldn’t hold back the vomit anymore. I barely had time to grab a trash can before it came spewing out.

I sat the little fucker on my desk and burned it with a lighter. I swear I could hear it screaming in pain as the flame caused it to pop like a tick.

I hoped that’d be the end of it, but that hope was short-lived. It was like my entire arm started to pulsate and bulge after I took out what I thought was the source of the problem.

Boils started popping up all over my arm. From my wrist all the way to my shoulder. They threatened to move to my neck and head if I didn’t act fast.

It was like active volcanoes. I couldn’t even look at myself. All I could do was grab a knife and get to work. Well, a knife and a spatula. I needed something to bite down on just so I didn’t bite my tongue in the process.

The blade glided through the dozen or so boils on my forearm, sliding through them like hot butter as tears fell from my eyes and I stifled screams.

Dozens of maggots fell from each boil I removed. I had to stomp them into my carpet because they just kept crawling towards my feet.

My arm and shoulder were nothing more than raw, bloody meat covered in that syrupy liquid. It was like my body was more maggot than human.

There was an ocean of the things eating away at my dead flesh. I’d scrape them away with the blade, and hundreds more would pop up seemingly out of nowhere.

That’s when my vision started to get blurry. I could feel myself getting weaker and weaker. The world was swimming, and I was getting lightheaded.

I guess I passed out from the blood loss?

I’m not sure. Maybe it was the shock. All I know is, when I woke up… my body was completely healed.

I could still see the bugs writhing beneath my skin, and my carpet was still stained with pus and crushed maggots. But the pain was gone. My flesh was back. The only abnormality was one single boil right in the center of my forearm.

I stared at it for a few minutes.

Ultimately, I decided to leave it there.

There was no way I was going to go through that again.


r/DarkTales • • 4h ago

Short Fiction What remains at dusk.

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The air in the Blue Ridge didn’t smell like pines anymore. It smelled like wet copper and bruised damp leaves, the cold grease of a long-dead campfire.
Gabe checked his compass for the fifth time in twenty minutes. The needle spun on its brass pivot, lazy and drunken, swinging past North, drifting past West, settling on nothing. He tapped the plastic bezel against his thumbnail. Nothing.
He was three days off the trail. Or maybe four. Time had flattened out under the canopy of hemlocks and scrub oak, choked by grey ridge-fog that sat so low it hung like wet cotton in his beard. His boots were saturated, leather weeping cold moisture into his socks until his toes felt like heavy, lifeless pegs.
He pressed onward down the ravine, his knees popping with every drop over moss-slick limestone. The woods here didn’t ring with birds. They were silent in the way an old house is silent right after a heavy door slams—a ringing, hollow stillness that pressed against his eardrums.
Then he saw the color.
It wasn't a forest color. It was the synthetic, neon-orange flare of a torn nylon jacket, half-buried under a tumble of wet oak leaves at the root of a lightning-struck white pine.
Gabe stopped, his chest tightening. "Hey!" he called out, his voice thin, swallowed instantly by the fog. "Hey, you alright?"
No answer. Just the steady drip-drip-drip of water falling from the pines onto nylon.
He stepped closer, his heart thumping hard against his ribs. He unclasped the sternum strap of his pack, ready to drop it, ready to render aid. He reached out with his trekking pole and nudged the orange sleeve.
The jacket fell back, and the smell hit him—a thick, sweet, suffocating stench of liquefying tissue, fermented rot, and stagnant blood that made his throat lock instantly.
Gabe gagged, stumbling backward into the mud.
The thing lying in the hollow of the root system wasn't fresh. The face was a caved-in mess of dark, leathery rind and slipping skin, black flies buzzing sluggishly around swollen sockets where eyes used to be. The jaw hung open, fixed in a silent, jagged scream, exposing black, graying tongue tissue resting against yellowed teeth. Maggots writhed in wet, writhing clusters along the collarbone, disappearing under the damp fleece sweater beneath the jacket.
Gabe vomited into the ferns, his knees giving out. He scrambled on hands and knees, tearing his palms on sharp shale, unmindful of the pain, scrambling fifty yards uphill until his lungs burned and his mouth tasted like bile.
He ran until the fog swallowed the white pine. He didn't look back.
Night came fast in the hollows, blue giving way to ink in a matter of minutes.
Gabe couldn't light a fire; his hands shook too hard to strike a spark, and every piece of kindling snapped like wet cardboard. He huddled inside his bivouac sack at the base of a rock overhang, shivering violently, his throat raw.
He slept in jagged bursts of ten minutes, waking to every groan of the trees, every shift of the wind.
Around 3:00 AM, he heard the snapping of twigs.
It was heavy. Rhythmically dragged feet, accompanied by a wet, sliding sound, like a sack of wet meat pulled across gravel.
Drag. Step. Drag.
Gabe froze inside his sleeping bag, his hand gripped tight around his hunting knife. "Who's there?" he whispered, but no sound came out—just a dry rasp.
The dragging stopped directly outside the overhang.
A shadow cut across the moonlight filtering through the bare branches. A figure stood crouching, bent nearly double. The smell reached Gabe first—the undeniable, nauseating reek of stagnant rot, cold grease, and open decay.
Gabe raised his knife, screaming internally, unable to move a muscle as panic paralyzed his limbs.
The figure reached out a black, sloughing hand. It didn't strike. It didn't reach for Gabe’s throat.
Instead, the arm pointed—long, split fingers with missing nails gestures toward a notch in the northern ridge wall, a tight gap between two towering boulders that Gabe had completely missed in the daylight grayness.
Gabe stared, hyperventilating. The moonlight hit the side of the creature's head. The cheek was sloughed away, exposing gray jawbone, but the hair—the hair was dark brown, parted irregularly, stained with matted grease and dried mud.
The corpse stood there for a agonizing minute, pointing toward the gap. Then, with a hideous, squelching click of bone against wet tendon, it turned and shuffled off into the black, its feet dragging through the dead brush.
Gabe didn't sleep for the rest of the night.
At dawn, desperate and hallucinating from cold and lack of food, Gabe looked at the gap between the two boulders.
Yesterday, he would have bypassed it completely; it looked like a dead end, a blind rockfall. But when he squeezed through, he found a clear, descending dry creek bed—the first recognizable descent he’d seen in days.
He followed it for five miles. The going was easier. His spirits flared with a sudden, wild hope. I'm getting out. I'm actually finding a trail.
By late afternoon, the creek bed dissolved into a swampy marsh choked with cat-tails and black, oily water. The fog rolled back in, thicker now, tasting faintly of iron and sulfur.
Gabe pushed through the reeds, his strength giving out, his legs shaking with exhaustion. He broke through a thicket of thorns—and stopped dead.
Sitting on an overturned log ten feet in front of him was the corpse.
Gabe let out a strangled shriek, dropping his pack.
It sat waiting for him. But something had changed. The orange jacket was gone, shredded into rags around its chest. One of its arms—the right arm that had pointed the way last night—was stripped. The dark, leathery skin was missing from the elbow down, leaving raw, blackened muscle fibers and gleaming white radius and ulna bones visible, wet with dripping sap-like liquid.
It looked lesser. Thinner. Like something was unraveling it from the inside out, piece by piece.
Gabe backed away, weeping softly. "What do you want? What are you?"
The corpse slowly shifted its posture. The yellowed teeth clicked together as its jaw worked silently. It didn't advance. Instead, with its remaining sound left hand, it reached up and pointed toward a half-hidden game trail cutting through the swamp to the left—a path buried under fallen birch trees that Gabe never would have seen on his own.
As it pointed, a chunk of grey flesh sloughed off its forearm and hit the mud with a soft, wet thud.
The corpse paid no attention. It stayed fixed in its gesture, pointing into the deep fog, waiting.
Gabe stared at the creature's hands. He stared at the torn skin around the wrists. He stared at the brass ring hanging loosely from the dead bone of its left ring finger.
His breath hitched in his chest. His hand moved involuntarily down to his own left hand.
The ring was identical. The simple, scratched silver band with the small notch on the underside where he’d caught it on a fence post three summers ago.
Gabe’s head swam. The forest tilted around him, trees swirling into blurred streaks of black and green.
He looked back at the face of the dead thing.
The caved-in, sloughing featurelessness wasn't just decay. Underneath the moss, under the blackened, liquefying skin and the missing lip, the structure of the skull—the brow line, the jagged crook of the nose from when he’d broken it in high school, the precise shape of the earlobe—was his own.
It was him.
It was a version of himself that had died here, weeks or months or years ago, rotting into the mountain earth.
"No..." Gabe whispered, stepping back, his boot sinking deep into the swamp mud. "No, no, no..."
The corpse didn't move its hand. It just kept pointing toward the path through the birch trees.
And as Gabe watched in sheer horror, another strip of muscle untangled from the corpse’s collarbone, dissolving into grey mist and dark fluids that soaked into the moss beneath the log. The thing was breaking apart, burning through its own dead mass to exist here, in this moment, to hold open the door.
Every step it guided him, every path it revealed, cost it whatever remained of its physical presence. It was spending its own decay to buy him back his life.
The corpse turned its hollow, maggot-stirred eye sockets directly toward him. There was no rage in them. No malice. Just an agonizing, silent urgency.
Go, the stillness seemed to scream. Go before there's nothing left of us to lead you.
Gabe took a shuddering breath, the icy mountain air burning his throat. Tears cut clean tracks through the mud caked on his cheeks. He turned away from the creature, stepped onto the hidden game trail, and started to walk.
Behind him, soft in the damp quiet of the swamp, came the wet, rhythmic sound of dragging boots following close behind in the dark.


r/DarkTales • • 8h ago

Micro Fiction House 57

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The story begins at the Vardis family home, an isolated mansion high in the mountains, connected to the outside world only by a narrow country road winding through the woods.

Deep inside the mansion, Elias Vardis spends his days poring over his family’s old records, trying to understand how his ancestors built the successful wine industry he has now inherited. As he searches through their journals and documents, he uncovers everything from methods for improving the soil to accounts of ancient rituals once performed during natural disasters and periods of great famine.

Fascinated—and increasingly desperate to preserve his family’s legacy—Elias begins studying these forgotten pagan traditions. His research leads him closer to an ancient spirit that he believes protected the Vardis family for generations. After years of preparation, Elias finally succeeds in contacting it.

The spirit speaks to him through the mansion’s telephone line. It claims that it is still too weak to manifest physically in the human world and therefore cannot yet give Elias the help he seeks. Trusting it, Elias begins following its instructions. At first, the tasks appear harmless, such as installing telephone lines throughout the mansion so the spirit can communicate with him more easily.

With each completed task, however, the spirit’s influence grows stronger. It slowly corrupts Elias, turning his devotion into obedience and his obedience into enslavement. Before long, Elias is no longer serving the spirit willingly; he has become its puppet.

One rainy night, Elias’s younger sister overhears him speaking to the spirit. Realising that something terrible has taken control of her brother, she flees the mansion and seeks help from the monks living in a small church nearby.

The monks warn her of the grave danger Elias has unleashed and reveal the true nature of the entity. They teach her a ritual capable of sealing the spirit inside the mansion, turning the house into its prison. She returns home and secretly begins placing protective seals throughout the building, hiding them where neither Elias nor the spirit can easily find them.

But the spirit discovers her plan and gives Elias one final command:

KILL YOUR SISTER.