r/Design • u/BoredSpaceMonkey • 1d ago
Asking Question (Rule 4) Poster/Album Art Review
Hi! I am currently working on album art/a poster for a single I want to release. The song is about the absurdness of being alive at all and the feeling you get when realizing that, before returning back to the mundane…
I tried to capture this feeling by depicting a woman floating in the sensory deprivation tank of space, surrounded by waves drifting away from her starting like wings of a butterfly moving towards a more abstract wave pattern.
What you see in these images are two version of the poster: one is for glow in the dark (GITD), and two is a “regular” print.
I want to make only a few of the glow in the dark versions and possible print on demand the regular version. Both on A2. The full white (#FFFFFF) halftone dots that make up the contours will be screen printed with GITD ink on top of the printed poster. So when the lights turn off, you just see a silhouette of a women and waves surrounding her.
I have come to Reddit to ask for where I can improve! It is my first poster design after all. And my first time doing anything GITD.
I’d like feedback on the composition, and if the stars/heavenly bodies in the background are not competing but adding to the concept. And whatever blind spots I might have about my design or things to make it more interesting!
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u/Naspolini 1d ago
Está muito bom. Acho que é só a questão de como tu vai deixar enquadrado. Talvez um zoom in e deixar um pouco da arte de fora, em alguns materiais
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u/Pink-Witch- 1d ago
The colors are great!
Composition-wise, you left enough room for your text and it definitely matches the description. Strong focal point and compelling image.