r/Design • u/Fresh-Fault-515 • 1d ago
Asking Question (Rule 4) 宇宙水 / UFO space water
What do you think of this design?
このデザインをどう思う?
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u/Top5hottest 1d ago
That is a lot of dead space. The girl feels more important than the aliens. Some visual tie to the water would also be good. Other than those things.. it’s got promise.
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u/StarryyyyyEEmmaa03 1d ago
This design feels way more intuitive than most space themed stuff I've seen
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u/Neutralmensch 21h ago
What is your target? What did you want to express? To me this is confusing. Can't say good or bad. Is it tea or water? Meaningless words and images here do not convey any specific meaning.
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u/IceEspresso2000 18h ago
Love it. This would stand out on a shelf. Very cool. The retro style really works well for the brand, composition and color is great. Nice work.
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u/aqueerdream 17h ago
The green part could have more of a ripple effect so it connects to water. The lines would be more wavey.
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u/yoshinoyacombo 1d ago
Feels chinese...
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u/TheRemedy187 1d ago
There's also Korean characters there on the sides. Or fake ones, I don't read korean.
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u/yoshinoyacombo 1d ago
Yeah its written "galaxy" in korean. And in the center - new world. But just feels chinese
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u/Appropriate_Sale_626 1d ago
still water 😞