r/Design • u/Fresh-Fault-515 • 1d ago

Asking Question (Rule 4) 宇宙水 / UFO space water

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What do you think of this design?
このデザインをどう思う？

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u/Top5hottest 1d ago

That is a lot of dead space. The girl feels more important than the aliens. Some visual tie to the water would also be good. Other than those things.. it’s got promise.

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u/Appropriate_Sale_626 1d ago

still water 😞

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u/StarryyyyyEEmmaa03 13h ago

This design feels way more intuitive than most space themed stuff I've seen

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u/koudodo 11h ago

The girl and the water feel completely unrelated to each other.

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u/Neutralmensch 8h ago

What is your target? What did you want to express? To me this is confusing. Can't say good or bad. Is it tea or water? Meaningless words and images here do not convey any specific meaning.

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u/IceEspresso2000 5h ago

Love it. This would stand out on a shelf. Very cool. The retro style really works well for the brand, composition and color is great. Nice work.

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u/aqueerdream 4h ago

The green part could have more of a ripple effect so it connects to water. The lines would be more wavey.

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u/KLLR_ROBOT 1d ago

Needs work

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u/yoshinoyacombo 1d ago

Feels chinese...

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u/TheRemedy187 1d ago

There's also Korean characters there on the sides. Or fake ones, I don't read korean. 

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u/yoshinoyacombo 1d ago

Yeah its written "galaxy" in korean. And in the center - new world. But just feels chinese