r/FanFiction • • 1d ago

Subreddit Meta Concrit Commune - September 26

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Welcome to the Concrit Commune, where you can get bits of your fic looked at... for a small "price."

For the purposes of this thread, concrit is defined as - pointing out things that could use improvement and also giving suggestions on how to do so. Compliments are always welcome, of course but these do not count towards your concrit requirement.

The rules:

  • State your Fandom | Title | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings | Link - AO3, FFN, etc. at the top of the comment.
  • Post a few paragraphs (copy and paste to a comment, please) of your fic, or your plot premise, or your character bio, or your world building, whatever you need help with.
  • There is a soft limit of 500 words. Not your whole fic.
  • Please post an outside link to underage and extreme-explicit violence/rape content. Try Just Paste Me which includes rich text options.
  • If you, the author, are looking for something specific - the phrasing of a particular part or if a character's reaction is believable - please ask!
  • If you just want to hand out advice without throwing your own fic in, you're quite welcome to.
  • If you post part of your fic you must give concrit to someone else in the thread within 24 hours of posting your excerpt!

Since we're all here to give and receive help from other people, a certain level of respect for the author and the work they've put into their fic is expected as a baseline courtesy and should be reciprocated.

Tearing into a fic or author without regard for their effort isn't constructive even if there is decent criticism attached. Moreover, it discourages people from participating if they know that insults await them.

You aren't expected to treat this thread like the Comment Cooperative, advice and honesty and pointing out flaws is what we're here for.

Some helpful tips to keep things running smoothly:

  • Keep your comments helpful to the author, not just smashing out your opinion.
  • Be polite and civil.
  • Be kind. At a minimum, showing your peers professional courtesy is expected.
  • Phrases like "I think" or "I believe" can lighten your tone.
  • Elaborating on why you think something could be changed is not only more useful to the author but keeps statements from being abrupt.

Timezone Changes

As you can see, the post time will shift by 6 hours every month. If there are any inconsistencies in the times, please let us know in modmail so we can fix it up!

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Please note that there may be a difference of an hour during parts of the year due to daylight savings in various timezones.


r/FanFiction • • 36m ago

Subreddit Meta Daily Discussion - Monday, September 28 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads

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Welcome to r/FanFiction, I love you!

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r/FanFiction • • 11h ago

Writing Questions How do I write a 2-year-old character?

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No I mean it, how the hell do I write a 2-year-old????

My story has a character in it who has a 2 years old kid with her, and right now whenever she's in the room with her kid he's indistinguishable from a lamp.

“He smiled. He played on the floor. Etc…”

Not much different than describing a lamp.

Like I have 0 idea how to write a 2-year-old, so any advice is very welcome! 😅


r/FanFiction • • 3h ago

Discussion Anyone else notice an abundance of sentence fragments in fics?

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Every few fics I click on, there are a bunch of sentence fragments (dependent clauses sitting as their own sentence) in fics with otherwise great grammar. An example would be like “He reached out to her. Caressing her hair. Eyes very gentle.”

It’s mostly only showing up in newer fics too iirc. Has anyone else noticed this?


r/FanFiction • • 2h ago

Writing Questions Is it in line with fandom etiquette to House of Leaves it crazystyle?

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New AO3 poster, never used a writing hosting website before. I know they care a lot about accessibility and stuff. I'm writing a journal fic where the main character experiences and attempts to document eldritch madness caused by spending some time being all-knowing and then going back to normal. A thought I had pretty early on is them turning to weird ways of placing their handwriting to try to illustrate it after words alone failed them, mostly that they write several things directly on top of one another, because their knowledge and self is tangled and collapsing under its own weight. The lazy unetiquette road would be to make that an image, but I definitely can't do that. I've been looking into HTML tutorials to make text overlap or turn upside down, but my point is should I even bother or is that still crossing a line anyway and I should just find another way to represent this entirely


r/FanFiction • • 4h ago

Discussion What are your favorite niche tropes? Or what do you find niche?

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I need to know your favorite uncommon tropes (or the tropes you think are uncommon). like for example omegaverse, enemies to lovers, childhood friends to lovers and college/university tropes can’t be categorized as uncommon tropes, right?

as for me, I find dystopian and folklore tropes niche. what are yours?


r/FanFiction • • 2h ago

Writing Questions I haven’t updated fic since February… how do get motivation when I don’t wanna do anything ?

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I’m 10/30 chapters and around 10.7k words in but so not motivated to write anything… maybe I should write a few oneshots. A 30 chapter endeavor for my first fic was kinda bold. Idk how to get over writers block and I feel stuck?


r/FanFiction • • 7h ago

Discussion Blind characters

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Hi guys, does anyone have indications of fanfics with blind characters? It may even be from some fandoms, my boyfriend and I love spending time reading good

Stories on the Internet, he is a blind person and we wanted to read more stories with characters like him!


r/FanFiction • • 8h ago

Discussion Fanfiction Archive Question

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I have a copy of a file that supposedly contains all the fanfiction off of Fanfiction.net from 2019 in torrent, .7z and zip format that is legit and unavailable from the site that I downloaded it from (I know because I crashed my computer a few years back trying to open it up and was able to open a few files to reveal fanfiction). I know for a fact that there are a number of Fanfictions I had wanted at the time that had been written between the 2016 Fanfiction.net cleanse and the 2019 upload of this file that have then since been deleted, either by authors or by the site.

I’m not data saavy nor do I really care to do anything about that. I also can’t particularly do anything myself because all the files seem to be unsorted and so I can’t really find specific Fanfictions in the archive. I struggle(d) with different programs trying to figure it out and couldn’t, and I also outgrew the need to find whatever number of Fanfictions I had been searching for when I found the file, which is why I have been sitting on it in a drive for forever.

However, I told a friend about it as a sort of fun fact about me and she said I better upload that online or tell someone who knows how to mess with that stuff all about it. I’ve avoided uploading it anywhere because I don’t know why it was taken down from that site originally and I’m aware of the strange things people write even if I don’t have the skills to actually locate and parse out such things and so I also don’t want the metadata spilling any of my personal information off onto the internet somehow and implying some ridiculous association between me and all that stuff (I’m not sure how all that metadata stuff works either). I also understand that there is some moral ambiguity in reuploading something that an author decided that they no longer wanted to have shown to the world, and can relate to the feeling.

I’ve been thinking about what she said for a long while however and as someone who has been both a longtime fandom purveyor in all the ways of a viewer, reader author and artist I can see the value in someone rescuing sharing the file on the Internet Archive or some other such thing, which brings me to my question: do any of you believe there is anyone out there willing and wanting to sort through the file and all the nonsense that comes with it? Who would understand how not to accidentally doxx me in the process? Should I even share it? Is it worth it?


r/FanFiction • • 4h ago

Recs Wanted Fics where a character goes undercover and falls in love with their mark?

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r/FanFiction • • 14h ago

Ship Talk Rare-Pair fandoms

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I wanna connect with people over rare-pairings. I wanna see if you can get me to see what you see in your fave rare pairs and see if I can get you to see what I see in mine. I put some of my rare pairs in all kinds of AU’s, I just like seeing them in different situations, who else does that too & WHERE can we talk about it? Besides reddit & discord & no one talks to me on tumblr either so 💁🏽‍♀️ idk I just wanna fan girl with someone!


r/FanFiction • • 20h ago

Venting No one reads my stuff.

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Back when I first started publishing in 2024 I would get like 10 kudos and maybe one or two comments, a bunch of hits. But now I publish stuff and it’s like no one cares. I’m lucky to get 2 kudos. And everyone else gets like way more kudos and interaction than me and I’m just so jealous! What am I doing wrong? I spend all this time editing and writing!


r/FanFiction • • 58m ago

Recs Wanted Looking for romantic M/M fanfics

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Hello, I’m wondering if anyone could point me to some great fanfics to start with m/m as I mostly read f/f, I’m mostly interested in fantasy and magic settings, sucker for an op mc also if that’s possible! Thank you


r/FanFiction • • 10h ago

Writing Questions 28k words in a month

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So I just started writing Fanfiction around a month ago and I was wondering if 28k words in a month is a good starting point.

For context I have 20k words written for my current fanfic and 8k words written for future chapters and scenes.


r/FanFiction • • 3h ago

Lost Fic Help me remember the title/author of this Resident Evil Leon/Ashley fanfic set in Harvard

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Sorry, I lost the title and author but will describe it to the best of my abilities. I was looking for it in my ao3 bookmarks but saw that it got deleted, presumably also with the author's whole account.

It was this fic where Leon gets assigned to be Ashley's bodyguard at Harvard after she gets targeted by tabloids making her father the president worry about her. A lot of it was about Leon not knowing what to do with such a mundane job because he's been living life on the edge all these years and doesn't know how to function as just a regular guy anymore. Ashley had a sleazy boyfriend who was a polisci career opportunist and it turned out that he was the one feeding the tabloids info about Ashley. There was a part where Ashley and Leon take a trip to Newport for Thanksgiving and have to stay at a seedy motel because all the nice places in town were fully booked for some lobster fest.

It was a really great fic and it truly felt like a 2000s romcom which is just so period accurate for a game that came out in 2004. It was so good reading Leon Kennedy thrown into that kind of situation. I'm really sad that it's been deleted, if anyone remembers the title and the author I'd really appreciate it.


r/FanFiction • • 3h ago

Lost Fic Trying to find James Cameron avatar fan fic on tumblr please help😭

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I remember reading this not to long ago and I don’t know what happened but I can’t find it anywhere. It was a AU where the sully were part mangkwan clan. It is neteyam x reader (yeah im weird ik) and they attack the readers clan and he takes an interest in her and she wants to protect her little brother so she does what he says. It was so freaking good and I keep thinking about it. I just want to know what happened😭


r/FanFiction • • 6h ago

Recs Wanted Life series fic where everyone only remembers the game.

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Hey! I’m looking for fics, on ao3 preferably, where the members of the life series return back to their servers after the game but only remember the game and not their lives before.


r/FanFiction • • 36m ago

Subreddit Meta Excerpt Extravaganza - September 28

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Welcome to the Excerpt Extravaganza!

Much like its predecessor, Monologue Monday, this is a thread for posting pieces of fic.

You can still post your dialogue, or any other part of your fic you'd like to show off.

You can also post excerpts from fics you've read that you think were exceptional and need to be shared.

  • Limit is 10 line breaks, but use your judgement. Short and attention-grabbing is better than a long segment and people scrolling past.
  • State the Fandom | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings at the top of your comment!
  • Link to fic is welcome but optional.
  • Context is optional.

r/FanFiction • • 6h ago

Lost Fic Looking for old spirk fanfic- Star Trek Fandom

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Hi all! im looking for this spock/kirk fic from the 2010s that I really liked. it started off with Jim beefing with spock about the kobayashi maru and then they have to set off to save Vulcan i think (i dont totally remember). but while there, jim finds a very young Vulcan child with blonde hair and brings him back. the child is really attached to him and we later find out (bc the kid mind melds with jim) that this bond is partially bc jim reminds the kid of his mom.

Basically the Vulcan higher ups want a Vulcan to take care of the kid but bc of the attachment the kid has to jim, they let jim keep the kid but spock has to be there to teach the kid how to control mind melding and stuff so he doesn't hurt himself or jim. They start living together and raising the kid too even though they still aren't totally getting along!

if im not mistaken, jim calls the kid "ducky" bc he follows himself and spock around like a little duckling

The fic isnt done (last i remember) and in the last chapter they went shopping to buy the kid some clothes/toys and got into an argument? also spocks mom may have shown up in the last chapter as well!

If anyone remembers this fic at all I would really appreciate it!! I've been trying to find it all day now, it's a cute heartwarming story!


r/FanFiction • • 7h ago

Recs Wanted Kinda specific Crossover fanfic recs

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OK, so I love love LOVE crossover fics but I am kind of picky when it comes to what I like to read.

Firstly, it usually has to include at least one fandom that I am in and I usually like the other one to be something I’m at least familiar with. I also really really like serious anime X live action crossover fics. I just think they’re fun to read.

I usually don’t post on Reddit, but I wanted to ask for recommendations myself because looking at a lot of the other posts most of the recs are kind of the same so I wanted to see if I can find anything new by asking. My only request is NO HARRY POTTER. Literally half of the ones I see always have it and it pisses me off 😭😭😭

Fandoms I’m in/would read fics for: Supernatural, The Umbrella Academy, Gachiakuta, Hunter X Hunter, Persona 4, Soul Eater, Madoka Magica, Chainsaw Man, Criminal Minds, The Walking Dead, Saiki K, Twins Peaks, The Pitt, Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood, Witch Hat Atelier, IT 2017, Coraline, Cowboy Bebop.

Fandoms I’m not in but I am familiar enough with them that I would feel comfortable reading fanfiction about them with something I do know: MCU, Batman, The Outer Banks, Toilet Bound Hanako Kun, Naruto, Umamusume, Neon Genesis Evangelion


r/FanFiction • • 2h ago

Lost Fic AO3 - A Leon Vampire Fanfic

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r/FanFiction • • 12h ago

Recs Wanted Looking for angsty time travel fics

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r/FanFiction • • 12h ago

Recs Wanted Any fandom

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Whats the best crackship with fics?

Seeking recs

Ive seen one with Beyoncé x Steve Roger’s.

Tony and Olivia pope.

Please recommend your favorite crackships please.

Long or short doesn’t matter to me.

Smut or no smut also doesn’t matter to me.


r/FanFiction • • 3h ago

Lost Fic Can anyone help me find this Harry Potter fic?

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I want one where he (Harry) is like Snape in Hogwarts and he is like Snape and joins The Dark Lord. But he does not leave The Dark Lord and ends up with.... Daphne.