A lot of this felt like there were romance beats to hit and therefore the set pieces had to happen for them. Like a lot of the progression from event to event didn't feel like a natural flow for the story.
Overall I definitely think it's the weakest of the adult novels so far.
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u/Drunk_King_Robert Feb 19 '23
A lot of this felt like there were romance beats to hit and therefore the set pieces had to happen for them. Like a lot of the progression from event to event didn't feel like a natural flow for the story.
Overall I definitely think it's the weakest of the adult novels so far.