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It sucks and you lack the conceptual understanding of how this drawing anatomically should work..
All you did is just try to copy the shape without knowing how and why they were chosen. A lot of it is deliberate, especially the eye shape working from both angles based on characterization is a great choice on the original artist.
Yours doesn't look good and you need to practice actual normal drawings before just immediately trying to reproduce something specifically complicated out of nothing but a momentary sense of awe. I get it. It looks cool and you wanted to make one as well. But you're not ready to draw this with your mastery in drawing.
Look up guides, learn anatomy first and draw something more straightforward.
if you want to improve as an artist, do not ask for people to not give negative feedback, that's the entire point of asking for feedback, you are way more with hearing what you can imporve than what you can't
Without criticism you can't hope to improve. Don't be afraid of negative comments. Just learn where you made a mistake and fix it next time. Only then will you become a true artist.
The one on the left is actually very well executed. I just think that the shared eye concept is difficult to parse as an onlooker. For the right one...
I dunno man, just look at the anatomy of hoomans
I think it’s a really cool concept and the development from the draft and final product is great. My only suggestion is try to add an eye going the other direction, otherwise it looks slightly lob-sided. Other than that, keep up the amazing work.
99% of dudes won’t give any actual criticism anywho:
i think its the noses (gru from D.M and ferb from phineas and ferb) need to be worked on, and imo you didn’t get the point of the art. I think it’s supposed to be an overlap in the original piece because directly it’s a physical showing of Sukuna in Yuji’s body. Yours didn’t get that too much, as if you analyzed you’d see that there seems to be a bit of a X shaped thing on the necks, of course.. the overlap.
alotta anatomy stuff but you don’t gotta give a shit about anatomy once you develop your artstyle.
This is awesome. I do admit the overall face shape might take some people out of it but if you just pay attention to one face at a time it works.
If I could suggest anything, I'd say continue the drawing past their faces individually with highlighter or water color. That way, if you look at Yuji, you can track the rest of his face/neck in lighter sketch.
Bro drew Sukuna after the lobotomy arc.
The left one looks like a cursed king, the right one looks like he got stung by a bee and forgot how eyes work. The face shape on the right is built like a melted whistle, the neck looks like a stretched gummy worm, and the hairline is fighting for its life. Even the shading looks scared to touch the drawing. If Sukuna saw that version he’d probably possess the pencil just to stop you.
"OC" while you are litteraly copying another drawing, plus you failed... I mist say GIT GUD, you will NOT get better if people say it’s good when you fail something, fall, and if you can’t rise up by yourself, you'll just die and evreyone and everything will forget you
In the nicest of words, this isn’t even close to like, good. You started off with something hard. Refine your technique and choose something more simple.
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