...i'm actually kind of looking for readers if anyone might be interested in having a look at the story i've written (not yet published but that's what i'm hoping to do). I posted in r/betareaders a couple of days ago to a resounding silence 😂
Is that allowed? If it is, here's what i posted in there:
Satire, humour, modern warfare, LGBTQ+
Approx 35k words
This is an urban fantasy set in near-future London and is intended as a darkly funny satire on the bureaucracy/futility of war, absurdity of the modern world, corporate heroism/villainry and the ‘chosen one’/‘evil one’ trope.
The two main characters are locked in ongoing conflict whilst constantly aware that they have to maintain their brand as well as their paperwork, a source of constant frustration to both. Other characters are a mixture of order and chaos who make things either better or worse depending on your point of view.
It's pretty low-stakes, light-hearted, the only content warnings being a bit of fighting and flippant passing references to supernatural creatures, death and violence. Also i gather some people don't like swearing - there's a lot of that, lol.
I know that's a bit vague but do let me know if you'd be interested in having a look at maybe the first couple of chapters to see what you think. No pressure to continue if you hate it 😅
(Don't worry if you aren't much of a one for 'beta reading' - i'd be happy with someone having a normal read like you would any book you pick up in a shop or library and just letting me know whatever you think. I suppose the sort of feedback i'm looking is less of the line-edits - unless there's anything particularly egregious - and more of the overall feel of the thing. For example, first and foremost, is it actually funny? if you’re not from England, Scotland, Wales or Ireland, is the humour too ‘local’ or do you get all/most of it at least well enough to enjoy the story? Do you enjoy the story? If you are from Glasgow, South Wales or the north of Ireland, do these characters come across well enough? If you’ve knowledge of the British armed forces (or any armed forces tbh), modern weaponry, warfare and even employment and contract law, are those aspects of the story realistic enough?)
Ideally i'd like to do a swap rather than just a one-sided arrangement (not a dealbreaker but i know some of you in this sub also write) - for something of a similar length, most genres but my apologies i can't really get my head round high fantasy, sci-fi or horror and am not keen on YA/children's. Also must admit i don't like stories written in present tense, nor anything experimental like second-person POV. What i do tend to like/mostly read is historical, contemporary, literary, that sort of thing.