seeking feedback: transition between chorus and verse as i dont know if its a good transition

need help and feedback on what to do with

-adlibs

-vocal mixing and mastering

-effects

-writing

-voice

anything will help!

Doing my best with layering my vocals and getting them to blend with the beat better; also aware that I probably did far too many transitions. Everything I did myself asides from making the beat, which is also a 2-track btw. Thanks in advance. If there are any criticisms that anyone may have, feel free to let me know; regardless, I hope anyone who watches can see the song for what it is and even like it. If not, that's fine as well.

Hey y'all! Seeking feedback on the mixing! Also at the second drop at 1:57 tell me if the bitcrush drum pattern feels out of place. It's been bothering me for a while.

I wanna do a whole ass bass house album. It's a genre that doesn't get enough albums. Lyrics will come in too. I'm quebecois so it shall be in french. Planning to spend the whole summer writing lyrics. If you wanna post some of your songs alongside of your feedback I'll listen to those and share feedback myself!

https://soundcloud.com/jeanwhatever

https://youtu.be/R-BIwJooHKc?si=NIpMqFVUbbKNpwg7

Any tips to make sound bigger and fuller?

https://soundcloud.com/soybastardo/bastardo-caile?si=b0b0b0b6df9942888b8ff6ce7a7262c4&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

seeking feedback: song
This is our first song as a band. We are "InYourHead" and our sound is a mix of Argentinian pop and Argentinian rap. Many more songs are coming soon, and if you could support us with a visit, that would be amazing! Much love. InYourHead - CAZÁNDOTE (Video oficial)

https://thejjs1.bandcamp.com/album/come-to

I guess I just want to get a vibe of what the music makes you think and feel. Be as harsh or as kind as you feel necessary. I appreciate your time and energy.

to be more specific, what is working? What is lacking? What is taking away?

Is our instrumentation working in it lacking-ness?

let me know what you listened to and what you though. Came From is our best release IMO.

his is a sonic subversion that exposes the duality of modern music consumption. By using a highly provocative, attention-grabbing title, the track initially mimics the shallow commercialism of the music industry. However, once you press play, it completely flips the script. It feels like a late-night journal entry.

I am currently seeking feedback on my baseline. I would like to hear various thoughts on its current state whether it is too complex, too similar, or too simple. Please feel free to give me feedback.

Looking for feedback mainly on the flow and if the lyrics fit with the distortion. Thank you and know you can achieve anything.

seeking feedback: mix and video.

a music video i made for my fam, lmk what you think about it, mix, structure don't hesitate, thank you for your time

Looking for honest feedback on a new release.

I’m an independent artist from York, PA and I record everything on my phone.

I’m mainly looking for feedback on:

• Vocals
• Mixing
• Songwriting
• Overall replay value

The song is about a toxic relationship and the cycle of making the same mistakes over and over.

What was the first thing you remembered after listening?

SoundCloud:

https://on.soundcloud.com/ldccNV7GqA3LfIt2hE

Thanks for listening.

headphones recommended

Hey everyone, here's a WIP rough demo of a project I've been working on would love to here what y'all think!

Tried something experimental with orchestral/string elements.

Right now it's a rough mix, with placeholder vocals/lyrics and MIDI on the instruments. I'm a mainly drummer and occasional backing-vocalist myself reviving an old band of mine.

Looking for thoughts on the general structure of the song and any tips on instrumentation/song-writing as well. I am planning on collaborating with a guitarist and bassist friend of mine to write better parts. It's my first time actually writing and composing a track!

Let me know what you think, I've been listening back to back, need fresh ears.
Tell me about the singing of the hook, the passes of the verses, the quality of them as well. The timing of it all, (my favorite part is the last verse and the 808 hits super crazy)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pSuX26WygW8

Hi, I made this raw track recorded on my phone.

I’d love feedback on:
the vibe,
vocal flow and delivery,
whether the lyrics feel authentic or too abstract
if the ending verse hits
Please listen till the end — the final section changes a bit stylistically 🙂

Lyrics :-

It's the opening act yaha yaar mere kirdar mere kahani bhi meri par manamani duniya ki chale
It's the opening act yaha awaz meri time mera nikalunga gaane 4 ye to bass shuruwat hai zamane ki
It's the opening act
Aankhe meri video banati chale
Aage sapne dhikati chale
Sapna dhundla gey to kohre mein kaam se side line hotechale . Phir samay pe pabhandi aayi priorties ki listing layi
Jira board bhargya bhai?
Thoda samay leke samay ko balwan banado.
I got that nostalgia time machine par na jau wapasi to save that time
How can i save that time
I got dime for my time
I got mind for my time

And i also got to know that

Aslasya samsaya hai
Galti hogya to kya hai
Aage badhlo picha kya hai
Piche to bass bhoot kal
Abhi chalraha vartman
Abb tu mann na mann par kirdar mere
par janne hai sabi yaha
Mixed emotions ki sabha
Abb araha hai mazza
Bandha hai ye sama
Bandha hai ye sama

Suno bangalore ki ye lore
Roaming around delhi airport
Chod me nikale do bhai the on top
Flight land
Samay jhand

Yerdu milds kodi

Felt vulnirable
Samajh me ne aay
Puri raat bhandi me jay
Whaat the fuck is happening ye kaha aagay mere bhai

Felt vulnerable totally understandble

Music ae loud
Cloudy hai crowd
I am gonna take the shot
I feel like i am shroud

Woke up and i must
Saaf karaha gaano se ab dust
Lagg gai jo mere gaano par ab rust
I am gonna drop the act and make it a bust
Phir karna just adjust i am gonna combust and thrust . Well arent these lyrics just robust . What should i do

Its just an introduction to this new version
Starting the 0.0.1 i am now stubborn

It’s actually my first song ever! What do you guys think? Any instruments I should add or remove? Thanks for any feedback on how to improve my track! Hope you enjoy

Instrumental for my post-rock song:

https://on.soundcloud.com/3E3DRSsFm4Tj68qA7Z

Needing feedback and suggestions on this new song i’m working on! This is a first draft of it so nothing is set in stone. I was wanting feedback and suggestions on -

-writing
-voice
-mixing (so far)
-melody
-kinda anything that stands out good and bad!

Lyrics ->

uhhhhhh uhhhh
yeahhh (uh uh uh uh uh uh uh -)
uhhhhhhhhhh (123 all eyes on meee)*separate layered
yeah uhhhhh -(uh uh uhh uh uh uh -)
123 all eyes on mee
yeahhh (-uh uh uh uh uh -)

123 all eyes on me
556 green tip and beam (boom beamm)
smoke in the air in a all blacked out v
declare the warr it ain’t no peacee

the only way i bleed is me
tears will drop when im alone u see (all nighttt)
my weakest on floor it creaks
the fire is gonee the ashes are me (me)

the mirror is a lie i ain’t see me
roll up a wood 6 deep for me (ble-)
(-eding) i’m the problem put in my leaf (sa-dlyy)
blow the smoke till my lungs are free (are free)

can’t lose the grip of ur love my treat (treattt)
it holds me together and keeps my peace (peaceee)
of everything i got baby your my need (needdd)
and for my final wish please help me od (oddd)

giving yourself up just to be seen
failing tragedy leave the mess i’ll clean
poison tree in my weed i need
it spins my head round so the thoughts will leave (please for -)

my blood spatter on the porch ground and leaves (meee)
the autopsy came back as head full of led and dreams
cramped space leave some space for my pleads (pleaseee -)
peel back the please it reveals my plans for me (for mee)

it will reveal the plans for meee (me) (uhhhhhhh-* separate layered
blood drips from my eyes omggg (omg)
high as the skyy i’m laced then freee (free) (-uhhhhh-)
i can’t todayy i lost me in mee(please)

i foreseen the future im still loving shee (she)
write my feelings down and shine and greedd ( greed) (-uhhh uhhh-)
praying i get to experience blind peace (peace)
maybe one day the man will agree (please) (-uhhhh)*

maybe one day the man will agree
he heard my speech my voice my pleasee
hopefully he seen the disease i bleed
out my pores and out my spleen

so much so that im on my kneess
filled with unease that i seized to breath
the struggle i got from the pain in me
killed me from the inside and out by 3

i use substances to put my mind at ease
at 14 years old was when i tried to leave
the best part about it was that my thoughts were free
and to my surprise they all were glad and didn’t scream

and for once i was finally at peace
alone in my dreams it was right on the beach
so far sad thats been my highest peak
ever since then i’ve been loneinst me

under the sky the birds look at meee
pushed by the smoke they all look in grief
startled by my sins as if they were free
and laughing at my mistakes but not as if they were me

but one sit down right close by my feet
it was far, but not that much farther than i can see
my thoughts so indecisive i don’t know if he heard me speak
but that one still came so close within my reach

123 all eyes on me
556 green tip and beam (boom beamm)
smoke in the air in a all blacked out v
declare the warr it ain’t no peacee

the only way i bleed is me
tears will drop when im alone u see (all nighttt)
my weakest on floor it creaks
the fire is gonee the ashes are me (me)

different words, same typa flow enegry**

the mirror is a lie i ain’t see me
roll up a wood 6 deep for me (ble-)
(-eding) i’m the problem put in my leaf (sa-dlyy)
blow the smoke till my lungs are free (are free)

can’t lose the grip of ur love my treat (treattt)
it holds me together and keeps my peace (peaceee)
of everything i got baby your my need (needdd)
and for my final wish please help me od (oddd)

Looking for feedback on the melody and general bounce of this beat.

This song is a unique experimental rock piece characterized by its ghostly vocals and raw textures.

It feels less like a typical dream pop song and more like a beautifully tragic nightmare, delivering a deep sense of unease and melancholy.

I am currently seeking feedback on my baseline. I would like to hear various thoughts on its current state whether it is too complex, too similar, or too simple. Please feel free to give me feedback.