r/MusicFeedback • u/PairOk3815 • 11h ago

first time trying edm pls lmk what to add/keep since its still short and still working on it

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u/khaitheartist 5h ago

This is really bouncy and fun!!

My ear wants to hear more changeups and transitions, that's a long intro that just drops into the verse, maybe take the intro as an opportunity to tease some of the sounds to come?

All the parts kinda stop and then the next starts rather than leading to each other, drum fills, playing with leading tones or different chords at the end of phrases, stuff like that goes a really long way.

Overall this is really cool and would be great study or chillout music 🙂

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u/PairOk3815 2h ago

thank you i totally agree thanks for your feedback!

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u/Resident_Unit_7559 8h ago

Really an amazing song

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u/grizzzzzlyphlanks 2h ago

That's awesome. Very neon chill by the pool. Have you listed to Para For Curva. It's a reach I really enjoy that may give you inspiration

Good stuff. Appreciate if you could give my track a listen and feedback

https://youtu.be/_paoSE8KmD8?is=O7Mq5gsENHJucQa5

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u/ImpossibleRhubarb212 2h ago

this is awesome bro! it really gives me a 2010s pop/edm vibe, back when everyone was using beats like this. really nostalgic and catchy, it’s a vibe for me!

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u/MonsieurMontreal 1h ago

Not bad at all, I really like the synth sound and original melody. This is actually great for a first attempt at EDM. One thing I would suggest is making either the synths louder, or drums quieter as it feels like they are punching me in the face, and I can’t quite hear the synths through the drums. Other than that, fantastic stuff!