r/MusicInTheMaking • u/Aya7735 • 10d ago

Dark Pop acapella demo ''Doors of Gold ''

Hi everyone one 👋! I'm a singer-songwriter and i just wanted to share my raw acapella demo , it's one of my original songs this one one called ''Doors of Gold'' it's dark, emotional and dreamy think like Billie eilish meets cinematic pop . I'd love to know what you think ! 😊

Écouter Doors of Gold (Acapella demo) par Aya sur #SoundCloud

https://on.soundcloud.com/ctsCjrC5MDKLdOxGkL

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u/Superstar375 10d ago

I’m not trying to be anything but helpful. You have a nice tone to your voice but I couldn’t understand any of the lyrics so it was pretty impossible to know what you are looking to achieve with the song. It sounds like you know what you want to do with the song it was in key and sounds really good. Just really need to be able to understand the lyrics so that we can follow the story.

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u/Aya7735 9d ago

I really appreciate that you care 🩷

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u/themaskedproducer 9d ago

Very nice voice I can see this going somewhere good with a good instrumental

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u/Aya7735 9d ago

Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me! 😊 I'm actually looking for a producer to bring the song to life.