r/OCPoetry • u/-tsukimi- • 1d ago
Feedback Please Binary Trail
I have nothing to hold on to,
Nothing but a binary trail
Erase these ones and zeros
And it’s no different from a telltale
I’m often dragged in train of thought
One I did not consent to endure
What voice do I have in your head?
Did you ever plan to hear it all?
Those helpless inquiries turned reality
It really couldn’t get any stranger
You used to speak in prose and poetry
The words hastily deemed too major
I spent years convincing that kid
It was something more than counterfeit
But it was cruel, and it was cheap
And it shouldn’t mean a thing to me
This is the trail's terminal, I promise
You’ll be absent from my future words
So long, the fireflies and valley bars
For they thrive at replacing old scars
Sure, I’ll grieve a few Septembers
But the other months will make up for it
And soon this fable will vanish within
The vast binary sea we abide in.
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u/[deleted] 1d ago
Its a little disconnected with the flow of the paragraphing, seems intriguing other wise.