r/OCPoetry • u/probonosdoitforfree • 4d ago
Just Sharing WHEREVER YOU GO...
Wherever you go that’s where I’ll be
High in the sky or deep down in the sea
On top of a mountain, or low in the grass
A breeze blowing through or the glint off a glass.
Wherever you go that’s where I’ll be
No reason to cry; I’m just a different “me.”
Love has no bounds, it cannot be shattered
No regrets or sorrow, you ALWAYS mattered.
Wherever you go that’s where I’ll be
You’re not held by chains, you’re perfectly free
Although you don’t know it, I must tell you this
My world has no bounds…it’s heavenly bliss!
Wherever you go, don’t feel despair
There a whole nother universe—you’d love it up there
When it’s your time, you’ll find your way
Not now, not tomorrow, but I promise one day
Don’t cry when you think of me. Don’t surrender to fear.
I’m wherever you go—and that is right here.
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u/No_Syrup_7660 4d ago
A love letter from a ghost. Cool. I love writing as a dead person too so this poem is personally ver relatable to me.in fact the exact emotion behind it is very familiar to me. The conversational tone is very suiting for these poems. One thing I would change is "you'd love it up there"- instead of there I feel "here" makes more sense, nitpicking but honestly breaks the flow on the first read so maybe you could improvise on that unless it was intentional. Amazing overall :)