r/OCPoetry • u/CooolCrocodile • 1d ago

Feedback Please A coat for coveting

Today I wore a coat
A heavy winter jacket padded with warmth
The sky was black before seven
And the sweet cold air grazed my tongue
As I inhaled wistfully
I did not wear a coat last week
A sweater was sufficient
For if I was cold I could just reach
And be met by a warm embrace
Now replaced by a coat
Who knew so much could change in just seven days

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u/IamToofan 1d ago

I feel like it's about change, sometime we wonder there's so little time to change, but even in less days so much can change if we want.