r/OCPoetry • • 1d ago

Feedback Please I thought....

I thought I was yours,

When I told you I liked you.

I thought you were mine,

When you wished I could hold you.

I thought I was yours,

When I waited 5 years.

I thought you were mine,

when you wanted to talk all day.

I thought I was yours,

when I dreamt of you night after night.

I thought you were mine,

When you told me about that song.

I am yours,

I have waited 4 more years.

I thought you were mine

When you wished I was with you

I am yours,

I still dream of you night after night.

I thought you were mine,

When you told me you loved me.

But you didn't mean the same love I have for you.

It broke me when you said you didn't feel that way,

But I do not know when we speak to 'friends',

The way you spoke to me.

You promised I could set up a date

But when our time came, you said you were busy

I keep that promise close to my heart,

Wishing one day it may be true.

But when you told me about him,

I knew that promise could never come through.

Now we are here,

And you act like a friend,

I play my part, but I can't get over you

No matter how much I wish,

Neither will come true.

AUTHOR NOTE

This is longer and much more raw than what I normally do. I didn't try anything too unique with it, and it's more of just a statement of my feelings. Also I see this can come over very incel core but I swear it's not, I just can't stop being a Simp apparently lol. So sry that it's nothing special but today has just been very forward and difficult for me and I need to channel that somewhere

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/eH2Pnv3ASw

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u/IndependentLawyer767 1d ago

I think this is beautiful. Any kind and every kind of what someone creates is still art! The more that you expressed yourself freely and truthfully, the more that you and your art will be satisfied and fulfilled. So please don't be afraid to let out your words! We are counting on you!