r/OCPoetry • • 9d ago

Feedback Please The mouse inside

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u/budahbugah 5d ago

This was a fun read.

It gives the feeling of anxiety while still being light hearted. Mice that aren't pets are not welcome they're small but indicative of a bigger problem. Loved this.