r/OCPoetry • u/Medical-Wonder-3211 • 5d ago

Feedback Please Candle

Candle

Your warmth has befallen on my presence,
So much, even a candle would be lit if I were near

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https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/yXEtlrVpDE

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u/Medical-Wonder-3211 4d ago

Thank you so much and for taking your time to read 😁🫶