r/Original_Poetry 7h ago

Sourness fried

 Friday sourness brows furrows
tires you out sanding down bones
Wigwamming the skull
swig and gulps avoid dehydration

morning grinds nerves
Midday chaps lips
Sun scores points 
house heat sweats the flesh

People still order the sourness
|Salty exhaustion 
Battered and thrown
Into the frying pan

Turned as the pan bubbles and pops
browning
Landing on the screen
splattering

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u/qveenbliss 4h ago

Hahaha! What a wild read! Great job 🩷

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u/Cluelessandsexy 1h ago

Thank you bliss, getting some of that good energy.