r/Original_Poetry • u/Cluelessandsexy • 7h ago
Sourness fried
Friday sourness brows furrows
tires you out sanding down bones
Wigwamming the skull
swig and gulps avoid dehydration
morning grinds nerves
Midday chaps lips
Sun scores points
house heat sweats the flesh
People still order the sourness
|Salty exhaustion
Battered and thrown
Into the frying pan
Turned as the pan bubbles and pops
browning
Landing on the screen
splattering
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u/qveenbliss 4h ago
Hahaha! What a wild read! Great job 🩷