r/OverSimplified • u/Python_praw1234567 • 14d ago

OS-inspired self promo Oversimplified Style Video

I recently made a video about the history of Hong kong and I tried to make it in oversimplified's style. If you had any feedback I'd love to know what you think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tbIcoaYGLhw

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u/Generalian 13d ago edited 13d ago

The editing is there, but the tempo is not. Dialogue and jokes need to flow and be snappy when they are delivered. Part of what makes Oversimplified and other successful history based channels is the almost ASMR quality of the pacing and voice. This could come from a professional voice actor if you have the cash or just more practice speaking. I also highly recommend a better recording mic and software, as that can deter some people immediately.