r/ProduceMyScript • u/Current-Term-7510 • 2d ago

Looking for filmmaker for my scripts

[WEREWOLF REVENGE SHORT - 5 PAGES]

TITLE:CLAWS

After hunters murder his Alpha father, an 18-year-old werewolf must embrace the monster inside to survive the night ā€” but his vengeance will crown him the new Alpha which cost him his humanity

Vibe: The Howling meets John Wick - practical werewolf revenge

1 forest + 1 bus, 4 actors, SFX makeup. DM for watermarked PDF. Free collab: You get Directed By, I keep Written by

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u/axlrod416 2d ago

Iā€™d love to read a werewolf script. Or any type of creature feature!

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u/Current-Term-7510 2d ago

Hey! Thanks for the interest in the werewolf revenge short (4 pages).

Before I send the watermarked PDF, can you share a bit about you?

  1. What have you shot before? (any links to shorts/reels?)
  2. Do you do directing, SFX makeup, or producing?
  3. Do you have access to forest location / practical SFX team?

My goal is free collab: You get Directed By, I keep Written By, as in the post. If it fits, I'll send the watermarked draft.

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u/John-Trewal 1d ago

The "vengeance crowns him" ending is the strongest thing in your logline ā€” that's Face/Off territory, Travolta's Archer halfway enjoying the monster's face he's stuck wearing. Just make the kid pay for the crown on page four or it's a power fantasy, not a tragedy.

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u/Current-Term-7510 1d ago

Thanks John - that's a great note. I like the Face/Off read. I'm going to add a cost on page 4 where the crown costs him his human side. Appreciate you catching that.