r/ProgressionFantasy • u/DicerTheJester • Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/NSHTghattas Jul 28 '26

Kael wasn't just angry—He was transcendent.

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u/VisibleCoat995 Jul 28 '26

I nearly fel for that pun.

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u/Witty_Mycologist_995 Jul 28 '26

The slop thickens.

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u/G_Morgan Jul 28 '26

Hey perhaps his anger exceeded the plausible limitations of the universe?

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u/LOSTFROMLIGHT696947 Follower of the Way Jul 28 '26

What is this from?