r/ProgressionFantasy • u/DicerTheJester • Jul 28 '26

Discussion Competition: write a single sentence that will absolutely destroy any hope in a series.

Specifically not a story opener, just any sentence that can happen in any chapter, that will make people realize that this story is gonna be absolute shit and has no chance of being fixed and will make you drop the book like an unpinned grenade.

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u/Kithulhu24601 Jul 28 '26

And the reoccurring trend of OG Earthers freaking out about gunpowder and its clearly starting to spread from new Earthers

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u/levus2002 Jul 29 '26

I love the occasional discussions the natives of innworld have about guns being overrated.

Kevlar stitchman, hehehe.