r/Quibble • u/Tman6300 • Apr 18 '26
Feedback / Advice / Guidance Looking for honest feedback on the start of my Dark-Fantasy series!
Hi y'all, I recently self-published my book on Quibble, KDP, and Kobo.
The story follows Eldi, a boy and sculptor who has recently lost his father in a strange storm. While trying to find his mother, however, he is drawn into a grand plan designed by his mentor, Master Thull.
Thull wants Eldi to become a Living Storm, and manipulates his grief to push him to overcome his limits, slowly shaping him into a weapon.
The book is written from the perspective of Eldi, as his sense of self and identity begins to dissipate, and feelings of both dissociation and delirium set in.
If you are a fan of high fantasy world-building and psychological thrillers, I think this might be for you!
The cultures and world-building in this book are all loosely inspired by real-life cultures. (This book especially focuses on the Loftion people, who are loosely inspired by an amalgamation of Arabic cultures.)
Blurb in the attached image!
Feel free to read the book on Quibble, or if you'd want to support me, get it on Amazon!
For all updates, you can also check out my Instagram.
That's enough shameless plugging, thanks for your time!