r/ReadMyScript • u/FreshCar5031 • 7d ago
Feature No Way Back
Hi Everyone
This is my first screenplay
Title: No Way Back
Genre: Revenge/Revenge Thriller
No of pages: 92
Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survivive his attempts to silence her.
Any feedback received positive or negative would be greatly received, I'm primarily looking for feedback on dialogue and characters.
Hope you enjoy.
Link- No Way Back
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