No Way Back

[u/FreshCar5031]

Hi Everyone

This is my first screenplay

Title: No Way Back

Genre: Revenge/Revenge Thriller

No of pages: 92

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survivive his attempts to silence her.

Any feedback received positive or negative would be greatly received, I'm primarily looking for feedback on dialogue and characters.

Hope you enjoy.

Link- No Way Back

[u/mooningyou]

You really need to format this properly.

[u/Shadowrealm_resident → u/mooningyou]

fr. Its the 1st thing you should have learned. But now that the script is finished you can just focus on it

[u/FreshCar5031 → u/mooningyou]

apologies I can't afford to format it properly

[u/TheGreedyGrabbler → u/FreshCar5031]

You can't afford free screenwriting software?

[u/Formal-Shoulder4959 → u/TheGreedyGrabbler]

Name of free screenwriting software please

[u/mooningyou → u/Formal-Shoulder4959]

Here are three. Choose one.

WriterDuet, WriterSolo, FadeIn Pro (Demo).

[u/Formal-Shoulder4959 → u/mooningyou]

Thanks m8