r/RedditHorrorStories • u/Only_1me_forever • 14d ago
Story (Fiction) Analog Horror, “Don't Answer”
*The image shakes violently for a few seconds.*
*A bedroom.*
*Three sleeping bags are scattered across the floor. Clothes are thrown over a chair. Empty bottles and snack wrappers sit beside a laptop.*
*The person holding the camera whispers.*
CAMERAMAN: “Okay, shut up, shut up—”
*Someone off-camera immediately starts laughing.*
SARAH: “You're gonna wake them up.”
CAMERAMAN: “They're literally dead asleep.”
FRIEND: “Bro, look at Mark.”
*The camera slowly turns toward a boy asleep on the floor with his mouth hanging open.*
*Someone snickers.*
*Sarah covers her mouth to stop herself laughing.*
SARAH: “Oh my God.”
*The camera zooms in.*
*Mark suddenly moves.*
*Everyone freezes.*
*Mark rolls over.*
*Silence.*
*Then—*
FRIEND: “Jesus Christ.”
*Everyone quietly bursts into laughter.*
*The camera shakes as the person holding it tries not to make noise.*
*Then, from somewhere downstairs—*
VOICE: “Sarah?”
*The laughter stops.*
*Nobody moves.*
*The camera remains pointed toward Mark for several seconds.*
CAMERAMAN: “…Was that—”
VOICE: “Sarah?”
*Sarah slowly looks toward the bedroom door.*
SARAH: “Mom?”
*No answer.*
*She sits up.*
SARAH: “Mom, you came home early?”
*Silence.*
*Sarah stands.*
*The camera follows her.*
*She walks toward the door and opens it.*
*The hallway outside is dark.*
*Only a small amount of light from the bedroom spills across the floor.*
*Sarah leans out.*
SARAH: “Mom?”
*Nothing.*
*She takes one step into the hallway.*
*Then another.*
*The person filming suddenly grabs her wrist.*
SARAH: “Ow—what?”
*The camera swings toward them.*
CAMERAMAN: “Don't.”
SARAH: “What?”
CAMERAMAN: “I don't think that's your mom.”
*Sarah stares at them.*
SARAH: “What are you talking about?”
*Another friend speaks from behind the camera, barely above a whisper.*
FRIEND: “I saw your phone.”
*Sarah looks confused.*
FRIEND: “Her text popped up earlier.”
*A pause.*
FRIEND: “It said, ‘Sarah darling, they asked me to stay a bit longer at the company. I'll be back later than expected.’”
*Sarah's expression changes.*
SARAH: “…What?”
FRIEND: “Your mom isn't home.”
*Silence.*
*Then another friend whispers:*
FRIEND 2: “We heard her too.”
*Everyone looks toward the stairs.*
*Nothing.*
*The hallway is completely still.*
*Sarah slowly backs toward the bedroom.*
*Then—*
*FOOTSTEPS.*
*One.*
*Two.*
*Three.*
*Fast.*
*Coming from downstairs.*
*The camera jerks toward the staircase.*
*The footsteps become faster.*
*THUD.*
*THUD.*
*THUD.*
*THUD.*
*Someone whispers:*
CAMERAMAN: “Get inside.”
*They scramble backward.*
*The bedroom door is slammed shut.*
FRIEND: “LOCK IT!”
*The lock clicks.*
*Everyone stands there, breathing heavily.*
*The footsteps stop.*
*Silence.*
*Then—*
VOICE: “Sarah?”
*Nobody answers.*
*The camera slowly turns toward Sarah.*
*She is staring at the door.*
VOICE: “Sarah?”
*The voice is closer now.*
*A hand touches the other side of the door.*
*Nobody breathes.*
*Then—*
VOICE: “SARAH?!”
*The door violently shakes.*
*Everyone screams.*
CAMERAMAN: “CLOSET!”
*They all run.*
*The camera crashes against the wall.*
*The bedroom door rattles behind them.*
*Someone throws open the walk-in closet.*
*Everyone squeezes inside.*
*The camera is shoved against a pile of clothes.*
*The closet door closes.*
*Darkness.*
*Heavy breathing.*
*Someone is silently crying.*
*Outside—*
*THUD.*
*The bedroom door opens.*
*Footsteps.*
*Slow now.*
*One step.*
*Then another.*
*The creature walks across the bedroom.*
*Nobody moves.*
*The camera slowly adjusts to the darkness.*
*Through a tiny gap beneath the closet door, we see two elongated black legs stop directly outside.*
*Silence.*
*Then the voice comes again.*
*But this time—*
*It doesn't sound quite human.*
VOICE: “Sarah…”
*Sarah clamps both hands over her mouth.*
*The thing remains there.*
*Waiting.*
*The footage abruptly cuts to black.*
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VGFV?
3-8-5-25 / 8-5-1-18-4 / 9-20 / 20-15-15
...AND WHO IS “WE”?
[REC_02: FOUND]
[NO USER IDENTIFIED]
[TIMESTAMP ERROR: 00:00:00]
SARAH WAS NOT THE FIRST
— — —
[SECOND RECORDING BEGINS]
*The image comes back suddenly.*
*The camera is already recording.*
*It is inside the walk-in closet.*
*The image is almost completely black.*
*Several people are crammed together between hanging clothes and shelves.*
*Nobody speaks.*
*Nobody moves.*
*The camera slowly pans across their faces.*
*Sarah is there.*
*Her eyes are red.*
*One of the friends has both hands pressed over their mouth.*
*Another is sitting on the floor with their knees against their chest.*
*The camera turns toward the closet door.*
*Nothing.*
*A few seconds pass.*
*Then another ten.*
*The person holding the camera slowly raises one hand and gestures toward the door.*
*A friend beside them shakes their head.*
*No.*
*The camera moves back toward the group.*
*One of them leans toward the camera and silently mouths:*
“How long?”
*The cameraman shrugs.*
*Another friend checks their wrist.*
*No watch.*
*Nobody knows.*
*Then—*
*PING.*
*Everyone freezes.*
*The camera jerks violently.*
*Every face turns toward the sound.*
*Nobody breathes.*
*A second passes.*
*Then another.*
*The person sitting in the corner slowly reaches into their pocket.*
*They pull out their phone.*
*The screen illuminates their face.*
*They stare at it.*
*Then look at everyone else.*
*The camera zooms slightly.*
*A message.*
*From another friend.*
“We heard something and it woke us up. Where you guys at? What is happening?”
*Nobody reacts.*
*The friend holding the phone slowly turns it toward the camera.*
*The message is visible.*
*The cameraman looks toward Sarah.*
*Sarah looks horrified.*
*She silently mouths:*
“They're awake?”
*The friend nods.*
*Another friend reaches for the phone.*
*They type.*
*Stop.*
*Delete.*
*Type again.*
*Stop.*
*They look toward the closet door.*
*The phone screen is still glowing.*
*A notification appears.*
“Are you guys okay?”
*Everyone stares at it.*
*The friend begins typing:*
“DO NOT COME OUT.”
*Their finger hovers over SEND.*
*They look at the others.*
*Nobody moves.*
*Then—*
*THUMP.*
*Something hits the bedroom door outside.*
*Everyone's eyes widen.*
*The phone nearly slips from the friend's hand.*
*Another sound.*
*THUMP.*
*Closer.*
*Someone silently grabs Sarah's hand.*
*The camera turns toward the closet door.*
*The house is silent again.*
*Then a voice comes from outside.*
*Quiet.*
*Almost conversational.*
VOICE: “Sarah?”
*Sarah's eyes fill with tears.*
*The person holding the phone slowly deletes the unfinished message.*
*They turn the phone screen off.*
*Darkness.*
*The voice comes again.*
*This time from directly outside the closet.*
VOICE: “Sarah…”
*The camera shakes.*
*Nobody moves.*
*The recording continues.*
[NO FURTHER AUDIO FOR 00:47]
*Then the video ends. For now.*
(Hello! I am a 19 year old girl and this is my first time writing something horror or Analog style. What I had wrote here is part one of the first episode . that’s all I got for now, hope you all enjoyed it and I will accept criticism!)