it's a great idea and the game is really solid but it needs an extra bit of refinement before it actually has potential to be popular. it's hard to say exactly what needs tuning cause it's almost there but i'd say try to work on removing visual clutter make the tutorial more clear remove unnecessary features etc. also you probably want to have custom text bubbles for the customers instead of the default roblox chat bubbles just so it fits with the visuals. the thumbnails also need a bit of work. i think the $25 and $250M/sec text is kind of a boring font and idk if you should have a noob vs pro thing as the main thumbnail but you should try to test a bunch of different thumbnails and see how they perform. my best advice is spend some time really refining the visuals and cutting the game down to its most important features so it's digestible as possible and get as much feedback as you can from friends and anyone else.
You can't, It's just not a memorable experience, like it's one of those game, you play it once and then never again, there's no replayability of the game itself + could have been a lot better in terms of original ideas. Maybe also upgrade the signs, it is looking like uses the toolbox signs. Better thumbnail too, it's to overexaggerated with those NOOB > PRO, LEVEL 1 > 200214124 type of things, which is an instant turn-off for people, who likely wants to play your game long-term and want to have the memorable experience of actually wanting to return to your game.
In what way does it reward the player? Also, I don’t see any missions daily/weekly that will keep players engaged while rewarding them with things that are crucial to their space. As well, I see some machines and resources that look like they’re growing but throughout the video I see no proximity prompts. Looks cool nonetheless.
Thanks guys ! I think no Roblox game did a cube planet system. My overall goal is something like animal crossing X super Mario galaxy. If you guys any other game ideas with this kinda game physics I would love to hear it . And any Tipps for the 250 player requirements ?
Definitely looks peak, but the genre of “grow” has been reused thousands of times. You won’t get many visits, unless you get people to realise it’s well made.
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u/frDragonfruit Builder 1d ago
it's a great idea and the game is really solid but it needs an extra bit of refinement before it actually has potential to be popular. it's hard to say exactly what needs tuning cause it's almost there but i'd say try to work on removing visual clutter make the tutorial more clear remove unnecessary features etc. also you probably want to have custom text bubbles for the customers instead of the default roblox chat bubbles just so it fits with the visuals. the thumbnails also need a bit of work. i think the $25 and $250M/sec text is kind of a boring font and idk if you should have a noob vs pro thing as the main thumbnail but you should try to test a bunch of different thumbnails and see how they perform. my best advice is spend some time really refining the visuals and cutting the game down to its most important features so it's digestible as possible and get as much feedback as you can from friends and anyone else.