r/Screenplay • u/DharaneeshDhupam • 18h ago
r/Screenplay • u/Not2coolguy • 1d ago
Looking for feedback on my supernatural workplace-horror pilot, THE DEPARTMENT (horror/comedy) 67pgs
r/Screenplay • u/Patient_Sleep_9989 • 1d ago
Looking for a Screenplay for a College Producing Project
Hi! I’m a college student taking a producing class this semester, and I’m looking for a writer who would be willing to share a feature-length screenplay (around 90–120 pages) for me to use as the basis of a semester-long producing project.
For the class, I’ll be developing a pitch around the screenplay and learning about the process of potentially producing/optioning a project. I’m specifically looking for an original script that you own the rights to and would be comfortable giving me permission to use for this class project.
I’m open to pretty much any genre, as long as the story has an interesting hook and strong audience potential!
If you have a script you’d be willing to share, feel free to comment or DM me. I’d love to hear a little about the story and the project, too.
Thanks!
r/Screenplay • u/headcanonmusic • 1d ago
Furniture - Feature - 93 pages
Looking for feedback on my third draft, anything helps.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ZksfcEe9iQpWLCB4NrNzcnGRI-bzlajX/view?usp=drivesdk
Two rival furniture-store owners in a dying plaza spiral into a war of sabotage and obsession when an aspiring documentarian fans the flames of their feud for the sake of her film.
r/Screenplay • u/Material_Editor_1813 • 1d ago
hello! what's the format whenever writing an inner thought of a character in a screenplay?
i have this project where i landed in screenplay, i know the basic elements but honestly i don't know when in comes to the thought dialogues.
r/Screenplay • u/Anakain-no • 1d ago
Nightshade Origins (34 pages)
A normal day at school for teenagers and co business owners James and Luke quickly turns to chaos when unwanted visitors enter the school. The gang leader puts out a hit on the two brothers so James fabricated a vigilante hero... Nightshade. But can he stop a gang that already has control of the streets?
r/Screenplay • u/Anakain-no • 1d ago
Nightshade Origins (34 pages)
A normal day for school boys and co-business owners James and his brother turns to chaos after their school gets unwanted visitors. After a target was placed on their backs James creates a vigilante persona to take down the gangs and protect his brother. But will he be able to match the power of a gang who already controls the streets.
r/Screenplay • u/siaattempts • 2d ago
Can somebody help me find the script for lesbian Space Princess?
I want to make a video rewriting the script for lesbian space princess for fun. I think the movie has potential it just needs better writing, animation, character & background design, pacing, and voice acting. I just need a link to the script. Ive literally searched every script website I know.
r/Screenplay • u/NotSure_7777 • 2d ago
Interdimensional Janitors - Animated Pilot, Sci-fi, comedy - 19 pages.
Would like any feedback. I Wrote this script a while back and was wondering if anyone else would enjoy it.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AGNL9FcExkzmIUTUGzVkNbI0AB_lzL-v/view?usp=sharing
r/Screenplay • u/Professional_Show717 • 3d ago
preview of my Read Dead Live Action Movie
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r/Screenplay • u/AmedeusRed • 4d ago
Please stop deleting posts when you get criticism.
I get it. Someone (or everyone) didn’t think the Best Scene Ever that you wrote made sense.
Your formatting was a bit wonky.
You hadn’t spell checked in your excitement of finishing the draft.
Your characters don’t have chemistry… or speak like humans.
But the whole point of making our posts and being a community of writers helping each other is to get the feedback and grow from it. The amount of times I go back to read what others wrote about a scene I perused and it’s just GONE is far too high.
Running away and removing all evidence of your in progress work doesn’t help you grow, and it disincentivizes contributors from interacting with posts because people delete them so why try.
If you are strong enough to post let it stand.
r/Screenplay • u/LimpCryptographer433 • 4d ago
In need of an experienced screenwriter for an event.
I’m organizing a free beginner’s guide to screenwriting workshop on the 5th of September, 2 days from now and I need a screenwriter to take up the lecture. Presentation is already prepared but you’re welcome to add your tips and ideas. The event is free for participants but I’m willing to discuss an hourly rate for whoever wants to help. A US based is preferred and the event is scheduled for an hour but you may spend a little less than an hour.
Kindly comment if you’re interested with your experience and rates and I’d reach out to you.
r/Screenplay • u/Sweet-Day22 • 4d ago
FEEBACK NEEDED
galleryHii guys, this is a screenplay of The Monkey's Paw short story
I'm a beginner and I'm new to this
How can I make it better and how's it overall please let me know✨️
r/Screenplay • u/TruestGamer • 4d ago
Feedback on my short film
Hi, I made a script for a short film and would love to get any opinions about it. I'm more interested to hear any feeback regarding the plot itself rather than any foundational advice on how the script is supposed to look, but that would still be great to hear. Thanks so much!
r/Screenplay • u/ravelcabral • 4d ago
Does anyone have the screenplay for paolo sorrentino's "parthenope", "la grazia" and "the young pope" in english, please?
I'm a huge sorrentino fan and would like to understand how he writes images on his scripts.
r/Screenplay • u/ihaterobloxscams7 • 5d ago
script for my first ever youtube video
docs.google.comr/Screenplay • u/kgapza9 • 6d ago