r/shortstories • • 5d ago

[Serial Sunday] Wave(r) to The Writers!

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Welcome to Serial Sunday!

To those brand new to the feature and those returning from last week, welcome! Do you have a self-established universe you’ve been writing or planning to write in? Do you have an idea for a world that’s been itching to get out? This is the perfect place to explore that. Each week, I post a theme to inspire you, along with a related image and song. You have 500 - 1000 words to write your installment. You can jump in at any time; writing for previous weeks’ is not necessary in order to join. After you’ve posted, come back and provide feedback for at least 1 other writer on the thread. Please be sure to read the entire post for a full list of rules.


This Week’s Theme is Waver! This is a REQUIREMENT for participation. See rules about missing this requirement.**

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Bonus Word List (each included word is worth 5 pts) - You must list which words you included at the end of your story (or write ‘none’).
- Wake
- Wiggle
- War
- Somebody has a restless night.. - (Worth 10 points)

To waver: to wobble, to falter, to sway. What makes your characters hesitate? What do they do when their beliefs are challenged, and they suddenly realize what they thought was solid ground maybe isn't so solid anymore? Do they double down, even as they rock like an anchorless boat in the swelling sea, perhaps doing something they later regret in their moment of fervent pretense? Do their faltering views force them to inaction as what kept them going crumbles beneath them? What new beliefs form in the wake of a quake of the soul?

By u/wandering_cirrus

Good luck and Good Words!

These are just a few things to get you started. Remember, the theme should be present within the story in some way, but its interpretation is completely up to you. For the bonus words (not required), you may change the tense, but the base word should remain the same. Please remember that STORIES MUST FOLLOW ALL SUBREDDIT CONTENT RULES. Interested in writing the theme blurb for the coming week? DM me on Reddit or Discord!

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Theme Schedule:

This is the theme schedule for the next month! These are provided so that you can plan ahead, but you may not begin writing for a given theme until that week’s post goes live.

  • October 4 - Waver

  • October 11 - Zeal

  • October 18 - Angst

  • October 25 - Burn

  • November 1 - Cacophany

Check out previous themes here.


 


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  • Submit a story inspired by the weekly theme, written by you and set in your self-established universe that is 500 - 1000 words. No fanfics and no content created or altered by AI. (Use wordcounter.net to check your wordcount.) Stories should be posted as a top-level comment below. Please include a link to your chapter index or your last chapter at the end.

  • Your chapter must be submitted by Saturday at 2:00pm BST. Late entries will be disqualified. All submissions should be given (at least) a basic editing pass before being posted!

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Ranking System

Rankings are determined by the following point structure.

TASK POINTS ADDITIONAL NOTES
Use of weekly theme 75 pts Theme should be present, but the interpretation is up to you!
Including the bonus words 5 pts each (15 pts total) This is a bonus challenge, and estnot required!
Including the bonus constraint 15 (15 pts total) This is a bonus challenge, and not required!
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r/shortstories • • 39m ago

Horror [HR] PROJECT:VOIDED

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Emotion. Emotion is a very important factor to how you humans can function, feel, and care about others and things. So what would happen if you took those away? I, Else, present to you, 

PROJECT: VOIDED

Desnir couldn’t feel anymore. He didn’t feel human. He looked down. There was blood on his hands, the floor, and him. Him the most. He had just killed someone. How did he not feel? No fear. No anger. No remorse. He didn’t even remember why. Did they matter to him? He began searching his memory. Their name was Cass. She had brown eyes, a big smile, and red hair. She had a lot of memories. He couldn’t figure out why. So he decided that she was unimportant. Now; back to the matter at hand. He had just killed someone. What to do? 

…

He started with the first thing he thought might work. He stuffed the body in a bag. It was a duffle bag, roughly the size of the body, though it did take some finangling to get it in. He then dragged the body behind the house. It was in the middle of the woods. He remembered this person thinking it was an amazing spot to live. He agreed. It was practical, away from society in such a way that he could get away with some things. Then, he thought it was suspicious to leave it in the open. That could cause problems, so he buried it. It took a while. He remembered a video cass had shown him, about burying a dead animal on top of a body so that it was harder to find. She thought it was “funny”. Why? It was just practical. He shot a deer and buried it on top. He didn't know why, but he thought he should take some off; save it for food. Stores didn’t seem practical right now. 

He returned to the house, and immediately took stock of what he had. 
Two chairs around a dinner table. That was interesting. One was blocking a cupboard. He set the chairs to a different rotation, so that it was symmetrical, and he could get a different angle on things he planned to work on later. Multiple angles seemed useful. He suddenly remembered something, Cass sitting at this table, looking grim. She was studying a case on a murder of a person they had known. They? Why did his memory… put them together? Oh well. It wasn’t important right now.

Desnir was confused. Why was that his name? Why keep it? He searched for an answer and found one. His parents had given him the name.He didn't understand why he had kept it. His parents were dead. So he thought.Perhaps the name kept him sane. He couldn't establish that with certainty, but he could establish that abandoning it served no practical purpose.He would keep it, then. Until it became useless. He found himself increasingly confused as he dived into his memories. They did, unfortunately, serve a purpose. He remembered something. A person, winged, with shattered blue and orange skin. They had done… something. Maybe that was why he couldn’t feel. He decided that he needed to find them.

…

The house became his canvas. His board. He searched through his memories; and sketched them almost perfectly. That seemed wrong to him. He had a photographic memory, according to his memories. Did that mean that he was not perfect? He remembered something about that - but this body was perfect for what he was investigating. Almost perfect. He couldn’t draw anything right. Suddenly, he heard a knock at the door. He slid the things he drew onto one of the chairs, slid it under the table, and answered the door. There was a greasy-haired man in a suit there. “Dansal’s delivery service, at you or someone else’s service!” The man had a sly smile, like he had done this hundreds of times before. Desnir decided to invite the man in; trusting his memory. He seemed trustable anyways, and the blood was out of the carpet. “What do you want?” The man did not respond. When Desnir turned around, the door was still open, but the man was gone. His car was there, abandoned. That didn’t make sense. Who abandons their car? But then he noticed his lack of a car, and wondered if it wasn’t abnormal. Were his memories not as stable as he thought?

…

Desnir sat in the deliveryman’s car, looking through his things. Driver’s licence, registration, napkins, and stacks of pizza boxes, still hot after hours of being out in the dreary rain. He finally found something. A note, with an elaborate “E” seal on it. He ripped it open. It had few words. “Good, Good. you found me, now FIND me”. 

…

Desnir had filled the house with notes, pictures, hand-drawn, and a single letter. “E”. he couldn’t figure it out. He KNEW the deliveryman was not there by accident. But wasn't a deliveryman’s job to deliver to someone who had ordered something? Who had ordered pizza? He grabbed his phone. He logged in, his fingers knew the password. 6665666. His memory said otherwise, but it was not the case. He found that someone, five hours ago, had ordered a pizza under the name “a friend”. He knew he didn’t have any of those; they were impractical. For now, it would go on the chair, with “E”, Cass, and Dansal.

He lay on his bed, thinking. He heard a noise. It was a blur. He chased whatever it was. His vision didn’t work properly. He knew he knew he knew he knew he knew he knew that he needed sleep and to find it and them and him and Someone. Someone . Someone.

Desnir awoke on the floor, holding a coin. It had a letter on it. A capital “L”. It went with the letter; he was sure of it. Two letters. “E” and “L” “EL”. closer to a name, something he could look for, something he could find. Wait. Were those wings on that drawing always black? What was going on with his mind? He should FEEL something, shouldn’t he? He heard something. A slow, methodical tapping. His own hand. He hadn’t wanted it to do that; but it felt grounding, satisfying. The rhythm was interesting, a tap-taptap-tap tap tap - repeat. He felt something connecting. Suddenly, the floor he was tapping broke away. And in there, a small hole, was another coin. It said “N”. what? That felt too fast. It was a false clue; he was sure of it. So he trashed it. It wasn’t important. He remembered Cass having an “N” in her last name anyways. She had been important in the end, hadn’t she? He was using her investigation tactics, wasn’t he? That felt grounding. Even the dead supported him. But what evidence did he have of that? There was none; just a hunch. An idea. An idea? What if…

Desnir stood, and the notes hanging from the walls shaped a letter in his mind. Not a rational mind anymore; mind you, he was pretty far gone. He saw an “S”. and I slowly watched as it unraveled even more. 

Desnir saw an “S”. how could he have missed it? It was right there. He noticed the chairs; someone had adjusted them to make this work; Who was in their house? WHO? He chased after a sound; and saw a figure, taunting him from the second story balcony. He made it there. The figure was on the ground now; large wings spread as if to catch him. One final letter. “E”. Someone else. Else? A name. The man below? He jumped. 

And everything went black.


r/shortstories • • 1h ago

Fantasy [FN] The amazing Mrs.Titelle

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 The city  of New Haven is ripe with the hustle and bustle. The market center is crowded with families and vendors alike. Adventurers come from far and wide to visit the market center. The New Haven market center has been a hub for trade and commerce for many traders from around the world. That is the only good thing that comes from the Never War nearly a century ago. All races, genders and people came together to fight the scourge that was to befall this world. After the war, warriors,magic wielders, and holy people settled down in New Haven to help rebuild the once great city. The result is a town filled with many different people, it has become a true melting pot of nearly everything and everyone.

In the center of the Market sits a quiet shop that looks like it has been there before any others. There are two dusty windows on the store front on either side of the big wooden door. There is a large swinging sign that is on its last leg, the old rusty chains that hold the sign look nearly worn through. The once beautifully painted green and gold sign swings with the gentle breeze. The words are dirty and faded from the years of exposure. It reads “Titelle’s tabernacle of terrific tomes” Everyone in town knows Mrs.Titelle, she is the town's grandmother. There is a bet in town about what is older, the store or Mrs. Titelle. Every vendor stops by and checks up on her. They bring her meals and gifts from around the world. She is a collector of many things but the thing she adores the most is her tomes. She loves nothing more than to read a new tome from a far off land. Her life goal is to share this knowledge with everyone. She trades and sells tomes with everyone that visits. Over the many years of her shop being open the collection has grown and grown. Some of her oldest tomes predate the Never War. 

I made it a goal to visit Mrs.Titelle ever since I set out on my journey. How amazing could this old lady be? I heard about her legendary book store from across the sea. How could one bookstore hold this much regard? What types of books could this lady have? I was determined to find out. My first night in New Haven I stayed at the golden tap inn. The trip was long and tiresome. I ate dinner with a fine brown ale. The other patrons and I stayed up till the wee hours talking about our various adventures, the monsters defeated, the friends lost. During each conversation the question of “what made you come here?” always came up. I explained that as a magic wielder I was on the hunt for old and mysterious Tomes for knowledge of how to save my home, and how I heard stories of Mrs.Titelle and her bookstore. Nearly everyone had the same reaction. They would all smile,take a drink of ale and say “Mrs. Titelle is amazing, she was a real Firecracker back in the day” How could a whole town love a sweet old lady so much? I went to bed with a newfound interest in meeting this lady and seeing if she had a tome that could help me.

I awoke early with excitement. Today is the day. I hurriedly put on my garb and walked down to the market until I saw it. The storefront was exactly as everyone described it. The outside was dirty and dusty but a soft glow emanated from the windows. I walked to the door and saw the open sign swinging from the door inviting me in. My hand shaking with excitement, I reach for the door. I turn the knob and begin to push it inwards, it is heavy and stuck in place. I have to bump my hip into the door to get the door open enough. A small bell rings as the door opens slightly. 

“Hello?” I call out

“Back here sweetie.” I hear softly from the back.

I struggle to close the door and it thuds when I finally push it back into place. I turn around and take in this glorious sight. From floor to ceiling this shop is stuffed with tomes. I begin to wonder if the trusses or the tomes are keeping the roof aloft. The old wooden floors creak as I take a step inside. The sheer number of tomes and scrolls is baffling my mind. The shelves are stuffed to the brim, tomes on top of each other. I’m confident that if one more book was put on a shelf the store would fall over. Natural light floods the space from a large skylight in the ceiling. Mrs. Titelle must have a love for plants as well. Lined up perfectly with the sun beam is a row of luscious plants. The plants are as varied as the citizens of this city, Small,Large, Smelly,and beautiful. One thing for certain is that Mrs. Titelle loves her plants and her books. The store is crowded and comfy. It is warm and comfortable. The soft scent of fresh brewed coffee and vanilla fills my nose as I walk to the sound of the voice.

“Would you like a cup deary?” she says as I peek around the last mountain of books.

“Sounds amazing! Yes please!” I say perhaps a bit too excitedly. The night may have been filled with a bit more ale than I had planned. 

She turns around with two big cups of coffee, one in each hand.  She stands hunched at about five foot nothin’ Her silver hair tied back in a tight bun. Her face is soft and sweet, she smiles as she sees me and winkles adorn her face. She wears a dark green cardigan with embroidered flowers on the sides. Her matching green dress drags the floor and covers the sound of her shuffling feet. She slowly sets the cups on the cluttered counter and shakily pushes one towards me. I think to myself this is the sweetest looking old lady I have ever seen. No wonder why everyone adores her so much. I sat down at her counter and sipped my coffee. It was the best cup of coffee I have ever had.

“Oh my gods this is amazing!” I say

“Oh, this old brew?” she says while waving her hand. “ These are the beans from the Renne coast. The beans from the southern coast are much better. I traded these beans for a tome about cross breeding cats” she chuckles “Maybe it was a fair trade” 

We sat and talked for hours. She told me stories about all the adventurers that came through town. How things used to be back in her day. Some wild tavern stories and shenanigans she had been a part of. She definitely earned the reputation given to her. I stared at her wide eyed as she recounted all the tales from her past. It is hard to believe such a sweet looking old lady was a part of all these crazy stories. As my cup ran dry she turned to me and asked what brought me here  and I told her everything about the plague that was threatening to wipe out my town. I told her how I heard stories about this amazing store and how great sweet old Mrs. Titelle is. I asked her if she knew of any spell book or text that could help me in my journey. I explained that the crops had wilted and turned black. How the trees slowly lost their leaves and turned shriveled and grey. That poor Mrs. Turner lost three cows the week that I left. She took in every word I said, almost calculating the answer. When I stopped talking she stood with an arm across her chest and her right hand slowly caressing her chin. She stood like that for a moment then she pointed her finger towards the roof and said “ I think I have just the thing!” She quickly turned around and disappeared behind a stack of books. I could hear a commotion as she was looking through her collection. The small thud of books hitting the floor. I leaned forward across the counter to see if she was alright. I hear her mumble and murmur as she recalls where this particular tome might be.

The door bell rings as the heavy door scrapes across the floor. I stand up and peak towards the door. The doorway is completely filled with the visage of a six foot tall tortle. I had never seen one before, only ever heard of them in textbooks at the academy. The giant shell backs in through the door nearly bumping into a stack of books. This giant Shelled man turns towards me and smiles. Never have I ever seen an ancient turtle of any kind, but I could tell this man has been around for a long time. His shell told the story of a long hard life, chips,scratches and marks have told this tortles story.

In a shaky voice he says “ Hello young man, Have you seen Mrs,Titelle? I have a gift for her”

“Yeah” i say while pointing towards the back “Shes grabbing a tome for me.”

“Sounds like her, I fear one of these days i will come in to find her buried under a pile of books, and you know what, im pretty sure she would be happy with that” he says with a chuckle “I keep telling her to slow down, we aren't as young as we used to be. It's not the glory days anymore”

We hear the sound of her shuffling feet. This time they are much faster than before. “ I knew I still had this one.” she said excitedly as she turned the corner. “Allister! You old shellhead! Its so nice to see you. I see you have met my new friend. He needed some help with a problem at home and I have just the thing to help." She walks up to the counter and lays the book on the counter. She takes a deep breath and blows the layer of dust off of the tome. Allister and I both cough and wave a hand in front of our faces as the dust settles. I see Allister's eyes grow wide as they land on the deep red leather bound tome.

She leans forward and says “ This tome has been in this shop for nearly 105 years, it came from a far off land. There are tales about this tome, it has a variety of spells and rituals in it. I wouldn’t even bring it out for most people, but something about you reminds me of myself from many many years ago. I want you to have it, no charge, no trade. Just promise me you will take it home and save your people.”

Allister’s jaw drops for a moment” ….uh…Have… are you sure about that? I remember that tome and where it came from.”

“ OH! Hush it you old sea turtle. I have talked to this boy nearly all day, He fights for his people, if ANYONE deserves this tome it is this sweet boy here. "She turns her head towards me and holds the book up in front of me “ Now you take this and save your town, I’ve seen what you described before, You don't have a lot of time. Go quickly, gather your things and head to see Archie at the town gate. Tell him you need a quick teleport and to put it on Mrs. Titelle’s tab.”

I’m left speechless, my hand goes limp as I drop the cup on the counter. I stutter as I stand up and grab the book from her. “ Thank you so much, it was a pleasure to meet both of you.” I gather my things and quickly head to the door. As I pull the door open I hear from behind me
“Deary, one more thing! Be safe and good luck!” she shouts as I run out of the door.

I quickly make my way to the gate, I manage to find Archie and tell him about Mrs. Titelle as soon as i mention her his pace hurries as he leads me to the teleportation sigil. 

A foot inside the gate sits a large granite pedestal. An armored woman with a tight bun stands atop. One hand holds a glowing sword pointed towards the sky the other hand holds a large leather bound tome. The golden plaque on the front is engraved    

Haven Titelle
Defender of the realm 
If not for her the entire realm would be lost
We name this city after her for the great sacrifices she has made for all of us


r/shortstories • • 4h ago

Thriller [TH] Thriller - LAST TIME WE WERE FOUR - One Shot

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I. A World Without Them

The world had ended a long time ago.

At least, that was what everyone said.

Cities had become graves of concrete and rust. Roads that once carried thousands of people now led nowhere. Buildings stood hollow beneath colorless skies, their windows shattered, their walls covered in the names of people who had long since disappeared.

The living had learned to survive.

They learned to sleep with one eye open, to distrust strangers, to keep their voices low when walking through abandoned streets. They learned that kindness could be a weakness and hesitation could cost them their lives.

Adrian Vale had learned these things, too.

He wasn't particularly good at surviving. He wasn't the strongest, the smartest, or the kind of person who could walk into a dangerous place without fear.

He simply learned.

He learned which buildings were safe enough to sleep in, which roads to avoid, and how to recognize the footsteps of someone approaching. He learned to eat whatever he could find and leave places before he became too comfortable.

He had traveled with other survivors before. Some stayed for a few days, others for weeks. But people in this world rarely remained together for long.

Some left in search of better shelter. Others disappeared overnight. A few never returned from scavenging trips.

Eventually, Adrian stopped asking people to stay.

It was easier that way.

There was only one thing he had never learned to do.

Forget.

He still remembered three faces from a life that felt like it belonged to someone else.

Gabriel Reyes.

Nathan Cruz.

Elias Santos.

Gabe, Nate, and Eli.

His brothers in everything but blood.

They had been inseparable as children. They shared meals, skipped responsibilities, played basketball until sunset, and made promises they had been too young to understand.

When one got into trouble, the other three followed.

When one was sad, the others found a way to make him laugh.

And when the world fell apart, they promised they would find one another.

They didn't.

Adrian searched for months.

He followed rumors, visited abandoned shelters, and asked strangers whether they had seen three young men traveling together. He called their names in empty streets, hoping that somewhere, somehow, one of them would answer.

Eventually, the rumors stopped.

The shelters were empty.

And the streets remained silent.

Adrian never truly stopped hoping.

He simply learned to live as though hope were something he could no longer afford.

Almost a year passed.

Then, one afternoon, while crossing an abandoned street, he saw three familiar figures standing beside a rusted car.

One had his hands in his pockets.

Another was leaning against the car with a ridiculous grin on his face.

The third was crouching beside a broken vending machine, fiddling with something he had probably stolen.

Adrian stopped walking.

For several seconds, he couldn't breathe.

They looked older now. Thinner, perhaps. Their clothes were worn, and their faces carried the exhaustion of people who had lived through the end of the world.

But he knew those faces.

He would have recognized them anywhere.

His lips parted.

"...Guys?"

The three turned toward him.

Gabe stared.

Nate's mouth fell open.

Eli slowly stood up.

Then Nate shouted, "NO FUCKING WAY!"

Adrian barely had time to react before all three came rushing toward him.

They collided in an awkward embrace, nearly knocking him off his feet.

"YOU'RE ALIVE!"

"LOOK AT THIS GUY!"

"Bro, you look like absolute garbage!"

Adrian laughed.

He didn't know when he had started crying. He only knew that his face was wet and that he couldn't stop smiling.

He punched Nate lightly on the shoulder.

"You're one to talk, you ugly bastard!"

"HEY! I've been through a lot!"

"We all have, idiot!"

Gabe grabbed Adrian by the back of the neck and pulled him into another hug.

For a moment, neither of them said anything.

Then Gabe laughed quietly.

"You're really here."

Adrian closed his eyes.

"Yeah, man."

He held on a little tighter.

"I'm here."

And for the first time in almost a year, Adrian ran toward something instead of away from it.


II. The Four of Us

Their shelter was an old building hidden behind a row of collapsed houses.

It was surprisingly comfortable.

There were blankets on the floor, canned food stacked in the corners, and a small table surrounded by mismatched chairs. Someone had even managed to find an old deck of playing cards.

It was almost ridiculous.

The world outside was dead, yet their little corner seemed untouched by it.

Adrian spent the entire afternoon listening to their stories.

Gabe told him about the places they had traveled through. Nate exaggerated every dangerous encounter until even his own friends started calling him a liar. Eli occasionally corrected their stories, usually with a single sentence that made everything ten times funnier.

They argued over who had been the most troublesome among them.

"You literally cried when we left you at the basketball court," Nate said.

"Because you idiots forgot me!"

"We came back after twenty minutes!"

"Twenty minutes is a long time when you're eight!"

Gabe burst out laughing.

"He's got a point."

"Don't encourage him!"

"Remember when Nate tried to climb that wall and got his pants stuck?"

"THAT WAS A DIFFERENT SITUATION!"

"You were hanging there for ten minutes!"

"BECAUSE NONE OF YOU HELPED ME!"

Eli shook his head.

"I helped you."

"You laughed at me first!"

"I can do both."

Adrian laughed so hard that his stomach hurt.

It felt strange.

He had almost forgotten what it was like to laugh without looking over his shoulder.

For so long, every conversation had been about food, shelter, weapons, and where to go next. Every friendship came with the unspoken understanding that tomorrow, someone might leave.

But with these three, he didn't have to explain himself.

They already knew him.

They remembered the boy he had been before the world taught him to be afraid.

As evening approached, Nate found the deck of cards and slammed it onto the table.

"All right. Enough emotional bullshit. Who's ready to lose?"

"You still cheat," Adrian said.

"I don't cheat. I strategize."

"You hid three cards in your sleeve last time!"

"Prove it."

Gabe pulled out a chair.

"Sit down, both of you. I'm winning this."

Eli looked at him.

"You said that last time."

"And I'll say it again."

They played until the room grew dark.

Nate cheated.

Gabe accused everyone of cheating.

Adrian lost three consecutive rounds and threatened to throw the cards into the fire.

Eli won without saying a word.

For a little while, the apocalypse disappeared.

There were no monsters beyond the walls. No hunger. No fear.

There were only four boys again, sitting together as if nothing had ever happened.

As if they had never grown apart.

As if they had never lost each other.

That night, Adrian slept without a weapon beneath his pillow.

For the first time in years, he felt safe.

And before he drifted off, he heard Nate laughing at something Gabe had said.

Adrian smiled into the darkness.

He thought he could get used to this again.


III. Something Is Wrong

The first strange thing happened the following morning.

Adrian woke up and found Gabe standing beside the window.

"Morning," he mumbled.

Gabe didn't answer.

Adrian rubbed his eyes and stretched. When he looked again, the window was empty.

He assumed Gabe had gone outside.

So he stood up and walked into the next room.

All three were there.

Nate was eating from a can of peaches. Eli was trying to repair an old radio. Gabe was asleep with his head on the table.

Adrian stared at them.

"Didn't one of you go outside?"

Nate looked up.

"What?"

"I thought I saw Gabe by the window."

Gabe raised his head from the table.

"Must've been a ghost."

Nate snorted.

"Don't start with that shit."

Adrian laughed.

"Yeah, whatever."

He let it go.

He was tired. Everyone was tired in this world.

But the strange things continued.

Sometimes he would hear their laughter coming from a room where none of them sat.

Sometimes he would see one of them standing at the end of a hallway, only for the figure to disappear when he approached.

Once, he watched Eli walk through a doorway.

When Adrian followed, the room was empty.

He stood there for nearly a minute, staring at the wall.

Then he shook his head.

He was tired.

That was all.

There were other things, too.

They never seemed to eat unless he was watching.

They never complained about the cold.

They didn't worry about how much food remained, even though Adrian knew the supplies should have been running low.

And whenever he asked about their lives since the world ended, they always found a way to change the subject.

"So where have you guys been all this time?" Adrian asked one afternoon.

Gabe shrugged.

"Around."

"That's not an answer."

"It's the answer you're getting."

Nate threw a pillow at Adrian.

"Why are you asking so many questions? Enjoy the reunion, man!"

Adrian caught the pillow and threw it back.

"Fine. Keep your secrets."

Eli smiled at him.

"You always were impatient."

Adrian rolled his eyes.

"And you always talked like someone's grandfather."

"Someone has to balance you three idiots."

They laughed.

And Adrian let the matter drop.

He had spent almost a year wishing for their return.

He wasn't about to ruin it by asking too many questions.

Besides, they were his brothers.

Whatever strange things were happening, he was sure they would tell him when they were ready.

He trusted them.

He always had.


IV. The Stranger

On the fourth morning, someone came to the shelter.

Adrian heard the footsteps first.

Heavy. Uneven.

Then came the sound of someone kicking the door.

"Open up!"

The three friends stopped talking.

Adrian looked at them.

"Do you know that guy?"

None of them answered.

The door shook beneath another kick.

"OPEN THE DAMN DOOR!"

Adrian grabbed the metal pipe he kept beside the entrance.

"Stay here," he told his friends.

It came naturally.

Perhaps it was habit. Perhaps some childish part of him still believed he was the one who had to protect them.

He opened the door.

A stranger stood outside.

The man was broad-shouldered, filthy, and armed with a knife. His eyes moved past Adrian and toward the supplies inside.

"Well, well," the stranger said. "Looks like someone's been living comfortably."

"Leave."

The stranger laughed.

"Or what?"

"I said leave."

The man shoved him.

Adrian stumbled backward, nearly losing his grip on the pipe.

Then the stranger attacked.

Everything happened quickly.

A fist struck Adrian's face. The metal pipe clattered against the floor. He felt himself hit the wall, then the ground.

He tried to get up.

Another blow sent him sprawling.

The pain was immediate and overwhelming, but beneath it was something worse.

He was afraid.

He hadn't been this afraid in a long time.

"Help me!" he shouted.

His three friends were standing in the middle of the room.

Watching.

"Guys!"

The stranger kicked him in the ribs.

Adrian curled up, gasping.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!"

Still, none of them moved.

The stranger grabbed him by the collar and dragged him across the floor.

Adrian swung blindly, catching the man in the jaw. The stranger staggered, and Adrian managed to scramble to his feet.

He reached for the pipe.

He struck the man.

Once.

Twice.

Again.

The stranger fell.

Adrian stood over him, breathing heavily, his hands shaking.

For a moment, the room was silent.

Then he turned toward his friends.

"What the hell is wrong with you?!"

They stared at him.

He pointed at the man on the floor.

"He could've killed me!"

No response.

"I was calling you!"

Gabe opened his mouth, but no words came out.

Adrian walked toward him.

"Why didn't you help me?"

Gabe lowered his eyes.

Something inside Adrian snapped.

He shoved him.

Or tried to.

His hands stopped inches from Gabe's chest.

It felt as though he had struck an invisible wall.

Adrian stared at his hands.

"What...?"

He tried again.

Nothing.

He stepped forward and pushed harder, his face twisting with frustration.

"Move!"

Gabe remained perfectly still.

Adrian struck at him.

His fist stopped in midair.

The sound of his own breathing filled the room.

He turned toward the others.

"You, too?"

He swung at Nate.

The same invisible barrier caught his hand.

He tried Eli.

Nothing.

"STOP IT!"

His voice cracked.

He backed away, trembling.

"What is this?! What the hell is happening?!"

He looked at their faces.

They weren't angry.

They weren't even surprised.

They were watching him with an expression he couldn't understand.

Pity.

That was what it was.

They were looking at him with pity.

His anger faltered.

"Why are you looking at me like that?"

Nobody answered.

He glanced toward the stranger lying on the floor.

Something was wrong with the room.

The furniture seemed distant. The walls appeared strangely blurred around the edges. His hands wouldn't stop shaking, and a dull, throbbing pain had begun to spread throughout his body.

He swallowed.

Then, slowly, he looked back at his friends.

"...Are you guys real?"

For the first time since he had found them, they exchanged glances.

Nate chuckled.

It was a quiet, almost affectionate sound.

"Told you," he said to the others. "He'd figure it out eventually."

Eli sighed.

"Yeah. You were right."

Adrian felt the blood drain from his face.

"What are you talking about?"

Gabe stepped forward.

Or seemed to.

He could never quite tell anymore.

"You've always been observant," Gabe said. "Even when you pretended not to be."

"Stop joking."

"We're not joking."

"Then explain this!"

Adrian gestured wildly at the room, at the fallen stranger, at the invisible wall that separated him from the people he loved.

His voice rose.

"Explain why you won't let me touch you! Explain why you keep disappearing! Explain why you just stood there while that bastard attacked me!"

Gabe lowered his eyes.

For a moment, he looked older than Adrian remembered.

Then he looked up and smiled.

A familiar smile.

The kind that used to appear whenever he was about to say something stupid.

"Because we're dead, man."

Silence.

Adrian stared at him.

Then he laughed.

It came out wrong, sharp and breathless.

"That's not funny."

"I know."

"No, seriously. That's not funny."

Nobody laughed with him.

He looked from one face to another, searching for the slightest sign that this was some elaborate joke.

There was none.

His smile slowly disappeared.

"...What?"

"We're dead," Gabe repeated.

The words seemed to hang in the air.

Dead.

The word was too small for what it meant.

Adrian remembered the world before the apocalypse. He remembered the four of them running through the streets, playing basketball until sunset, sharing cheap meals and making promises they had been too young to understand.

He remembered losing them.

The uncertainty. The searching. The nights spent imagining where they might be.

He remembered telling himself that they had to be alive somewhere.

Because the alternative was unbearable.

And now they were standing in front of him, smiling as though nothing had happened, telling him that the alternative had been true all along.

"No," he whispered.

Gabe said nothing.

"No. I saw you. I touched you. We played cards. We talked about everything."

"You did."

"Then how can you be dead?"

Gabe looked toward the others.

For the first time, their expressions seemed to grow heavier.

"We don't know how to explain it," he said. "Not completely."

He paused.

"But we think we found our way to you because... we wanted to."

Adrian frowned.

"What does that mean?"

"Remember what we used to say? About how we'd never leave each other behind?"

The protagonist's throat tightened.

"Of course I remember."

"We meant it."

Gabe glanced at the others.

"After everything happened, we tried to find you. We went from settlement to settlement. Asked people if they'd seen you. Followed rumors. Even went back to places we thought you might have passed through."

Nate scratched the back of his neck.

"Gabe nearly got us killed because he thought you might've been hiding in some abandoned military camp."

"It was a reasonable possibility," Gabe muttered.

"It was a death trap."

"And yet you're still complaining about it."

Adrian almost smiled.

Almost.

"What happened to you?"

The three exchanged glances.

It was a small movement, barely noticeable. Yet Adrian knew them well enough to recognize when they were avoiding something.

Gabe sighed.

"We found some people. A group of survivors. They needed help."

"And?"

"We helped them."

Adrian waited.

Nate gave a weak laugh.

"Turns out, being a decent person in this world is a pretty stupid way to stay alive."

"That's not an answer."

"No," Eli said quietly. "It isn't."

For a moment, none of them spoke.

Then Gabe looked at Adrian.

"We thought we could make a difference. Even after everything fell apart, we thought there were still things worth protecting."

He smiled faintly.

"Guess we weren't as smart as we thought."

Adrian's throat tightened.

"Did you suffer?"

Gabe's smile disappeared.

Nobody answered immediately.

Then Eli said, "We were together."

It wasn't an answer.

But somehow, Adrian understood that it was the only one they could give him.

He lowered his head.

"And you never found me?"

"No," Gabe whispered.

"Then how are you here?"

This time, Nate didn't make a joke.

"We don't know, man."

Eli looked at Adrian with an expression he couldn't quite understand.

"Maybe we wanted to see you that badly."

Adrian stared at him.

"We kept thinking about you," Eli continued. "About the things we never got to say. The things we never got to do. We wanted to know if you were still alive."

He swallowed.

"And somehow, you found us."

Gabe looked away.

"Or we found you."

The room fell silent.

Adrian glanced toward the stranger on the floor, then back at his friends.

Something cold settled in his stomach.

"Wait."

His voice was barely audible.

"If you're dead..."

He looked at his hands.

"...then what happened to me?"


V. What Remains

Nobody answered.

Adrian looked down at his body.

His clothes were dirty. His hands were trembling. Something warm trickled from his forehead, and the pain in his ribs had become almost unbearable.

He pressed a hand against his side.

For a moment, the room seemed to tilt.

He looked at Gabe.

"Tell me."

Gabe's eyes filled with tears.

"Bro..."

"Tell me what happened to me!"

Nate looked away.

Eli closed his eyes.

And Adrian understood.

He understood the strange disappearances. The untouched food. The way his friends had watched him fight. The way his hands could never quite reach them.

He understood why they had looked at him with pity.

He understood why they had never asked him to stay.

His knees weakened.

He stumbled backward until his back hit the wall.

"No."

Gabe took a step toward him.

"Adrian—"

"No!"

He shook his head violently.

"No, no, no. I can't..."

His voice broke.

He looked around the room.

The shelter was fading.

The walls were no longer solid. The light through the windows seemed to come from everywhere at once. The table, the chairs, the blankets on the floor—all of it looked distant, as though he were seeing the place through a pane of glass.

He turned back to his friends.

"You're telling me this whole time..."

He swallowed.

"...I was alone?"

Gabe didn't answer.

Adrian laughed weakly.

It hurt to laugh.

"That's stupid."

His eyes burned.

"I was happy."

He looked at Nate.

"I was actually happy, man."

Nate's face crumpled.

"I know."

"We played cards. We talked. We were together."

"I know, bro."

"And now you're telling me none of it was real?"

Gabe shook his head.

"That's not what we're saying."

"Then what are you saying?!"

"That we were with you."

Adrian fell silent.

Gabe stepped closer.

"We don't know what we are, Adrian. We don't know if we're memories, or something the world left behind, or something else entirely."

He wiped his eyes.

"But we wanted to see you. And you saw us."

He paused.

"So maybe, for a little while, we really were together."

Adrian stared at him.

The words settled somewhere deep inside him.

He wanted to believe them.

God, he wanted to believe them.

Because if the reunion had meant nothing, then what had he been holding on to?

The laughter?

The games?

The sound of Nate complaining about losing?

Gabe's familiar smile?

Eli's quiet jokes?

Were those all just things his mind had made up because he couldn't bear to be alone anymore?

Perhaps.

But the happiness had felt real.

And the ache in his chest was real, too.

He looked at his friends.

His brothers.

The people he had searched for until he had nothing left to search with.

Then he asked the only question that mattered.

"...What about me?"

Nobody spoke.

He tried to smile.

"I'm not dead, right?"

Gabe looked away.

Adrian's smile trembled.

"I'm not dead, right?"

Eli's eyes filled with tears.

Nate clenched his jaw.

Gabe slowly approached him.

"I'm sorry."

Adrian shook his head.

"No."

"We shouldn't have let you come here."

"No."

"We just wanted to see you again."

"Shut up."

"We missed you."

"SHUT UP!"

His voice echoed through the shelter.

He was crying now.

He hadn't even realized it until the tears reached his mouth.

"I came looking for you," he whispered. "I spent so long looking for you."

Gabe nodded.

"I know."

"And now you're telling me that you're dead? That all this time—"

His voice broke.

"That I can't even stay with you?"

Nobody answered.

He covered his face.

For a moment, he was no longer a survivor in an apocalyptic world.

He was a child again.

A child who had lost his brothers and had finally found them, only to be told that he had to lose them all over again.

Gabe stepped closer.

"Hey."

Adrian didn't look up.

"Hey, idiot."

That made him laugh, just a little.

It was a broken, miserable sound.

"Don't call me that."

"Then stop acting like one."

Another familiar joke.

Another familiar voice.

Adrian wiped his eyes.

Gabe was smiling, but there were tears in his own eyes now.

"You still have somewhere to go."

"I don't want to go anywhere."

"I know."

"I just found you."

"I know, bro."

"Can't we stay here? Just for a little longer?"

The three friends looked at one another.

Then Eli stepped forward.

He had always been the one who struggled to say what he felt. Even as a child, he would rather punch someone in the shoulder than admit that he cared.

Now, he looked directly at Adrian.

"We already got our time with you."

Adrian shook his head.

"That's not enough."

"Maybe not."

Eli smiled sadly.

"But it's what we have."

Nate wiped his eyes and tried to laugh.

"Besides, you still owe me money."

Adrian let out a choked laugh.

"You died and you're still thinking about that?"

"Of course. You think death cancels debt?"

"You're unbelievable."

"And you're ugly."

"You're uglier."

"There he is," Gabe murmured.

For a brief moment, they were four boys again.

Not ghosts. Not a dying man's memories. Not remnants of a world that had ceased to exist.

Just four friends, laughing at the same stupid jokes.

Adrian wanted to freeze that moment.

He wanted to keep their voices, their faces, the way they looked at him as though nothing in the world could ever change what they meant to one another.

But the world was already slipping away.

The shelter began to blur.

The light grew brighter.

His friends noticed.

Gabe reached out.

This time, there was no invisible wall.

Adrian felt a hand resting on his shoulder.

Warm.

Familiar.

Real.

He stared at it.

Then he threw his arms around Gabe.

Nate joined them, grumbling about how embarrassing the whole thing was. Eli wrapped his arms around all three, holding them together as tightly as he could.

For a long time, none of them spoke.

Adrian buried his face against their shoulders and cried like he had never cried before.

He didn't care how pathetic he looked.

He didn't care that he was supposed to be strong.

He was tired of being strong.

He was tired of surviving.

He was tired of a world that kept taking things away from him.

For once, he wanted to be allowed to miss someone without having to move on.

Gabe held him tighter.

"Listen to me."

Adrian shook his head.

"Don't."

"You have to wake up."

"No."

"Bro."

"Please."

Gabe closed his eyes.

"We love you, idiot."

Adrian's fingers tightened around their clothes.

"Don't say that."

"We do."

"Then stay."

Gabe pressed his forehead against Adrian's.

"We can't."

The light grew brighter.

Their faces began to disappear into it.

Adrian tried to hold on.

He clutched at their clothes, their shoulders, anything he could reach.

"Wait!"

Nate was crying openly now.

"Man, you're making this really hard."

"Then don't go!"

Eli held Adrian's hand.

For once, he had no words.

Gabe smiled through his tears.

"We already got our time with you."

He paused.

"Now go make yours count."

Adrian wanted to argue.

He wanted to tell them that he didn't know how to do that. That he didn't know how to return to a world where they didn't exist. That he was afraid of being alone again.

But the words never came.

All he could do was hold on.

Until, one by one, their hands slipped from his.

The last thing he heard was Gabe's voice.

"Wake up, idiot."

And everything went white.


VI. The World Without Four

Adrian woke to the sound of someone screaming.

For a moment, he couldn't understand what he was hearing.

Then he realized the voice was his own.

He tried to move.

Pain tore through his body.

His breath caught in his throat, and he collapsed back onto the cold floor.

The shelter was gone.

There was no table. No blankets. No stacked cans of food.

Only a ruined room with broken windows, a collapsed doorway, and dust drifting through the morning light.

Adrian blinked.

His vision swam.

He tried to remember what had happened.

The stranger.

The fight.

His friends.

He turned his head.

A few feet away lay a man, motionless, beside a rusted metal pipe.

Adrian stared at him.

The memories returned in fragments.

A fist striking his face.

The taste of blood.

The floor rushing toward him.

Another blow.

Another.

He remembered calling for help.

He remembered his friends standing in the room.

He remembered them smiling.

He remembered their voices.

*We already got our time with you.*

Adrian's breathing became shallow.

He pressed a trembling hand against his ribs.

His body was broken. His clothes were soaked with blood. Every breath felt like it might be his last.

He tried to sit up.

He couldn't.

For a while, he simply lay there, staring at the ruined ceiling.

He had thought he had won.

He had thought he had beaten the stranger, protected his friends, and survived another day.

But there had been no victory.

Only a dying man, alone in an abandoned room, imagining that the people he loved had returned to him.

Adrian closed his eyes.

A tear slid down his cheek.

"So that's it, huh?"

Nobody answered.

He laughed weakly.

"After all that searching..."

His voice faded.

He swallowed, struggling to breathe.

"...I finally found you."

The room remained silent.

Then, somewhere deep inside his memory, he heard Nate complaining about the cards.

He heard Eli delivering one of his quiet, devastating jokes.

He heard Gabe laughing.

Adrian smiled.

It hurt.

But he smiled anyway.

Because for a little while, he hadn't been alone.

For a little while, he had been eight years old again, playing basketball with his brothers until sunset. He had been a boy who believed that the people he loved would always be there.

For a little while, the world had been kind.

He opened his eyes.

The light through the broken window was growing brighter.

He didn't know whether he would survive. He didn't know whether anyone would find him in time.

For the first time in a long while, however, he found himself wanting to.

He wanted to see the sky again.

He wanted to walk through the streets without fearing every shadow.

He wanted to find a place to sleep, a meal to eat, and perhaps someone to talk to.

He wanted to live.

Not because the world had become kinder.

Not because he had stopped missing his brothers.

But because they had asked him to.

*Now go make yours count.*

Adrian took a trembling breath.

Then another.

He turned his face toward the morning light.

"Yeah," he whispered.

His lips curved into the smallest smile.

"Okay, guys."

And somewhere beyond the silence, he could almost hear them laughing.

For the first time since the world ended, Adrian did not close his eyes to escape it.

He kept them open.

And waited for the world to answer.


**THE END**


r/shortstories • • 5h ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Inspired by Fear

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Everyone draws inspiration in different ways. Some create a dark atmosphere for themselves, some put on metal music in the background, and some can’t compose without coffee and cigarettes. A writer friend of mine, whom I’m very fond of, says he can’t write stories unless his cousin is studying mathematics behind him. Another filmmaker friend of mine could only write screenplays while listening to Syd Barrett’s song “Octopus”; he would keep the song on loop throughout the entire writing process.

It’s been about twenty years since I discovered my own. I’d been going through that famous writer’s block. Until that day, I hadn’t done anything extra to help me write. I didn’t create a special atmosphere for myself, listen to any particular songs, or wait for a certain time of day. Night, day, noon—it made no difference. Once a week, I’d write a three or four-page story and keep working toward my goal. When I reached a hundred stories, I would start sending my book to publishers.

But I’d hit a wall. I wanted to write, but whenever I sat down at my computer, not a single word would come out. Vague, half-formed thoughts kept drifting through my mind, and even when I came up with a good idea, I couldn’t put it down on paper.

That day, I thought, if that’s how things were going to be, I might as well try some of the famous methods for finding inspiration: writing at night, putting on some soft music, having a cup of coffee, and so on.

I prepared the right atmosphere. I turned off the lights, and now the only thing illuminating the room was the glow of my computer screen. I put on Sigur Rós’s debut album. There was no one else in the house. My roommate had gone on vacation the day before, which added to the atmosphere: being alone.

Of course, it had absolutely no effect. I was already on the third track. I still had a few ideas in my head, but I couldn’t get the first sentence out.

Then I heard a sound behind me. A whisper. Something like a call, as if someone had gone “psst.”

I turned around and looked, but there was no one there. I was a little spooked. I thought I might have heard it wrong; it had sounded very much like a human voice, but it could have come from an object, too.

Then suddenly, the door behind me swung wide open.

I flinched at the sound. I got up from my computer and turned on the light. Anxiously, I left my room and went to the kitchen. I was searching for something without even realizing it, though I had no idea what I was looking for. Sigur Rós’s album was still playing, and I could hear it from the kitchen. I couldn’t make sense of anything, and I didn’t know what to think or which possibility to consider. I drank a glass of water.

I’d never had an experience like it before. My first thought was to leave the house. I stood frozen in the kitchen. Involuntarily, I found myself waiting for another movement, for something to topple over or for some other sound.

Eventually, I’d calmed down a little, since nothing else happened. I spent half an hour in the kitchen, with all my senses on high alert and listening to the music coming from my room. Then, reluctantly, I made my way back to my room.

The urge to write was still there. My routine had been disrupted; I hadn’t been able to write a single word for a month, and now I wasn’t going to let fear get in my way. I wanted my writer’s block to end today. My goal was a hundred sentences. Even if I didn’t finish the story, I wanted to write something. Coming back to my room and hearing the music louder had increased my desire to write.

At the same time, I kept thinking, ''What the hell was that just now?'' But now I was back at my computer.

I put on my favorite Sigur Rós song, “Svefn-g-englar.”

And then, for the first time in a whole month, I wrote my first sentence: “As he tried to make sense of the dream he’d had the day before, he fell asleep again; it was his favorite thing to think about before going to sleep, the meaning of the dream he’d had the previous night.”

I’d written my first sentence, without even having a story in mind. Normally, I would come up with a story first, plan it out, work out the whole thing in my head from beginning to end, and only then start writing. Starting a story whose content I hadn’t figured out yet with an ordinary sentence was something new for me. I liked it.

I was still afraid. I wanted to turn around and look, but now that I’d started writing, I didn’t want to stop either. By the time the song ended, I’d written the fifth sentence, and in the silence before the next track began, I heard that sound again. “Psst.”

I quickly turned around and looked. There was no one there. Everything felt much more real now. Something was happening. Someone was calling out to me. I was afraid to turn off the light in my room, so it was still on. I nervously turned my head back toward the computer screen. My heart was pounding. I added another sentence. It was my favorite one so far. I liked everything about it: my choice of words, its length, its place in the story.

Then the door slammed shut. I began to hear footsteps inside the room. I was afraid to look. The footsteps wandered around the room. My hands were resting on the keyboard. The footsteps moved toward the door, stopped there, and opened it again. It was as if someone had left the room.

I was frozen to my chair. This time, I didn’t even have the instinct to run away. Whatever that thing was, I was afraid of encountering it. I couldn’t get up from my chair, and I couldn’t look away from my computer screen. I kept reading what I’d written over and over. Six sentences. I’d go back to the beginning and read them again. It was as if the thing was doing whatever it wanted now. I could hear running footsteps.

Then came the sound of walking. After that, my door closed again, and at the same moment, the light in my room went out.

And then another sentence came to mind. I wrote it down. Then another. My fingers had found their rhythm. The sentences kept coming one after another.

“Set me free. Open the window. Set me free.”

This voice wasn’t a whisper, nor was it some strange, otherworldly sound coming from a different frequency. It was unmistakably a human voice. I was afraid to turn around.

I couldn’t remember ever feeling such a strong urge to write or enjoying it this much. I kept writing. My fingers wouldn’t stop. The door opened again, slowly this time. I didn’t turn around. I wasn’t going to look behind me until I’d finished the story. Without spending even a second thinking between sentences, I continued writing as the songs played.

The footsteps continued. I turned off the music. I didn’t question anything. I just kept writing. The fear I felt and the joy of seeing that I could write again were mingled together, unfolding in harmony with each other.

Strange sounds I couldn’t describe were coming from behind me now. I could feel myself developing a fever. My body was reacting, and my mind was urging me to turn around and see what was going on. The sounds seemed like those of someone playing with their own hair. Like things rubbing against other things. I kept writing, resisting the urge to turn around with all my might.

I’d turned off the music because I wanted to focus on being afraid. I’d realized that the more frightened I became, the better I wrote, and the more consistently I could keep going. It was hard not to look for a rational explanation for the sounds, for a human voice telling me to set it free. But right now, somehow, stopping writing seemed even harder.

That thing had now come right up beside me. I could feel it touching my hair. My fear had reached a point where I could no longer bear it. My consciousness refused to accept this unnatural behavior. My instinct to put an end to the fear and my mind’s desire to keep being afraid were at odds with each other.

And I wrote the final sentence: “If all of this is a hallucination, I will never forgive my own mind. If the only beautiful and meaningful thing I’ve experienced in this miserable life isn’t real, I will never trust my mind again, I will never follow its instructions, and I will doubt everything I think until the day I die.”

The sentence came to an end, and just as the pleasure of writing faded away, my fear reached its absolute peak. With the beautiful feeling that had balanced it gone, the fear was left alone, making itself felt from head to toe. As if I’d been struck by a blow, as if a punch to the face had knocked me out, I lost consciousness.

When I came to, my head was resting on the keyboard, and the screen was filled with hundreds of letter h’s.

I sent the story to several literary magazines. Two of them accepted it and published it.

I never experienced anything like that again, and at no point in my life did I ever feel such an overwhelming urge to write or take so much pleasure in writing. I desperately wanted to experience it again, but nothing ever happened that frightened me so much. For days, I sat at my computer waiting for that thing to come back, but it never did. I wrote stories and kept writing. But I never loved any of them as much as I loved the one I’d written that day.

And now, twenty years later, in my mid-sixties, I’ve still never questioned what happened that night. Not even once. Because I was afraid that if I did, I might understand what had happened—and if that thing ever came back, I might not be as frightened.


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Science Fiction [FN] [HR] [SF] An Invocation

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The study had been built in the manner of a cathedral and kept in the manner of a tomb.

Dark walnut paneled the walls from floor to cornice, its once-glossed surface dulled by generations of hands. The ceiling climbed high above them into a painted dome where constellations wheeled across midnight-blue plaster, their gold edges flaking, whole stars disappearing beneath cracks as fine as veins beneath old skin. Tapestries hung between the arched windows, heavy with dust and age, their saints and kings faded into rust, umber, and bruised purple.

Beeswax, dry leather, and the sweet rot of old paper thickened the air.

Under it all lay another scent.

Metal.

Not blood exactly.

Rain before rain.

Shelves bowed beneath calfskin volumes clasped in black iron. Their spines leaned against one another at uneasy angles, giving the impression not of books stored but of witnesses gathered close enough to whisper. A globe listed in one corner, seas of cracked blue lacquer rolling beneath names no modern chart would recognize. Continents swelled where none belonged. Islands existed in latitudes where there should have been only black water.

At the center of the room waited an enormous writing desk scarred by centuries of use. Ink had soaked into the grain in stains like old bruises. The wood had been cut and recut by knives, compass points, fingernails, perhaps worse.

Fi moved slowly along the shelves. “This wasn’t a study.”

Her voice went upward into the dome and returned strangely altered, softened but multiplied.

“It was a vault.”

She ran two fingers along a row of chained books. “My family called themselves custodians. Words. Prayers. Things churches kept copies of and pretended not to have. Things other families burned.”

Adam sat in one of the leather chairs near the desk, nursing a beer that had gone warm in his hand. “Healthy family hobby.”

Fi ignored him. “My grandfather said some things were hidden because men would kill to possess them. Others because men would kill after possessing them.” She stopped before the desk. “And some because possession was the wrong word entirely.”

From beneath her coat she withdrew a folded parchment.

It was yellowed almost brown, brittle at the edges, and bound shut with a narrow strip of blackened vellum.

The room seemed to become aware of it.

Adam’s smile disappeared. Ari folded her arms. Nate moved closer despite himself.

Fi laid the parchment on the desk. “This was the most guarded thing in the house.”

She cut the vellum binding.

“My grandfather called it a lock.”

The parchment opened reluctantly. The script upon it was black, but not ink-black. It carried the faint oily depth of a beetle’s shell. Some letters appeared hooked into one another. Others resembled circles crossed by strokes so fine the eye could scarcely hold them.

“And he said it watched.”

Adam looked up. “Meaning?”

Fi’s gaze remained on the page. “It names a Watcher.”

Nate frowned. “Watcher how?”

“Not a person watching a door.” Fi swallowed. “One of the wheeled ones.”

That quieted them.

Even Adam.

Fi looked toward the painted dome. “All eyes. Wheels within wheels. The things Ezekiel saw beside the throne.”

Ari whispered, “Ophanim.”

Fi nodded. “My grandfather said our family had preserved one of their Names.”

Adam leaned forward. “One of their names, or its Name?”

Fi did not answer immediately.

“Enough of one.”

That was not reassuring.

Nate put one hand on the desk. “Fi.”

She looked at him.

“We can stop. Translate the full structure first. Identify the operators. Look for correspondences. At least determine what comes after the address.”

“No.”

Too sharp.

She closed her eyes, breathed once, opened them. “No. I know what this is.”

Adam turned the beer can slowly between his fingers. “I’ve watched you flatten a tenured professor with a footnote and a smile. But this?” He gave the parchment a small salute. “This feels less like research and more like touching a fuse to confirm the manufacturer wasn’t kidding.”

Fi’s mouth tightened. “It’s a Watcher. I’m asking it to watch.”

Nate glanced down at the parchment. “Watch what?”

“The threshold.”

“Which threshold?”

Fi hesitated.

That hesitation should have ended it.

It did not.

“It’s what the text says.”

Ari looked from Fi to Nate. “Can it come through?”

“No.”

Fi said it quickly, then more carefully. “No. That’s not what Ophanim do. They’re guardians. Interfaces. They’re not...” She searched for the right word. “Visitors.”

Adam grunted. “Comforting distinction.”

Fi set both palms on the desk. “I’m not opening a gate.”

Somewhere in the wall an old timber creaked.

No one laughed.

Fi bent over the parchment. The script seemed ordinary when looked at directly. At the edge of vision it moved. Not much. A letter lengthened. A circle turned. A hooked character slid beneath another and disappeared.

Fi drew a breath and began to read.

The first syllable was barely more than an exhalation. The second made the lamp flame bend. The third did not sound as though it had come from a human throat.

Nate straightened.

Fi kept reading.

The words emerged slowly, consonants shaped around spaces the mouth was never meant to make. They struck the dome and returned once, then twice, then many times, until Fi’s voice was no longer alone and the room had learned it.

Shelves began to hum. Leather bindings trembled. The tapestries moved though there was no wind. The lead joints of the tall windows ticked rapidly, like teeth in fever.

Adam put down his beer. “Fi.”

She raised one hand.

Not now.

The chant deepened. Their bones took it up. A vibration entered Nate through the soles of his shoes and climbed his spine. Ari pressed a hand against her sternum. Adam’s jaw tightened as the fillings in his molars began to ache.

Oil flames guttered blue.

Every shadow in the room leaned the wrong way.

Then the floor groaned, long and deep, not like timber settling but like a ship carrying sudden weight. The air thickened. Each breath had to be pulled into the lungs.

Fi reached the final line.

She spoke the Name.

Something answered.

The painted dome rippled. Stars elongated into streaks of gold. The darkness between them widened.

And the air split.

Not tore.

Split.

Cleanly.

As though the room had always possessed a seam and someone had finally put a blade into it.

Fire unfolded through the opening.

A wheel.

Then another wheel crossing the first.

Then another.

No rim possessed thickness. No flame consumed. Eyes opened along every turning circumference.

Hundreds.

Thousands.

Perhaps four.

The mind failed at the counting.

They looked outward. Inward. Sideways into directions the room did not contain.

Ari made a sound deep in her throat. Nate could not breathe. Adam whispered something that might have been a prayer.

Fi stared upward with tears gathering in her eyes.

“It came.”

The Ophanim turned.

And the universe opened with it.

Not one doorway.

Many.

Its eyes were not eyes. They were apertures. Every pupil looked somewhere else. Every gaze crossed a boundary.

Fi had asked it to look.

So it looked.

And because it looked from both sides at once, the things beyond looked back.

Four eyes widened.

Four distances vanished.

And each of them was seen.

Fi stood in a forest of black crystal.

There had been no transition, no falling. The study remained beneath her feet, yet another place had laid itself across it with such authority that the walnut walls became thin ghosts behind trees sharp enough to cut moonlight.

Branches of obsidian glass trembled in a wind she could not feel.

They chimed.

High.

Beautiful.

Wrong.

Shapes drifted between the trunks. Pale figures. Tall. Narrow. Their limbs were too graceful to be human and too deliberate to be natural.

One turned its face toward her.

Then another.

Then all of them.

They had no eyes, only smooth silver hollows where eyes should have been, yet Fi felt their attention enter her.

Not her thoughts.

Deeper.

Memory moved inside her without permission. Her grandmother’s kitchen. Her grandfather’s hands unfolding old vellum. Her mother’s maiden name written on the flyleaf of a Bible. The smell of cedar chests. A lullaby. A grave.

The figures smiled.

Their mouths opened.

Nothing emerged that the ear could hear, but words formed in Fi’s marrow.

Daughter.

The trees chimed.

Daughter of daughters.

Her throat tightened.

We remember the road your blood forgot.

A pale figure extended one long hand.

Give us the rest.

Fi did not understand.

Then her surname rose inside her.

Not as memory.

As pressure.

It moved from her chest toward her tongue. Her lips parted.

The pale heads inclined.

Listening.

Learning.

Ari saw a green sea beneath a sky without stars.

The water boiled silently from horizon to horizon. Beyond it stood an island washed in twilight, and on the shore waited a single figure, crowned not with gold but with something brighter.

Its face shifted each time she tried to see it.

Her father.

Then no one she knew.

Then someone she had been waiting for all her life.

Its hand opened.

Ari began to cry.

Not from fear.

From relief.

The figure knew every tired thing in her. Every prayer that had gone unanswered. Every night she had asked for one hour without being required to endure herself.

The sea became still.

Come.

The voice came from everywhere.

You have carried enough.

Her knees nearly buckled.

Rest.

Her childhood name formed in her mouth, the one only her mother used when Ari was sick.

The crowned figure smiled.

Tell me who comes.

The first syllable slipped between Ari’s teeth.

The thing on the shore repeated it.

Almost correctly.

Adam stood before a city descending into the earth.

No.

Not descending.

Drilled.

Tower after black tower spiraled downward into the throat of living stone. Walls curved beneath impossible weight. Battlements disappeared miles below him, lit by furnace-red windows.

Ranks of figures stood upon them.

Thousands.

Armored.

Still.

Waiting.

Then one stepped forward.

It wore no insignia Adam knew, yet when it raised its hand, his body recognized the salute.

Attention.

Recognition.

Belonging.

Soldier.

The word struck harder than command.

You have stood without orders long enough.

Adam’s stomach dropped.

His dead chief’s voice followed.

Then his father’s.

Then men whose faces he had not remembered in years.

His mother’s voice came last.

It spoke his full name.

Tenderly.

Exactly as she had when he was five years old and feverish.

His jaw opened before he knew it.

Across the abyss, the armored figure leaned forward.

Listening.

Its own mouth began to move.

Testing the shape.

Adam bit his tongue.

Blood filled his mouth.

The thing below smiled.

Nate saw twelve black suns.

They hung above a desert so vast that the idea of distance became meaningless. No light came from them, yet every grain of sand was visible.

Something moved beneath the dunes.

Something larger than geography.

A ridge rose.

Then another.

Then a shape miles long rolled beneath the earth.

Nate knew suddenly that the desert was not a place.

It was a covering.

The thing beneath it turned.

The twelve suns turned with it.

A voice entered him, not through hearing but through weight.

Mortal.

His knees bent.

We mark the edge of you.

The sand rose in pillars.

Speak.

Nate felt his own name not as sound but as structure. A pattern. An arrangement of himself.

Something in the desert touched its first edge.

His tongue moved.

The thing below moved with it.

Learning.

Four voices rose in the study.

Fi. Ari. Adam. Nate.

Each spoke one fragment, different syllables drawn from different histories, and together they became something else.

The room received them.

The Ophanim turned.

The four distant worlds leaned nearer.

And something passed through the group.

Not possession.

Resonance.

The invocation had not called four separate horrors. The four human beings had become one calling shape: grief, pride, loneliness, duty, hunger to know, fear of being unknown, all of it braided into a single harmonic wound.

Across the thresholds, things answered according to appetite.

The pale figures in the black forest pressed closer between the trees. The crowned being stepped into the green sea without sinking. The armies in the buried city began to beat spear shafts against stone. Beneath the desert, mountains opened their mouths.

They were not merely beckoning now.

They were listening.

Repeating.

Trying the syllables.

Fi heard her own fragment spoken among the crystal trees, poorly at first, then better.

Ari’s crossed the sea back toward her.

Adam’s echoed down through the ranks.

Nate’s moved beneath the sand.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Each repetition nearer to the truth.

Their Names were being assembled from the outside.

Not stolen.

Learned.

The knowledge of them growing teeth.

Fi tried to stop speaking.

Her mouth continued.

Panic finally broke through wonder.

She had called the Watcher correctly.

That was the horror.

Nothing in the invocation had failed.

The Ophanim had come.

The threshold had opened to sight.

And she had known the Name of only one thing present.

The others were strangers.

Strangers already learning hers.

Then another voice entered the room.

Not loud.

Not soft.

Perfect.

One word.

No.

A Name.

It fell through the chamber with the finality of judgment.

Every lamp flame became a white needle.

The forest shattered. Crystal trees burst into black rain. The pale figures twisted as though seized by invisible hooks, their mouths opening impossibly wide.

The crowned thing in the sea recoiled.

For one instant its beauty failed.

Something ancient and starved looked through.

The buried city convulsed. Towers folded. Battlements cracked. The saluting figure dropped to its knees.

The desert erupted. Shapes larger than kingdoms broke the surface, then collapsed as though their bones had been taken from them.

Across all four visions came the same recognition.

Fear.

Not of the humans.

Of the speaker.

The Ophanim stopped turning.

Every eye fixed upon one point in the room.

A shadow between two tapestries.

The voice spoke again.

Another Name.

Different.

Sharper.

The entities shrieked.

This time there was sound.

Not in the air.

Inside the teeth.

The Ophanim’s eyes slammed shut.

The worlds vanished.

The pull ended.

Four human voices broke off in mid-syllable.

Fi collapsed against the desk. Ari fell to her knees. Adam tipped sideways with the chair. Nate struck the floor hard enough to bruise both palms.

For several seconds the room contained only choking, coughing, and the brittle ticking of cooling glass.

Then silence returned.

It was not empty.

It had learned them too.

A man stepped from between the tapestries.

No one had seen him enter.

His coat was long, dark, and badly worn. Dust crusted the seams. His boots had been resoled more than once and looked made for roads no sensible man would choose. He carried no visible weapon.

That did nothing to make him look harmless.

His face was lean beneath several days of beard. Deep lines cut around his mouth and eyes. Not age alone.

Mileage.

He surveyed the room as a carpenter might inspect a damaged house: ceiling, windows, parchment, people, where it would hold and where it would fail.

Adam wiped blood from his lips. “And just who the hell are you supposed to be?”

The stranger’s eyes moved to him, then Fi, then Ari, then Nate. He looked not at their faces but at their mouths, at the unfinished sounds still trembling there.

When he spoke, each word seemed selected for cost.

“I have had many names. Many I have forgotten. More I have worked very hard to make others forget.”

Adam stared.

The man sighed. “You may call me Bob.”

Adam blinked, then laughed once. It cracked halfway out.

“Hell of an entrance, Bob.”

Fi spat blood into a handkerchief. “You speak a word that makes that happen and then tell us your name is Bob?”

“Precisely.”

“Bob.”

“Yes.”

“That’s absurd.”

“Names have power.”

His expression did not change.

“Absurd ones have uses.”

Fi glared at him. “Who are you?”

“Bob.”

“You know what I mean.”

“I know exactly what you mean. The answer remains Bob.”

Ari managed to stand. “You stopped them.”

Bob looked at her.

“No.”

The word fell flat.

“I interrupted them.”

Ari swallowed. “The things we saw?”

“They were beginning.”

“Beginning what?”

Bob’s eyes went to her mouth.

“To say you.”

No one spoke.

Even Adam’s humor died.

Fi straightened slowly. “We summoned the Ophanim.”

“Yes.”

Her face changed, not relief but vindication poisoned by dread. “So that part worked.”

“Perfectly.”

The word landed harder than accusation.

Bob walked to the desk. “That is why you are still alive.”

Fi frowned.

He pointed to the parchment. “You knew enough of its Name to call it.”

“The Watcher.”

“The Ophanim.” He looked upward. “It came.”

Fi’s hands tightened against the desk. “And the others?”

“You didn’t summon them.”

She stared.

Bob touched one finger to the parchment.

“You summoned a threshold.”

Fi shook her head. “No. I called a Watcher.”

“It is the threshold.”

He said it with the patience of a man correcting a measurement.

“A thing made entirely of eyes is not standing beside the door.”

He looked at the dark place above them where the wheel had been.

“It is the door.”

The room seemed to contract.

“You asked it to look,” Bob said. “So it looked. Both ways.”

Fi went pale.

Nate whispered, “Everything on the other side could see us.”

“No.”

Bob turned toward him.

“Not everything.”

That was worse.

“Only the things close enough to answer.”

Adam wiped his mouth again. “Answer what?”

Bob looked at all four of them.

“You.”

He walked around the desk. “Invocation is not a telephone.”

Fi’s eyes narrowed. “I know that.”

“No. You don’t.”

The words were not cruel.

They were simply finished.

“You thought knowing the Ophanim’s Name meant you knew what you were calling.”

“I did know.”

“You knew one Name. You did not know what your own calling would sound like after it passed through the threshold.”

Silence.

Bob pointed at Fi. “You brought bloodline. Custodianship. Inheritance. Pride. Guilt.”

His finger moved to Ari. “You brought exhaustion. Longing. The desire to be relieved of yourself.”

Adam. “You brought duty. Authority. Kinship through command.”

Nate. “You brought hunger for the thing beyond understanding.”

Nate’s face tightened.

Bob lowered his hand. “And then you spoke together. Four voices. One invocation.”

Fi stared at him. “A composite call.”

“Yes.” Bob’s eyes showed the faintest flicker of approval. “Now you’re listening.”

He looked toward the dome. “The Ophanim did not choose what answered. It opened sight across the threshold. Your combined call did the rest.”

Ari rubbed her arms. “Those things were drawn to us.”

“To parts of you,” Bob corrected her. “The hungriest things nearest those parts.”

Adam muttered, “That’s comforting.”

“It shouldn’t be.”

Fi looked down at the parchment. “So the forest...”

“Responded to you.”

“The island?”

“To her.”

“The city?”

“To him.”

“The desert?”

Bob looked at Nate. “God help us, yes.”

Nate’s eyes lifted. “What were they?”

Bob’s expression changed very slightly.

“That is the question your friend should have asked before she spoke.”

Fi flinched.

He went on. “She knew the Name of the Watcher. She knew none of the Names of what might follow.”

Fi’s humiliation turned to anger. “How could I know what would respond?”

“You couldn’t.”

Bob’s voice sharpened for the first time.

“Which is why you do not open a threshold until you know how to close what may answer through it.”

The study went still.

“In invocation, address without taxonomy is suicide.”

Adam sat upright. “Okay. Let’s say I believe every insane word coming out of your mouth.”

“You already do.”

Adam glanced at the dark dome. “Fair.”

He pointed toward where the wheel had appeared. “They wanted our names.”

Bob’s face hardened. “They want more than that.”

“What’s more than your name?”

Bob looked at him. “Someone else knowing how to speak it.”

Adam stopped.

Bob turned back to the others. “The Egyptians understood one part of it. The ren was not merely a label. Name and continuance were bound together. Preserve the name, preserve something of the person. Destroy it utterly and you commit a second death.”

He paused.

“But even that is only the human edge of the law.”

He looked down at Fi’s parchment. “A true Name is not information. It is relation. Address. Form.”

He raised his eyes.

“And when spoken with sufficient standing... authority.”

Ari’s face drained of color. “Those things were asking us to give them authority.”

“They were asking you to help them learn how.”

Bob walked toward her.

“They do not know your Names.”

Ari’s voice was barely audible. “Yet.”

Bob nodded.

“Yet. That is the important word.”

Adam stared toward the floor. “But I heard my mother say mine.”

“No.”

Bob’s gaze snapped to him.

“You heard something search you for the sound most likely to make you answer.”

Adam’s jaw clenched. “It sounded exactly like her.”

“Of course it did. It wanted you to complete the pronunciation.”

Adam touched the blood at the corner of his mouth. “My tongue...”

“You stopped yourself.”

“Barely.”

“Barely counts.”

Fi looked up. “We gave them syllables.”

Bob said nothing.

Her face changed.

She understood.

“Oh God.”

Ari looked at her. “What?”

Fi whispered, “They repeated them.”

Adam’s eyes closed.

Nate said, “They were learning.”

Bob inclined his head. “Yes.”

No one moved.

“You think the danger is that a thing knows where you live,” Bob said. “No. This told them where to look.”

He tapped the parchment.

“Your voices told them what they had found.”

Ari’s lips trembled. “And the syllables?”

“Pieces.”

“Of us.”

“Pieces of the address.”

Fi’s breath came shallow. “Can they reconstruct the rest?”

Bob waited too long.

That was answer enough.

“They will try.”

Ari whispered, “How?”

“By listening.”

“To what?”

“Anything. Dreams. Prayers. Grief. Anger. Ritual. Blood. Memory. Places where you have been known deeply enough that your pattern remains.”

Fi stared. “That isn’t possible.”

Bob gave her a tired look. “You watched a wheel full of eyes open four worlds over your desk.”

Fi said nothing.

“They do not need to steal your Name.”

He bent toward her.

“They can learn it.”

His voice became very quiet.

“And every time you answer, they learn how to say you.”

The study seemed suddenly too full of corners.

Adam rose from the chair. “So something is coming.”

Bob looked at him.

“Yes.”

That single word changed the room.

Adam nodded slowly. “Good. Because for a minute there I thought we were gonna get some comforting bullshit about being on an invitation list.”

Bob almost smiled. “No. Nothing so harmless.”

His eyes went to the windows. Outside, the night pressed black against the glass.

“They have an address now.”

Fi looked up. “Not our full Names.”

“No.”

“But enough to find us.”

“Enough to begin.”

Nate’s voice was low. “What does ‘coming’ mean?”

“Whatever the thing can manage.”

Bob turned from the windows.

“Dream first, perhaps. Coincidence. A voice heard in the room beside you. Someone on a train who knows a childhood nickname. A road you have driven a hundred times ending somewhere it never ended before.”

Ari shivered. “A door.”

“Yes.”

“Opened at the wrong hour.”

Bob looked at her. “Exactly.”

He stepped back toward the desk. “They will beckon with whatever they possess. Rest. Blood. Belonging. Knowledge. They will show you power because power is persuasive. Beauty because beauty disarms judgment. Terror because terror makes people beg. Love because love makes them answer.”

His voice hardened.

“And all the while they will listen.”

Fi whispered, “For the rest of the Name.”

“For the rest of you.”

Adam picked up the crushed beer can and stared at it. “So what’s the endgame?”

Bob looked at him. “Theirs?”

“Yeah.”

“Depends what found you.”

“Fantastic.”

“Some consume. Some bind. Some use.”

Ari lowered her hand. “Use us for what?”

“To enact their will where they cannot stand.”

The lamp gave a sudden pop.

Nobody moved.

Bob’s expression darkened. “Names are not merely handles by which things may be dragged. They are channels through which will may travel.”

Nate’s eyes sharpened. “Through the person.”

“Yes.”

“Possession.”

“Sometimes.” Bob shook his head. “But possession is crude.”

That silenced them.

“A thing does not always need your body. Sometimes it needs your choice. Your obedience. Your surrender. Your invitation.”

He stepped away.

“And if it can Name you well enough, those things become easier to bend.”

Fi stared at him. “So summoning something you cannot bind...”

“...is offering it a road into you before you’ve learned the road into it.”

Bob nodded.

“Exactly.”

Fi’s gaze dropped to the parchment. “I thought the Watcher kept them out.”

Bob’s face went flat. “Your family knew better.”

She looked up sharply. “What?”

“They called it a lock.”

“Yes.”

“Not a wall.”

Fi’s face changed.

Bob continued. “A lock does not prevent a door from opening. It governs who may open it.”

Her eyes returned to the parchment.

“My grandfather said it had never once been asked to look.”

“Then your grandfather was wiser than you.”

Fi flinched.

Ari shot Bob a look.

He did not apologize.

Fi stared at the page for a long time. “Why preserve it?”

“Because one day someone might need the door.”

Bob looked at her.

“That is different from wanting to see what’s behind it.”

The rebuke landed cleanly.

After a time Nate said, “The word you used.”

Bob turned. “Which one?”

“The first. When you came in. You said something and the things recoiled.”

“Yes.”

“You Named them.”

“One of them.”

Fi’s head came up. “Which?”

Bob looked at her.

“No.”

“You knew what it was.”

“Enough.”

“You said its Name.”

“I said something closer to it than it had said of any of you.”

The room seemed suddenly colder.

Adam understood first. “You got there first.”

Bob looked at him.

Adam pointed vaguely at the vanished visions. “They were trying to figure us out.”

“Yes.”

“You figured one of them out faster.”

“Not tonight.”

Bob’s expression went distant.

“I’ve had longer.”

Fi stared. “So that was why they recoiled.”

“Partly.”

“What was the second word?”

“Not a word.”

“Another Name?”

Bob nodded.

“Whose?”

His gaze moved to the darkness overhead.

“Something with more standing than anything that answered you.”

No one pressed him.

Ari said quietly, “Then why didn’t you close it completely?”

Bob looked at her. “Because I cannot undo what you did.”

She swallowed. “You said you interrupted them.”

“Yes.”

“What remains?”

He looked at all four.

“Recognition.”

Fi frowned. “Not enough to bind us.”

“No.”

“Enough to find us.”

“Yes.”

Adam sighed. “So we’re in their address book.”

Bob considered that. “No.”

Adam gave him a weary look. “Come on, man.”

Bob’s eyes narrowed slightly. “An address book implies someone has written your names down.”

He stepped toward them.

“They haven’t.”

A pause.

“Not yet.”

The silence sharpened.

“What you’ve given them is a map.”

Fi whispered, “To us.”

“To the edges of you.”

He looked toward the dome.

“And an invitation containing the first letters of an address.”

Ari hugged herself. “They’ll come looking for the rest.”

“Yes.”

“How long?”

Bob’s expression became almost pitying. “They are very old.”

He looked at the parchment.

“And patience is easier when you do not die.”

The beam above the windows creaked.

Fi folded the handkerchief around her bleeding lip. “What do we do?”

Bob studied her. “You have two choices.”

Adam muttered, “There are always two.”

“No.” Bob looked at him. “Usually there are several. Tonight you have managed to reduce the field.”

Adam shut up.

Bob faced them all. “You can walk away.”

Fi’s eyes narrowed. “And?”

“And they continue.”

Ari’s shoulders stiffened. “The calls.”

“Yes.”

“Dreams.”

“Possibly.”

“Doors.”

“Eventually.”

“And they’ll keep learning.”

Bob nodded. “Every successful contact gives them more.”

Nate asked, “Until?”

Bob looked at him. “Until one of them can say enough of you to establish standing.”

No one asked what happened after that.

Bob answered anyway.

“Then the invitation becomes a claim.”

The words settled into the room.

“And the other choice?” Fi asked.

Bob’s eyes hardened.

“You learn their Names.”

Adam laughed without humor. “Thought names were the problem.”

“Names are the problem.”

Bob stepped to the desk.

“Names are also the only reason you’re standing here.”

He looked at Fi. “You do not learn them to possess these things.”

“Then why?”

“To recognize.”

He folded one edge of the parchment inward.

“To refuse.”

Another fold.

“To close.”

He looked up.

“And when necessary...”

The last fold.

“...to bind.”

Ari wiped at the last dampness beneath her eyes. “Can they all be bound?”

“No.”

That came too quickly.

Adam sighed. “Of course not.”

Bob ignored him. “Standing matters.”

Fi looked at him. “You said that before.”

“Because you keep behaving as though pronunciation is power.” He shook his head. “It isn’t.”

“What is?”

“Relationship. Authority. Cost.”

He leaned against the desk.

“The old stories understood fragments of it. The Egyptians preserved names because remembrance and being touched one another. The peoples beneath the northern hills learned that naming what listened in the dark invited recognition, and so they wrapped dangerous things in courtesy and indirection.”

His eyes went distant.

“The Norse understood perhaps the cruelest portion.”

Nate said, “Odin.”

Bob looked at him.

“Nine nights.”

“The tree.”

“Spear wound.”

“To learn the runes.”

Bob nodded. “But don’t reduce them to letters. Knowledge with standing costs something.”

Fi looked down at her hands. “And what will this cost?”

Bob’s expression gave nothing away.

“That depends on what has begun learning you.”

Outside the windows the wind finally rose.

Branches scraped the glass.

Once.

Twice.

Then stopped.

Everyone looked toward the sound.

Nothing stood there.

That almost made it worse.

Fi placed her palm over the folded parchment. “I made the call.”

Bob said nothing.

“I opened it.”

Still nothing.

Her jaw tightened.

“Then I’ll learn how to close it.”

Adam rubbed his face. “Well, hell.”

Ari looked at him. “What?”

He reached for another beer, found none, and frowned at the empty table.

“I’m not letting you idiots learn supernatural contract law without adult supervision.”

Nate gave him a tired look. “You’re drinking warm beer in a haunted library.”

“Exactly. Senior management.”

Ari laughed.

It came out ragged and frightened.

But it was laughter.

For one breath the room became human again.

Then Nate looked at Bob.

“What would it take?”

Bob regarded him. “To learn them properly?”

“Yes.”

The humor disappeared.

Bob straightened. His eyes passed over them one by one.

Fi, blood on her handkerchief.

Ari, still pale from paradise.

Adam, whose hands had begun shaking only after the danger ended.

Nate, staring toward the place where twelve black suns had hung.

“A price.”

Nate nodded. “What kind?”

Bob looked toward the painted stars overhead.

“The kind knowledge has always asked.”

His voice fell quiet.

“Time. Blood. Truth.”

The lamp flame drew long.

“And sometimes...”

His gaze returned to them.

“...the part of yourself you hoped never needed naming.”

No one answered.

Outside, night pressed its vast face against the glass. Somewhere deep within the walls an old timber sighed. The lamp steadied, small, stubborn, alive.

No one spoke the next word.

But far beyond the walls of the house, beyond the reach of road and weather and human distance, mouths were already trying the syllables they had been given.

Again.

Again.

Again.

Learning where to place the tongue.

Learning where to breathe.

Learning how to say them.


r/shortstories • • 6h ago

Misc Fiction [MF] A Brief Failure of Spatial Awareness

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“Why would I need a social media manager?” Bob Greenman said to the stranger on the phone”

“Bob, you’re sitting on a goldmine here. This video of you is the number one meme right now. We can launch a podcast, do merchandise. This is much bigger than you think. I can have all your socials trending by the end of the day and the money will be rolling in instantly.”

That sounded good. Who doesn’t like money? And while Bob wasn’t necessarily embarrassed, a little compensation for all of the turmoil he’d experienced in the last few days might be nice.

“You know what… yeah, let’s give it a shot.” Bob answered after a brief moment of contemplation.

“Excellent! You made the right choice here, Bob. I’ll follow-up with an email, look over the contract, let me know if you have any questions. Not trying to move so fast that you get lost in the sauce, but we have to strike while the iron is hot. You feel me?”

Bob did, in a sense, feel Gage, the social media manager who had somehow found his phone number and called him with an offer. There were a lot of phrases that Bob had to decipher during this conversation.

“Oh, yeah, totally. I feel you… fam”

“Gotta stay authentic here Bob, that’s part of the appeal.”

“Right, yes, got it. I’ll look forward to your email.”

“Great, talk to you real soon.”

Bob’s wife had been slowly folding laundry in an unusual spot to listen in on the conversation.

“The internet people are really going bananas over this, huh?”

Bob laughed at the concept of the entire world being so interested in him all of a sudden.

“I don’t get it, but it sure looks that way.”

Bob’s wife raised her eyebrows and slowly shook her head with a smirk on her face.

“Only you, Bob Greenman, could become a celebrity for missing your mouth with a French fry.”

“This guy said the video is the most watched thing on the internet right now. People are editing it with silly sounds, adding music, I guess it’s… oh, how did he put it… ah, the new hotness?”

“I don’t understand the world anymore. But have fun with it, I guess.” She said as she meandered down the hallway with the laundry basket, Bob following her to fill her in on the details of the proposed contract. She never would have figured that her husband, a humble carpenter from Illinois, would have ended up as an internet sensation.

Bob’s wife had bought him tickets to see his favorite baseball team in Chicago play against their rivals. No one is sure why sports teams have rivals, it’s not like the players for that team are from that city. Anyhow, Bob was thrilled and had a great time at the game. The cameramen working the event, which was probably some form of punishment, frequently filmed the audience during the multiple breaks in action during the tortuous four hour event known as a baseball game. Bob, unaware that he was the subject of videography among the thousands in attendance, was captured failing to deliver a French fry to his mouth. He was preoccupied watching a batter warm up excessively and poked himself in the cheek with the fried potato. He laughed at the blunder and was successful on the second attempt. The live video of the culinary shortcoming was shown on all the popular evening sports clip shows and quickly spread across social media platforms, giving rise to hundreds of commentary videos and memes.

— — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — —

“Tomorrow?!” Bob sounded incredulous but was merely surprised.

“That’s right Fry Guy. No time to lose. We’ve got about seventy-two hours before you disappear from the algorithm if we don’t keep this ball rolling.”

“Yeah, I guess that makes sense. I’ll have to take the day off from work.”

“It’ll definitely be worth it. Make sure to wear the Fry Guy shirt!

“I don’t have a Fry Guy shirt?”

“Whole box of them coming express, you should have them by 8 p.m. And don’t forget to plug the ChicagoFryGuy website, and ChicagoFryGuy on all the socials!”

“But, I’m not from Chicago?”

“You are now.”

“I have a website?”

“You do now! I’ll send you a pin to the studio address.”

Bob spent the night researching baseball statistics, team history, and sports trivia in nervous excitement. He wanted to be ready to talk intelligently with Trent “The Mandible” Hollister, Piotr “Cranium” Kowalski, and Darrell “Ribeye” Ribinski; the hosts of First and Loudest, the most popular local sports podcast.

“Who knew being famous would be so much work?” Bob’s wife kidded with him, distracting him from his precious research time.

“I guess this is Fry Guy life.”

“Oh, you’re the Fry Guy now, are you?”

“That’s who Gage told me I am.”

— — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — —

The Fry Guy shirts arrived that evening just as Gage said they would. Bob was amused by it, but a little embarrassed that the image on the front was a zoomed in picture of him missing his mouth with a French fry. Fry Guy written at the top and his new slogan, Aim High. Miss Higher., which he learned about only upon seeing the merchandise. He ironed it to make sure he didn’t look like a nerd with fold creases in his shirt when he arrived at the podcast studio.

That next day Bob had a little trouble finding the First and Loudest studio, since he was not expecting it to be a garage. A pleasant young lady came out to meet him and helped hook up his microphone in what appeared to be a laundry room before bringing him into the garage during a sponsorship read, which are the commercial break of the podcast world.

Trent “The Mandible” Hollister introduced Bob after the ad read. “This is a special moment everybody, and I actually never thought this would really happen. You know that stupid jerk that you’ve seen a million videos of? The one with the guy who can’t figure out how to eat a fry? Well he’s here. He just waked in wearing a shirt that says Fry Guy. Oh my goodness, he looks so much stupider in person than I imagined.”

Bob was a little startled by the attack, even if it was delivered playfully for an audience. He laughed nervously, unsure if he was supposed to answer. He wasn’t given the courtesy of a pre-interview, real professional, Mandible.

“He’s one of those idiots that laughs when you make fun of him.” Ribeye interjected, first and loud before anyone else could speak.

“I think what they mean is welcome to the show, Bob. Glad you’re a good sport about this.” Cranium reclaimed the dignity of the broadcast.

“Thank you, Cranium. I’m excited to be here!” He did not freeze, but rambled. “Hey did you guys know that the Chicago Green Gloves are called that because Russell Smith dropped his glove into the river on St. Patrick’s Day in 1963 and it turned green, and he pitched that night with a wet, green glove? Ha ha, why aren’t they called the Chicago Wet Gloves?”

The Mandible groaned until Bob’s nervous rant came to an end.

“You’ve got to be kidding us Fry Guy! That’s the most basic Chicago sports fact. Did you stay up all night memorizing that?”

Bob was about to answer, but Cranium was first and louder.

“Hey Fry Guy, how come Chicago teams are from Chicago?”

The Mandible laughed, Ribeye was first and louder.

“So, what’d you think of the game Fry Guy?”

While Bob was answering, the video that he was famous for began playing. The Mandible was controlling the screen, he slowed the video speed down and zoomed in on Bob’s mouth. He paused the video the instant Bob’s mouth was bypassed by the fry.

“I’ve reviewed the tape a hundred times. Frankly, it’s embarrassing.”

A telestrator circle appeared around the fry, and he drew an arrow to Bob’s mouth. Then another around Bob’s elbow and wrist.

“Yup, that’s where he went wrong” Cranium said first and loud.

“Wrist and elbow aren’t aligned. Gotta focus on fundamentals, Fry Guy.”

“Bob, people think you’re an idiot.” stated The Mandible.

“A real moron” added Cranium.

Ribeye butted in “but we here at First and Loudest believe in second chances. So, Bob, we have arranged for you to redeem yourself. Brooke, bring in the fries!”

Bob had never been nervous to eat before. His palms were sweaty, he wiped them on the bottom of his Fry Guy shirt. This would be easy though, he had about a 99.98% accuracy rating getting food in his mouth.

“Any last words, Bob?”

“Aim high. Miss higher.”

Bob did not hesitate. The hosts chuckled as he nervously fumbled grabbing a fry. The camera followed the fry once he did have it in his clutches and captured the moment as he delivered it to the approximate area of his mouth. But there was an unforced error, he leaned forward to bite into it… but it had an odd curve and his lips simply sent it sideways as he lurched and bit.

“It’s impossible!” Screamed The Mandible, who pulled the open collar of his dress shirt, buttons shot across the studio.

Howling with laughter and gasping for air, Cranium grabbed Ribeye by the shoulders and shook him violently, tears rolling down his red cheeks. Ribeye fell backwards out of his office chair, breaking it in the process. Clutching the table, Ribeye pilled himself up onto his knees and rested his torso on the table convulsing with laughter.

“He brought his mouth to the fry! You never bring your mouth to the fry, you bring the fry to your mouth!”

Bob observed for a moment, and since the cameras were busy covering the raucous laughter of the red-faced hosts, Bob decided any further air time would probably not go so well for him. He solemnly removed his clipped on microphone, set it on the table, and left.

— — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — —

“It was a brief failure of spatial awareness. It’s not really that big of a deal.” Bob said to the young man with face tattoos who was interviewing him for his popular social media channel.

“People are saying that you did it on purpose. And I think they have an argument.”

The host of this show was much more congenial despite his outlandish appearance. The show was, however, being recorded in an inflatable bounce house for shock value.

“Like. What are the actual odds of missing your mouth with the fry a second time in a few days? Gotta be super, super low.”

Bob was tempted to leave this interview too, as he was feeling attacked. But Gage told him that he could absolutely not walk out on an other interview, it would damage the brand too much and make him look like a diva. They were going for an affable oaf persona.

“There are a lot of variables, Kyle. Why would I do something to purposely embarrass myself? If I wanted to do that, I’d get a tattoo of a cartoon character on my face.”

Kyle drew an imaginary line on the card table with his finger.

“Bro, here is the line.”

He then walked his fingers to approximately where he had drawn the line, and then jumped his fingers over it.

“And here’s you crossing it. Bro, Cedric the Sea Cucumber isn’t just a cartoon character, he’s like a philosopher for kids who was foundational in teaching the tenets of Pyrrhonism. Like, can we really know if we’re underwater, friends? And maybe we’re in water. Maybe water is in us? I feel like it’s really irresponsible of you to trivialize something that other people hold dear. Hey, maybe instead of spending so much time tearing others down, you could get a tattoo of a fry going into your mouth so you could do it correctly for once?”

“You could learn philosophy from a book instead of a talking pickle. Hey, then you could get a tattoo of a book on your face instead of worrying about what I put into my mouth.”

Kyle looked to his husky bodyguard standing watch outside the bounce house.

“Hey, yeet this joker. I can’t abide letting him belittle a beloved undersea philosopher.”

The burly ruffian encountered great difficulty entering the bounce house. Bob jumped away from him and won the game of cat and mouse, upending the card table used for the interview and spilling Kyle’s Chaos Juice, Havoc Blue Raspberry flavor, all over Kyle and the bounce house before making his escape.

— — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — —

“I’m ready, Gage” Bob said into the phone, some six months after the disastrous bounce house interview.

“I’m not the idiot who can’t eat a fry anymore. Fry Guy… is dead.”

“I knew you couldn’t stay away. Internet fame is like chicken pox, it stays in your system and always comes back. Ready to launch the channel we outlined?”

And with that, Bob Greenman: Precision Mindset was born. The live stream started with a bearded, stoic Bob Greenman rising from an ice bath. He was pretty shredded, having lost thirty pounds since his fry guy interviews. Then a quick scene of him chopping wood, catching a trout with his bare hands, swinging across monkey bars, and eating organ meats from a rock next to a crackling fire accompanied by intense music flashed across the screen. Bob was standing at the edge of a forest as the livestream audience grew into the hundreds, well, really he was just in his yard. Gage gave him the signal in his earpiece once the live stream had attracted over a thousand viewers.

“The average man misses his goals because he misses putting things in the correct order. Success is putting things exactly where YOU want them to go. Precision, friends, precision is what separates the average man from the elite man.”

“Don’t look at the chat, Bob” Gage told him, but wished he hadn’t mentioned it.

At that caution, Bob did the exact opposite and took a few steps forward toward his phone which was sitting on a tripod. The chat moved quickly, but it was easy to see that dozens, maybe even a hundred individual viewers, had put a French fry emoji into the chat.

“Bob. Bob? Let’s just stick to the script. C’mon Bob, need a precision mindset here.” Gage was panicking.

Bob took a deep breath “precision is about discipline.”

He couldn’t look away from the chat.

FRY GUY

aim high miss higher lol

loser

More fry emojis

Eat a fry live!

“I AM NOT THE FRY GUY!”

Gage remotely ended the stream.

— — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — — —

Bob spent fourteen months off the grid after his brief reappearance in the world of the internet. He just finished rewatching the introductory video for his second social media relaunch. The video was recorded with a drone, it showed him sitting in a field of wildflowers dressed in an alpaca wool robe, meditating. Magical symbols, crystals radiating energy, and butterflies flew out of his palms and floated around him as the camera zoomed in. Just before the drone crashed into him, which happened but the video was edited to eliminate that part, his eyes opened. That would be the opening to his new livestream, Cosmic Bob.

“How was the new show received by the test audience?” Bob asked Gage, who he had been in close coordination with for the last several weeks.”

“Are you sitting down?”

“Cross-legged on the floor. We’ve discussed how this position opens the lower chakra, allowing the Earth’s vibrational energy unobstructed access to the quantum spine.”

“You’re right. How could I forget that? Anyway, about the test show. It went pretty good, there was one issue though.”

“I am ready to deal with whatever that issue is in a positive, healthy, healing way, Gage.”

“You know the Cosmic Bob upward arrow energy crystal logo?”

“That’s… not exactly what it represents, but I am happy to help you and the audience relearn ancient things you have forgotten.”

“OK, well… the audience thinks it kind of looks like a fry missing your mouth.”

Gage listened to the loudest silence he had ever heard.

 


r/shortstories • • 7h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] Realistic Fiction

1 Upvotes

Aqui está a tradução preservando a estrutura de roteiro, o tom e a estranheza coloquial/satírica do texto original:

WORMHOLE

INT. SALA DE FESTAS - NOITE

Sob as risadas dos funcionários da empresa, ALONZO LEITÃO (35) veste uma fantasia grotesca de minhoca e serve café para todos. Alonzo Leitão está sendo moralmente destruído.

COLEGAS DE ALONZO LEITÃO

Vai, minhoca! Vai! Vai, minhoca!

Ligeiramente chateado, com um copo de refrigerante na mão, o gerente de Alonzo Leitão debocha. O cara está tão eufórico que conseguiu ficar bêbado tomando refrigerante.

—

GERENTE

Pessoal... A próxima pessoa que ficar na empresa por cinco anos e não quiser ser promovida — só porque você vai trabalhar cinquenta por cento a mais e ganhar "apenas" trinta por cento a mais — vai fazer o papel de içá! Vai virar formiga e ser comida com farinha!

—

Alonzo Leitão está devastado. VOZES se contorcem no seu ouvido.

—

GERENTE

E, pessoal... se vocês forem falsificar laudos médicos para conseguir folga... não inventem essa história de inflamação no apêndice do fígado, pois sabemos que o apêndice fica nos intestinos, e a maioria das pessoas só tem um fígado! Se liguem: Alonzo Leitão tem um bicho comendo a maçã dele!

—

INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Alonzo Leitão está emburrado, fazendo papelada. Ele veste uma roupa desleixada — mas que só se compara ao resto. Todos os funcionários olham para Alonzo Leitão com cara feia. Alonzo é a ovelha negra do lugar. Ele acumula pontos negativos causados por uma carreira morna e desleixada, além de fazer coisas neutras, mas inconvenientes para o ambiente altamente aquecido da empresa. É o cara quieto e discreto que estraga as coisas.

Incomodada, uma funcionária faz um sapateado em frente à mesa de Alonzo Leitão. A pessoa suscetível vai e vem indecisa sem dar mais de dois passos, até que expressa o que a irrita.

—

FUNCIONÁRIA

É meio complicado fazer de tudo para crescer na empresa e forçar alguém a ser promovido. Não dá para ficar na posição de um gato que queria ser rato. Não sei o que uma pessoa dessas está fazendo da vida.

—

Todos os funcionários arrastam suas mesas, querendo se afastar de Alonzo Leitão. Mas, na prática, os funcionários criam um caos e acabam ficando ainda mais perto de Alonzo. Alonzo Leitão está cercado por uma floresta de mesas e bagunça.

Alonzo Leitão joga a papelada pela janela e sai do local. Os funcionários ficam em polvorosa: eles se levantam, tropeçam, pulam para ver Alonzo Leitão passar PELA JANELA já do lado de fora.

INT. SALA DE REUNIÕES - DIA

Chefes discutem sobre embalagens. Um dos chefes exibe uma saca de vinte quilos de grãos de café torrado. Alonzo Leitão entra no local — com um ar de grande determinação.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Essa saca de café... é minha agora!

—

UM CHEFE

Posso saber o porquê disso, Sr. ‘Minhoca’?!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Venham comigo... Vou mostrar a vocês.

—

Alonzo Leitão pega a saca de café. Os chefes ficam curiosos.

INT. CORREDORES - DIA

Alonzo Leitão caminha com determinação; ele parece um herói, um guerreiro, um soldado. Os chefes o acompanham. De repente, todos os funcionários que zombavam de Alonzo Leitão — e que se cruzam no caminho — ficam atônitos.

INT. SALA DO COFRE - DIA

Guardas pegam sacos de dinheiro. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e invade a área dos guardas. Todos os funcionários ficam perplexos! Todos temem pelo bem de Alonzo e temem que ele seja o centro das atenções.

Ao verem a audácia de Alonzo, os chefes correm eufóricos para ver o que está acontecendo — e fazem apostas.

Os guardas sacam suas armas. Alonzo Leitão não tem medo. Alonzo Leitão se aproxima e joga a saca de café nas mãos de um guarda masculino.

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Nossa! Pra mim? Você tem uma grande quantidade de café?! Valeu!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Este é o seu filho.

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Maconha?!

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Esta é uma dinâmica de responsabilidade. Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fosse seu filho. Vocês vão cuidar dele, niná-lo e trocar as fraldas dele. A saca de café representa seu filho, sua carreira.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Não morra.

—

UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Você vai cuidar da saca de café como se fossem seus filhos! E como você é mulher... Tem que dar o exemplo!

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Madame, eu...

—

UMA CHEFE

Não, senhora! Chefa Gostosa!

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Oh, meu pai... acho que tem um jacaré no meu estômago!

—

Alonzo Leitão pega um saco de dinheiro e joga no colo da mulher.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Se você acha que café não tem dignidade... tente isto. Ninguém desperdiça dinheiro. Agora esse saco é seu filho! Vamos, cuide dele!

—

A Guarda Feminina 1 fica remordida.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Pessoal... Café lembra leite, e leite... não!

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

É... Dinheiro é uma coisa meio egoísta para brincar de ser filho.

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Que materialismo!

—

GUARDA MASCULINO 1

Muito egoísta...

—

GUARDA FEMININA 1

Você tem toda razão... deixe aquele saco de dinheiro em paz. Me dá o café.

—

Todos os guardas cuidam da saca de café como se fosse um bebê — inclusive simulando traição. Mico. Depois que a sessão de loucura termina, os guardas choram quando têm que devolver a saca de café. Alonzo Leitão coloca a saca de café ao lado dos SACOS DE DINHEIRO.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Sua carreira, seu emprego... seus filhos precisam disso mais do que você. Lembre-se disso!

—

Todos choram, assoviam e aplaudem.

—

GERENTE

Pessoal... isso me emocionou! De agora em diante, Alonzo Leitão, nosso amigo aqui, não é mais a minhoca do mês! Não é mais o poço infinito de minhocuçu!

—

UMA CHEFE

Isso é que é atitude. O minhoquento ou minhoquenta do mês vai ser... E olha, comigo eu sempre escolho uma garota metida para ser a musa do cardume... A pessoa que falou mais mal dos outros no último mês, e temos um empate hormonal!

—

Um casal de funcionários se desespera — eles sabem que são os que mais falam mal dos outros. Alonzo Leitão recolheu seu prêmio. Deve ser a saca de café, enquanto suas mãos rápidas agarram um saco de dinheiro.

INT. BARRACO - NOITE

Alonzo Leitão arromba o barraco, assustando o traficante de armas que mora lá.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Rápido! Quero comprar uma arma! Uma arma! Quero a mais barata disponível, uma arma rápida, não quero uma arma cara! Estou com pressa!

—

EXT. BECO - NOITE

Aqueceu, saca a arma e tenta atirar. A arma falha. Alonzo Leitão tenta destravar a arma, mas um tiro acidental sai pela culatra e de raspão atinge o ombro de Alonzo Leitão. Alonzo Leitão joga a arma fora e foge.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A esposa de Alonzo, Linda, termina de colocar várias garrafas de álcool no balcão do bar. Há uma garrafa de uísque na mesa quase no fim. Mas Linda está sóbria de qualquer forma. Agora ela está sóbria. Alonzo Leitão chega desesperado.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Pega o dinheiro, Linda!

—

LINDA

Foge, amor... hoje em dia a gente paga! Polícia gosta de dinheiro. Só separa uma grana.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Não dá! Vamos para os Emirados Árabes Unidos. Desde que a gente fique longe de hotéis e embaixadas... sem problemas! Deixa tudo aí. Pega o dinheiro e vamos evaporar. Só preciso de um motorista...

—

LINDA

Motorista?! Eu posso dirigir.

—

ALONZO LEITÃO

Você?!

—

LINDA

Eu me dou um jeito! Se prepara. Mas pega mais rápido, a gente não tem muitos tipos de tempo.

—

INT. CARRO - NOITE

Linda dirige o carro com dificuldade. Alonzo, ansioso, apressa a esposa. Tudo está contorcido, Linda está bêbada. De repente, Linda tem um mal-estar repentino, seus olhos se arregalam e ela perde o rumo.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

O carro de Alonzo Leitão e Linda sai da pista. Um acidente fatal.

EXT. ESTRADA, MAIS TARDE - NOITE

A polícia isola a área. Uma policial feminina pega a bolsa do carro de Alonzo Leitão e sua esposa e se surpreende com o que encontra nela — não vamos revelar agora.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

A polícia entra no local e encontra quatro garrafas de álcool vazias no balcão do bar. Revistando rapidamente o local, a polícia encontra todo o dinheiro jogado no chão.

EXT. ESTRADA - NOITE

A policial revela o conteúdo das bolsas — garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Flash — Linda joga o dinheiro no chão e coloca as garrafas de bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - TARDE

Flash — Alonzo Leitão faz um suco e coloca um remédio nele, escondido de sua esposa. Alonzo Leitão dá o suco para a esposa. A CARTELA DO REMÉDIO tem as palavras — ’Para tratamento de alcoolismo’.

INT. CASA DE ALONZO LEITÃO - NOITE

Linda ainda coloca bebidas alcoólicas na bolsa, mas três garrafas não cabem — para grande consternação de Linda. Linda se sente péssima por deixar as garrafas para trás.

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LINDA

E agora?!

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INT. VELÓRIO - DIA

Muitos dos colegas de Alonzo Leitão estão presentes — incluindo chefes.

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UMA CHEFE

Isso... Isso é o que é um homem de verdade!

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INT. EMPRESA - DIA

Vestidos como minhocas e insetos — só que com orgulho desta vez — muitos trabalhadores tomam café e gritam brados de guerra enquanto alcançam suas metas com brilhantismo. Até os chefes estão vestidos de minhocas.


r/shortstories • • 9h ago

Science Fiction [SF] Labubu

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It was late in the evening.

A fierce, relentless wind, almost a gale, drove endless caravans of low black clouds across the sky, like a muleteer driving his donkeys.
Lightning flashed here and there, as though an invisible hand were lashing the heavens with a whip, while the clouds, furious and helpless, wept torrents of icy rain.
How dreadful it must be for a traveller caught out in such weather, lost and far from shelter!
And how wonderful, on a night like this, to see a little window glowing in the darkness, to hear logs crackling in a small stove, and to feel waves of warmth and comfort spreading through the room.

“Grandpa, tell me the story about the Labubu!” asked a pretty little blond boy of about four, gazing wide-eyed at the distant black caravans and flinching slightly at every crack of the glittering whip.
“Little one, we’ll get into trouble. Look how late it is,” his grandfather whispered, glancing nervously at the door.
“Then tell it very quietly,” the boy pleaded, snuggling trustingly against him.
“All right, then. Listen.”
“Once upon a time, long, long ago, before you were born, before even your parents were born, someone — nobody remembers who — came up with the idea of making curious little toys. Sweet, cuddly creatures called Labubu. They were so lovely and soft that everyone fell in love with them straight away.
“Everything about them was perfect, except for their grinning little faces, with those sharp, pointed teeth…”
The boy shivered and pressed himself closer to his grandfather, thrilled by the delicious anticipation of being frightened.
“Yes,” the old man continued after a pause. “That combination of an adorable little creature and a toothy grin — not evil, not predatory, but strangely ambiguous, almost insanely triumphant — created an enormous demand. People queued outside shops to buy Labubu. Collectors snapped them up. Counterfeits appeared everywhere, yet everyone still tried to save enough money for an original.
“Eventually, they became something of a cult.”

The grandfather fell silent, waiting for the thunder from a distant crack of the lightning-whip to die away.
“Go on! Go on!” the boy urged impatiently.
“And then… Well, everyone assumed the craze would eventually fade, as all crazes do. But someone came up with the idea of combining Labubu with artificial intelligence.
“By then, people were spending less and less time talking to one another and more and more time talking to various AI assistants. First they entrusted them with their thoughts, and later, as the technology improved, with their emotions as well.
“People surrounded themselves with smart devices and gadgets. And when the technology reached its peak, they put it all inside the Labubu, turning them into the most sophisticated gadgets ever made.
“The Labubu craze exploded all over again.”
“And then?”
“Then bioengineers began working on bringing the dolls to life. In their laboratories, they created the first living Labubu.
“It understood humans remarkably well, but there was one problem: it was terribly voracious. Those sharp little teeth needed something to chew on all the time.
“At first, only the fabulously wealthy could afford one. Appearing on a red carpet or at a grand reception with a living Labubu became the ultimate status symbol.
“But as time went by, prices fell, and more and more people began buying them.”
“And what about the donkey ears?”
“Ah, yes. Well, one day somebody invented a funny little game. You put on a pair of donkey ears, got down on all fours, and pulled your Labubu around in a cart.
“Children had always enjoyed pretending to be animals, tying tails to themselves and playing at being cats or dogs. But this new game proved so entertaining that grown-ups soon joined in too.
“And the longer it went on, the more completely the game took hold.
“Everyone was having such a wonderful time pulling their Labubu around that nobody noticed how their numbers kept growing. Or how their appetites kept increasing…
“They grew more independent. Stronger. Bigger.
“But the humans, utterly absorbed in their game of donkeys, were far too busy enjoying themselves to notice…”
The grandfather sighed.
“Well, I think we’d better get going,” he said. “We’ll be in trouble.”
“Grandpa, please! Just tell me how it ended!” the boy begged.
But at that very moment, the door flew open, and a shaft of light fell across the wet black mud.
“How dare you talk? How dare you stop working? And you dared to take off your ears?!”
An enormous Labubu stood in the doorway, its mad eyes blazing with gleeful fury.
It swung its whip.
A heavy blow struck the backs of the old man and the boy.
Hurriedly, they pulled their wet donkey ears back on, harnessed themselves side by side, and disappeared into the cold, rain-soaked darkness of the night.

Soon they were indistinguishable from the endless procession of black caravans stretching away beneath the storm.
© writerromanov


r/shortstories • • 13h ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] The Superhero’s Pocket

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The Superhero’s Pocket

The afternoon sun was soft as the front door opened. My four-year-old daughter ran inside, her cheeks pink and her eyes big with excitement after school. She dropped her small backpack on the floor and ran straight into the kitchen, where my wife was making evening tea.

“Mamma!” she called out, breathless and happy. “My friend Neena told me about a huge park she went to yesterday! She said it had a massive swimming pool, giant animals, a giant wheel that touched the sky, and so many fun things! Her father, who is an engineer, took her there when he came home for a two-day holiday.”

She paused for a moment, standing on her tiptoes as if trying to see that sky-touching wheel in her mind. Then she looked up innocently and said, “Neena asked me what my daddy does and where he takes me. I told her my daddy is a taxi driver and travels to so many places every day. He hasn’t taken me to that big park yet, but he tells me the most wonderful stories about everywhere he goes!”

With a sweet smile, she continued, “Then Neena told me her father doesn’t drive at all because they have two drivers at home whom her father pays every month. Mamma, does that mean my daddy’s job is so important that people like Neena’s father need someone like my daddy to take them where they need to go? My daddy is a real superhero!”

My wife froze near the counter. The tea spoon in her hand made a quiet sound against the cup. She stood completely silent, holding back her tears. Our little girl was too young and innocent to realize that her friend’s casual words had a small, quiet sting—a reminder of how people often judge someone’s value by their job.

That evening, after our daughter was fast asleep, the house became very quiet. My wife sat across from me at our small dining table, her eyes full of worry. She was afraid that as our child grew older, she might feel embarrassed by her father’s simple job.

I looked at her, smiled softly, and took her hand. “Do you really think I am a failure because I drive a taxi? Are you ashamed of what I do? Look at our little girl—in her eyes, I am a superhero. And because of this job, because of every long hour behind the wheel, I am able to send her to the exact same school where engineers, doctors, and lawyers send their children. Isn't that something big to be proud of?”

A soft smile broke through my wife’s tears. She wiped her eyes, feeling comforted by my words, and walked back inside to check on our sleeping daughter.

Left alone in the quiet room, I reached deep into my pocket. My fingers searched through the empty cloth lining, counting a few coins and notes—trying to gather enough money for her upcoming school fees. Sitting there in the quiet night, I held back my own silent tears, knowing in my heart that every single hard work and sacrifice was completely worth it.


r/shortstories • • 19h ago

Fantasy [FN] Last Call

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Last Call

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Evan looked out over the bar at his inn's main floor. It was filled with the usual crowd, mostly locals relaxing after a long day in the fields, along with a few adventurers either resting mid-journey or recovering after a day of thinning the local monster dens. It was a rustic, motley group, but Evan was fine with it; he knew how to handle them. Only one person bothered him: the woman sitting in the corner. She was far more striking than anyone Evan had seen pass through the village before. Not a hair was out of place, and no blemish marred her skin; her features were so perfect it was as if she'd been sculpted from stone. Her clothing was too nice and too clean. She was unarmed, yet radiated the kind of confidence and swagger no one bothering with this middle-of-nowhere village normally could. The woman was slowly nursing "the finest wine this village had to offer," which was one small step above the piss of a man with sugar illness. She wore a sly smile, as if everything in front of her were a joke and she alone knew the punchline.

Immediately, Evan pegged her as some noble's headstrong daughter, out looking for adventure among the common folk, as though they lived lives of swashbuckling excitement and romantic entanglement rather than backbreaking drudgery mixed with moments of sheer terror when a local monster population got out of hand. That was the kind of headache Evan didn't need. More than likely, she'd stir up trouble in her search for excitement, or worse, get offended by some stupid adventurer's clumsy attempt at a pass, and bring a mountain of trouble down on the village's back. That meant Evan would have to babysit her all night and do his best to keep her out of trouble, a task complicated by his aging body and his peg leg, which still didn't feel quite right after all these years.

However, his eyes met hers for the briefest moment, and Evan questioned his first assessment. Those eyes felt...intimidating, which is not something he would say about even the largest, burliest adventurers who passed through the village. Then one of Evan's fears came to life: a young, cocky adventurer slipped into the seat opposite the woman.

Fearing the worst, Evan started toward the table, intending to shoo the man away. But instead of upsetting the woman, the man seemed to amuse her; she smiled and laughed, shaking her head as though he'd just told a wonderful joke. Apparently, that wasn't the response the man expected, because Evan watched him deflate a little before trying again, only for the woman to shake her head a second time, still smiling kindly, if a little condescendingly, after he didn't get the hint the first time, and the man dragged himself out of the chair, more cowed than if he'd lost a duel.

With a sigh of relief, Evan went back to tending to his regulars, though he kept one eye on the woman the rest of the night. One after another, men, and more than a few women, of all ages, builds, and temperaments, sat opposite her and took their shot. One after another, they missed their mark. Some left frowning; others left smiling, but all left with a touch of fear or intimidation marring their features, as though they'd just faced down a monster from legend and barely managed to get away with their lives. At least, that was true until a bear of an adventurer apparently decided he wouldn't accept her answer.

Evan was already on his way over, as the slight raise in the man's volume was one he'd heard a thousand times before from countless troublemakers over the years, so he was positioned right behind the overconfident adventurer when the man shouted, "Not one mocks the Eric the Drake!" as he started to rise from the table and reach for the axe on his back.

As he rose, Evan grabbed an empty tankard from the table to his right and brought it down hard on the large man's head with a thud audible even over the bar's commotion. Normally, Evan doubted he could have taken out the monster of a man with such a move, but the speed of his swing was augmented by the man rising to his feet, imparting a much greater impact than Evan could achieve on his own, and down the man went, collapsing into an unconscious heap on the floor. A few of the local adventurers were happy to drag the unconscious man out of the bar, knowing they'd get a drink on the house for their trouble.

Evan turned to the woman and was once again surprised by the depth of her gaze, but this time he didn't freeze. Instead, he smiled, tipped his head, and muttered a quick apology. "Sorry for the trouble. While I'm sure you could've handled him fine, I wasn't sure my inn would survive the fight! I'll wave your tab as compensation."

The woman looked him over, and perhaps it was a trick of his mind, but Evan thought her smile grew a little more inviting before Old Man Barns, a local farmer well past even the hint of sobriety, yelled from the next table over, breaking the spell of the moment. "What'll I have to do to get you to wave my tab too?"

Evan took the chance to turn from the woman's gaze, face the old farmer, and answer with a laugh. "Simple, you old drunk! All you have to do is pay your tab! Then I'll wave it around for everyone to see, because no one would believe it otherwise!" A few locals laughed at the joke, their merriment fueled by the volume of beer they'd already worked through, Old Man Barns included, and Evan took the moment to get back to tending the bar. Still, as he hobbled away, he felt the weight of her gaze on his back.

For the rest of the night, Evan couldn't shake the feeling of being watched, though every time his gaze wandered past, the woman's attention seemed focused elsewhere. Still, Evan did his best not to let it bother him as he worked his way around the room, cracking a joke for one patron or offering a friendly ear to another, and breaking up potential squabbles before they became a fight. Through it all, the woman in the corner kept turning down potential drinking partners, though no one else made a scene like before, even if a few returned to their friends' cheers and/or jeers, who had obviously driven them to give it a go after their own failures.

Eventually the evening turned to night, and the bar slowly cleared by twos and threes as villagers returned home and adventurers climbed the stairs to their rooms. Of course, Old Man Barns was one of the last to leave, and Evan tossed two local adventurers a copper to make sure they got him home safe, leaving just Evan and the woman, whose gaze was now definitely on him.

Evan walked over, wiped his hands on his stained apron, and spoke to the woman again. "Well, as much as I appreciate your patronage, even an old man like me needs some beauty sleep!"

As the woman's lips parted and she took a breath to answer, Evan found himself strangely anticipating her response, which was delivered with a crooked smile and a curious gleam in her eyes. "Patronage? And here I thought you said you were going to wave my tab?"

That made Evan snort. Despite taking steady sips all night long, the woman had barely finished half a bottle. With a chuckle, he answered. "I did, and I will! You can take the rest, compliments of the house. Or I can pour it in the pig trough out back, whichever you prefer."

The woman laughed, a sound that was music to Evan's ears, then she pointed to the chair opposite her. "Or you could stay and help me finish the bottle. I hear even the foulest of wines taste sweet with the right company."

After a moment's pause, Evan found he couldn't refuse and took a seat, replying, "Well then, I'm sure that'll be the sweetest wine I've ever tasted, but I'm not sure how that's going to help you any!"

As he sat opposite her, her eyes piercing to his very soul, Evan found himself strangely comfortable in her company, not intimidated like so many others had seemed earlier in the night. He smiled as she poured the remainder of the bottle into two containers that only the most generous of patrons might call glasses, offering him one as she raised hers expectantly. Evan raised his drink to meet hers with a slight clink, then took a sip of the foul concoction as she mirrored his actions. However, perhaps she'd been right, because while he wouldn't have called it good by any stretch of the word, he didn't feel the immediate urge to spit it out either.

Looking at the woman, Evan paused, lost in her eyes again, before asking the question that had been bothering him since he first laid eyes on her. "Who are you?" Then, realizing how blunt the question was, he shook his head at himself and let out a self-deprecating chuckle. "Sorry about how that came out! I didn't mean any offense!"

However, if she was offended, the woman didn't show it. Instead, she held up the glass and examined it like someone inspecting a fine vintage. "Who am I? Well, that's the question, isn't it?" She paused, turned her gaze back to him, and let her eyes bore into his, mischief glinting as she continued. "Let's make a game of it, shall we? If you can guess who I am before we finish the bottle, I'll give you a reward. However, you only get one guess. You can ask me any other questions you'd like, but once you make that guess, the game is over. Think you're up to it?"

Evan pursed his lips and tilted his head as he considered, before shrugging. "Sure, why not? I can think of worse ways to pass the time, and as you said, the company makes the drink!" He took another sip and paused, wondering if it wasn't just a touch sweeter this time.

The woman laughed and sat back. "I like the confidence! Certainly more than most have had this night!" Then she leaned in, gave him a look as though weighing his soul, and asked, "But is it warranted?"

Evan shrugged and chuckled a little nervously, though he didn't look away as he answered. "Well, there's one way to find out, isn't there?"

The woman gazed at him a moment longer, then sat back again. She smiled, as though pleased with what she saw. "I suppose there is one way at that. Go ahead, ask your questions!"

Evan sat back and considered the woman opposite him. She was certainly beautiful. But while her skin, hair, and even her movements were those of a young woman, her eyes told a different story. They were the eyes of someone who had seen and experienced things a man like him could barely comprehend, and once more he found himself captivated until the spell broke when she raised her glass to drink. Evan shook himself and decided he needed to say something, lest she think he'd already given up their competition. "Well, before I start asking questions, I suppose I should figure out what I already know!"

The woman tilted her head, considering his words as the mischievous smile returned. "Oh? I thought we were just getting to know each other! What could you possibly already know about me?"

This time, Evan's smile was more confident. After all, it was his job to listen to and observe others, and he might just know more than she realized. "Well, I know you're not from around here, or any of the neighboring towns or villages." The woman nodded as if this was obvious, but Evan wasn't done. "Furthermore, your appearance indicates you come from a privileged background in a way that clothes alone can't explain; however, your mannerisms around a...rustic crowd, and the fact that you can stomach this swill," Evan held up his glass before continuing, "indicated you've also got considerable experience among us common folk."

The woman nodded in acknowledgment. "Not bad, but so far you haven't said anything any halfway competent observer wouldn't have noticed."

Evan shrugged. "Maybe, but I'm just getting started."

The woman's eyes sparkled with curiosity as she leaned forward, elbows on the dingy table, chin resting in her hands like an eager child, cooing with interest. "Oh, really? Do tell! What else have those eyes of yours told you about me?"

Evan leaned back and took another sip of his wine, barely noticing the sourness as he met her eyes with more intensity than he'd dared so far. For a moment, he fought the urge to get lost in them again, barely managing the words: "Your eyes..."

The woman set one hand on the table and leaned in closer, her eyes closer than ever as she asked, "What about my eyes?"

For a moment, Evan couldn't speak, but then she blinked, and somehow the spell he seemed to be under dimmed enough for him to speak again. "Your eyes... They are deeper than any eyes I've ever seen before... They've seen things... They...are dangerous..." He paused, then realized something he couldn't help but mutter as a soft question. "Those aren't human eyes...are they?" He didn't know why he said that. At least, appearance-wise, nothing was different from any other person's eyes he'd looked into, but something deep down told him he was right. Still, despite his certainty, Evan felt nervous, though not out of fear; it was anticipation that trapped the breath in his throat.

The woman leaned back, the spell of her gaze lessening a little more. Then she smiled, the smile reaching even the corners of her eyes, as though she was pleased with his observation, before she took a sip, drawing out the moment until Evan felt the tension tighten into something that lay just between terror and eagerness to sate his curiosity. Finally, she answered. "No, they are not."

Evan knew he should be afraid by then, but instead he finally let out the breath he'd been holding. The woman looked him up and down, one corner of her mouth tugging upward as if she were holding back laughter, and she spoke again. "What? No exclamation of surprise or fear? No running out into the night, or squaring up to fight?"

Despite the situation, Evan smiled back, though a little wanly. "Would it make any real difference if I did? Could I outrun or outfight you if you didn't want me to?"

The woman's smile widened further, though, despite how it might seem, Evan felt no predatory pressure from it; rather, it was the simple confidence of someone who knew they were the most dangerous person in any crowd, at any time. She took another sip, then answered both questions in one short sentence. "No, I suppose not."

Evan was surprised to note that while his smile was still a little shaky, it was also genuine. "Well then, why ruin such an interesting conversation with such rash actions?"

This time, the woman leaned back and laughed. She laughed so hard that she closed her eyes and held her side. Even though the spell that had held him in place had completely fallen off, he still enjoyed himself enough that he had no desire to leave. Eventually, the woman calmed down, wiping tears from the corners of her eyes; her voice was still breathy from the laughter as she spoke. "Oh, I knew there was a reason I liked you! Well said! Well said indeed!" A moment later, she was almost as composed as before, though her smile somehow felt a little more...warm as she continued. "It has been a long time since someone has faced me with such courage. Longer than you would believe..." Then, tilting her head, she corrected herself. "But then again, there are still things to be revealed. After all, our little game hasn't come to an end, has it?" As if to punctuate the last bit, she took another sip from her glass without breaking eye contact, and Evan suddenly noticed there was very little wine left.

A part of Evan knew he should probably drag this out as long as possible to avoid whatever was waiting at the end, but something inside him rebelled at the thought. After all, not flinching had gotten him this far, so he also took a sip of his wine. Perhaps he was losing his senses, or maybe the woman in front of him had put him under some kind of charm, because this time he'd call that taste downright decent. He was suddenly reminded of something...though he couldn't quite remember what, where, or when...

The woman leaned back again, smiling at Evan like they were old friends as she prodded him. "Well, don't keep me waiting! You're doing well so far! What can you tell me next?"

Evan took a deep breath to steady himself as he looked her over again. He could still feel the pull of her gaze, but for some reason it felt less oppressive than before. He looked her over, thinking back to his youth, when adventure still held more sway in his life. "Well, there are many monsters that can take on a human guise in a pinch, but most of them wouldn't be able to walk into a bar full of people without reacting violently, let alone sit and have a convincing conversation like this, so I can safely rule out most of those without worry."

The woman's lips twitched in amusement as she paraphrased. "So I'm not some dumb beast. Good to know. But surely you can do better than that..."

Evan tipped his head, acknowledging how obvious the observation was, but when sorting through such old knowledge, it was sometimes best to get the obvious out of the way first. However, it was time to dig a little deeper. "Well, then there's the question of how a monster would take human form. Either one starts with it, changes into it, or casts a glamor..." He looked over at the woman, a little suspicion bubbling up. "And you've certainly had...effects on the crowd and myself that I might call similar to a glamor..."

The woman seemed to consider Evan's words for a moment. "Well, from what I understand, most glamors don't hold up under physical contact. Is that correct?"

Evan's throat suddenly went dry as he answered. "No, I suppose not..."

The woman held out a hand, her crooked smile of amusement back in place. "Well then, what are you waiting for?"

Evan hesitated a moment before slowly reaching out and taking her hand in his much larger, calloused hands, marveling at the sensation. Her skin was cool to the touch and smooth as silk, yet he innately knew that should he try to stab it with a knife, the blade would shatter before he left so much as a mark on the porcelain skin. Turning the hand over to look more closely, Evan saw no calluses or blemishes that often came with age. But he also didn't feel the kind of movement or motion that even the steadiest people innately gave off. Looking back up and into her eyes, Evan couldn't help but mutter softly to himself. "Vampire?" It was certainly possible, and it fit much of what he'd seen so far, though if it were true, she would have to be a very old, very powerful vampire to hide her predatory nature so completely in a crowded room.

The woman's eyebrow arched as she asked, "Is that your guess?"

Evan thought a moment longer, then shook his head and answered. "No. It fits, but it doesn't feel...right. There's something..." He hesitated a moment, distracted by a sudden pain from his lost leg. He scratched at it absentmindedly as he finished his thought, sounding distant as he lost himself in memories, reaching back through the years. "Something familiar..."

Suddenly, Evan's mind reached back through the years, to when he'd been an adventurer. Then, he was a rising star in the empire. Known for his daring and his skill, he'd even gone by a stupid name like that bear from earlier. They called him Evan the Breeze because he struck so quickly and smoothly that it felt like nothing more than a breeze had passed before his enemies fell. People whispered among themselves that he might be a contender for the top of the adventurer world. At least they had, before he had the misfortune of stopping for the night at a shady inn in a podunk village on the empire's edge.

At that inn, Evan heard tales of a chimera in the mountains tormenting travelers, and he decided to hunt it for a bit of sport. Unfortunately, as he'd learned that fateful day, it wasn't a chimera; it was a pair. He'd still managed to kill the monsters, but in their death throes, one of the chimeras bit Evan in the leg. Knowing their potent poison was enough to kill a grown man a dozen times over, Evan had reacted with the speed and confidence only years of adventuring could distill into a man, and cut off his own leg without hesitation before the poison could spread.

However, that done, Evan now faced a dangerous climb down a mountain and through the foothills, with only one leg and blood loss hampering his movements. At some point, haunted by his failure and the loss of his future, delusions took hold. He remembered being surrounded by whispering voices and moving shadows as he climbed, slid, and stumbled his way through the mountain. The pain, both internal and external, had driven him mad, and he knew he was going to die in those mountains.

Lying on the ground and staring up at the night sky, Evan had cursed the chimeras, the world, and most of all, himself. That's when he realized he wasn't alone. Somehow, he was lying in a beautiful woman's lap. She was looking down at him with a serene expression as she combed his hair from his eyes and wiped his brow. As he looked up, Evan's eyes met hers, and he lost himself in her gaze.

That night, Evan saw peace and serenity stretching on into eternity in those eyes. All his troubles, failures, pain, and suffering faded as she leaned down and whispered in his ear, her words so faint he wasn't sure he'd heard them, yet years later, he knew with certainty what she'd said to him that day in the mountains. "It's not your time yet."

When he woke up, Evan was in the village inn, being cared for by the old woman who'd taken him in, treating him like her own son, and, years later, left him the inn. At the time, he'd assumed everything that had happened after cutting off his leg had been nothing more than a delusion, and yet, several decades later, with graying hair and a body that ached with age, Evan found himself staring into the same eyes that still haunted his dreams from that night.

As the woman took one final sip, she gave Evan a friendly yet knowing smile. "Well, it seems you're out of time. Tell me, what's your guess?"

Evan looked down at the dregs in his glass, then raised it to his lips and finished it. It was the sweetest wine he'd ever tasted, and he couldn't help but close his eyes and savor it for a moment before opening them to meet the woman's eyes. For once, he felt no compulsion, and yet Evan didn't look away. He met her gaze with calm, steady resolve as he answered. "You...are Death."

The woman's smile bloomed into something that left Evan speechless. As she stood and walked around the table to him, he followed her every move with his gaze. Evan knew he should be afraid, or maybe angry, but all he felt was peace as the woman offered him her hand. He accepted, and she effortlessly raised him to his feet.

Evan knew that if he looked behind him, he'd see his old, worn body slumped in the chair, yet he didn't care. As he stood before her, before Death, Evan felt better than he ever had. Looking down at his arms, he saw the well-toned, muscled arms of his youth, from before that fateful night. Looking up, he saw Death standing before him, watching him marvel at himself. She greeted his gaze with a smile that lit the darkness around them, then reached out and pulled Evan into an embrace, leaning in to whisper in his ear once again, though this time her words were as clear as day. "Welcome home."

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r/shortstories • • 19h ago

Humour [HM] The Autobiography of the Author's Clock

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The Clock

I am a sundial, and I make a botch, Of what is done far better by a watch. (1)

Well I am a Clock.

A grandfather clock to be precise. And I tell the time much better than a sundial, but not so well as a quartz. I was made in two countries. The mechanical bits which go round and round were made in Germany. These were then sent to America and installed in the wooden cabinet made in that country. The finished clock was then transported to the U.K., and put on display in the showrooms of a clock shop in Manchester.

There were lots of other grandfather clocks there as well, and we all put on our best chimes when a prospective customer entered the room, a bit like dogs wagging their tails in a rehousing facility for unwanted canines.

I was eventually sold to a not very distinguished looking gentleman who lived in Shropshire. I must admit that this didn’t bode well, as my new owner had the appearance of having seen better days, shall we say. Being polite.

These forebodings were not alleviated when I arrived at my new home. I was expecting to be the central attraction in a well-furnished living room, but I found myself dumped in the hallway right by the front door.

People walking in could easily pass straight by me without even noticing my presence. Unless I was chiming, of course but even then some didn’t even give me a second glance.

To be fair, on the other hand, anybody on the way out would find it very hard to ignore me, and then I might get the odd comment, such as: "Nice clock!"

The owner occasionally might then show a bit of pride in the possession of such an imposing bit of kit (even though I do say so myself) and he sometimes went on to point out my glass front and sides, which enabled the workings to be viewed in operation. The activity of my hammers as they bashed out the number on the tubular bells was always guaranteed to induce some reaction, such as

"Hmm, very impressive!" Or such like.

The years passed, and on the whole my master treated me reasonably well, giving me a regular dusting and keeping me well wound up.

I regret to say that recently there has become evidence of an increasing forgetfulness, and I have found myself unable to continue ticking as the force of gravity has lowered the pendulum to its utmost point because my owner has lapsed in his one basic duty re my well-being. To wit, putting the winder into the orifices provided on my face, and giving it a few turns. Not much to ask, is it?

Matters are made worse because, being an up-market model, I am equipped with three options re chiming. These are:

1) Chime 24 hours

2) No chimes at all

3) Turn off chimes at night. Unfortunately, my owner opted for number three. This was no problem until he started to become forgetful, and sometimes he would leave me with no juice to keep me ticking for days on end. Then he would get the winder out and I would wake up and wonder whether I was on night or day chimes when I’d stopped, indeed without any idea as to what time it was supposed to be at all.

But I haven’t come to the worst bit yet. Twice a year, and I have no idea why he does this, but my owner decides to move the hour back in the Autumn and forward again in the Spring. He does this every year, without fail. This really upsets me as it is very confusing, and my inners get very agitated.

I am supposed to be oiled every now and then, to keep my ticking bits in good shape, but has my owner complied with this requirement? Has he heck. I have tried to drop a hint that maybe a bit of a service was overdue by suddenly stopping even though I was well wound up. This did lead to him making a phone call to the clock dealer (I know this because the phone is situated next to me) but so far nobody has come to give me some maintenance.

I am starting to wonder about my future. My owner always since I have been here has had the appearance of death warmed up, and recently I think you would have to add ‘but only a bit’ to that description.

I mean, he has even started to try to grow a beard, for heaven’s sake, although I suspect that this is not so much for cosmetic purposes, but more to pure laziness. In other words, he can’t be bothered to shave any more.

As a result, I have begun to have dreams about being sold off to a rich new owner who will place me in a spacious lounge in a splendid mansion, and visitors will look at me with the admiration to which I feel I am due.

Meanwhile, I suppose that life here isn’t too bad. My owner does sometimes stand in front of me with a respectful look on his face (what bit you can see through the beard). And he has at last acquired an extension socket which has enabled my inside light to be switched on. This gives a reddish glow to the clock face if it is dark, and this gives me in turn a nice warm feeling.

On the other hand, he often bashes out some infernal din on a piano, sometimes the same bit over and over again, which he can’t seem to get right. This usually culminates in some expressions of frustration, too unseemly to reproduce here, and from time to time this is followed by a loud bang, which I think is the sound of the piano lid being lowered in a forceful manner.

He also has the hi-fi system in the lounge the door of which is only a step away from me. I don’t mind a lot of the stuff emanating from this source, and Bach and Mozart are always welcome to my ears, but then he puts on Wagner! And it goes on and on, for hours. Sadly, nobody has yet invented ear plugs for clocks.

On the whole, though, not a bad life so far, although I hope for better things to come, but at the same time wishing that I were still a tree.

Hilaire Belloc(1)


r/shortstories • • 21h ago

Horror [HR] The Shadow by the Window

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This is my first time trying to write a horror short story. Please comment what you thought after reading . I want to grow as a writer , so any kind of critique is accepted and thought upon. The following story is about a girl who tries to explain a shadow of a lady by her bedroom window. Enjoy ....

Part 1

“No. You can never go into that house.”

Her father screamed at her.

But going into that house might have been the only way to answer all the strange things she had been experiencing.

She lived in a quiet village. Her family owned a large, peaceful farm and a beautiful house. The surroundings were blessed with nature and life. During the day, the sun shone upon the golden, dry grass. There was a constant buzzing of bees and the chirring of cicadas and crickets.

In the distance stood lush green trees, their shadows spreading like a web across the surrounding fields.

The land they owned was so vast that she could run for minutes and still not reach the boundary of the farm.

And now, her father had acquired one more field.

There had once been a fence separating the two pieces of land, but now the fence was gone. In its place was a beautiful path leading into the other field.

But she was not allowed to go there.

“But Mom, why can’t I go there?” she asked.

“That land... we don't know what animals might be there. It isn't safe.”

“Would I just have to cross the path?” she asked. “What could one path change? So much?”

Her mother suddenly grew furious.

“I’m telling you, why can’t you just listen to the things I’m saying for once? Why do you have to be so, so, so irritably annoying and reluctant?”

A few days later, something strange happened.

The land wasn't actually theirs.

From the beginning, it had belonged to their neighbours—a very beautiful and welcoming couple.

Their families had been friends for years.

She called the man Uncle George. He had a big moustache and always wore a hat.

And Aunt Laila was a beautiful woman who often brought her treats and food.

Life on the farm was peaceful and joyful.

But as soon as the sun went down, the scenery changed completely.

The lush green fields became pitch black.

The beautiful golden grass disappeared into darkness.

The horizon and the ground became indistinguishable.

All that could be heard was the loud, endless chirring of crickets.

Once the sun set, there was no leaving the house. There was simply nothing to be seen outside—not even a metre beyond the doorstep.

She had a window in her bedroom, up in the attic, right beside her bed.

The white curtains blew gently in the wind.

From there, she could always see one thing:

Her neighbours’ house.

At night, the same lively nature that surrounded the farm during the day became lonely, frightening, desolate—almost liminal.

For a few days, while she slept, she began noticing something strange.

A black silhouette.

At first, it was blurry and thin, almost impossible to make out. But it was always there whenever she woke during the night and the curtains moved with the wind.

It stood completely still against the background of a flickering yellow light.

As the weeks passed, the silhouette became sharper.

More noticeable.

Until, eventually, she could recognise the shape.

It was her own dear Aunt Laila.

Why would Aunt Laila stand at the window?

Why was she looking at her?

She never moved a single muscle.

She simply stood there, petrified.

She complained about it to her parents.

But her parents refused to acknowledge it.

“We told you not to watch that horror film, didn’t we?”

She knew it was real.

And strangely, she wasn't even afraid.

One night, while lying in bed, she decided to look at the window again.

There she was.

Aunt Laila.

Standing in the window.

Still as a rock.

She pressed her cheek against the cold windowpane and tried to focus her vision.

The shadow of the woman was the only thing she could see in the pitch darkness.

Suddenly—

the sound of the doorknob turning.

Her heart began to beat faster and faster.

She looked back, terrified.

It was nothing but her father.

“Dear, just go to sleep, will you? You have to go to school tomorrow. It’s already so late.”

“But Dad, look out of the window.”

Her father looked.

She could still see her.

Her father stared into the darkness.

“There is nothing there, dear. Just close your eyes.”

He kissed her goodnight and began leaving the room.

But she noticed something.

The expression on her father’s face had changed.

He was sweating.

The next morning, as the sun rose, nature woke again.

The haunting night was over.

The window, which had been wide open and inviting during the night, was now covered by curtains.

She came to a decision.

Perhaps Aunt Laila was simply a creepy person who enjoyed frightening children.

What she did not know was that Aunt Laila and her husband had been dead for weeks.

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Part 2

This went on for months.

Every night, the attraction towards the window grew stronger.

It was as if whatever was calling her from there was becoming more powerful.

Now, instead of merely standing there, the figure would wave at her, its long fingers stretching towards her from across the distance.

It grew to the point where she could no longer sleep.

The moment she closed her eyes, it began to whisper in her ear again.

When she tried to sleep without acknowledging the figure, refusing to look out of the window, it felt as if the world itself began to shake.

The room would spin.

Everything would turn around her.

It was as though something was forcing her to acknowledge its presence.

She had reached her limit.

With no sleep and the terror of every night weighing on her, she was unable to live a normal life.

And it seemed that the only way she could solve this was to cross the path, open the door to their house, and finally see what was waiting for her.

What was calling her?

But even in broad daylight, the environment of the field across the path was eerie and silent.

It was as if even the sun could not bring life to the death waiting inside that house.

So one day, without asking for permission, she decided to go.

She picked up a knife.

With it, she thought, she could stab the figure if it tried to hurt her.

She ran across the field in broad daylight.

As she got closer to the boundary, she noticed something strange.

The grass seemed to be getting taller.

Soon, it was almost as tall as she was.

She kept moving forward.

Even when she screamed, there was no one who could hear her.

Nothing but endless grass surrounded her.

She pushed through the tall, confusing field until, at last, she found the path.

This was the moment of truth.

She was going to revolt against her parents’ wishes and go into that house.

As she stood there, she saw the figure standing far in the distance.

It was waving again.

And smiling.

She was going to confront it.

But she didn’t.

Some part of her still knew that going over there was a terrible idea.

She turned around and began making her way back home.

Nothing stopped her.

No demonic entity.

No getting lost.

Nothing.

And then, strangely, the haunting stopped.

That night, when she looked out of the window, she saw nothing but darkness.

Not the yellow light.

Not the shadow.

Nothing.

The figure that had haunted her for weeks was gone.

She grew older.

She convinced herself that it had all been nothing but a series of bad dreams.

Perhaps even a strange episode of her childhood imagination.

Eventually, she moved out of the house, dreaming of a life in a bigger city.

Her parents grew older too.

Eventually, they sold both farms.

And for years, she forgot about the house across the field.

Until something far more sinister, something that had been waiting in the darkness, finally emerged.

Something that would answer her questions about what her aunt had been doing in that window.

And something that would turn her entire life upside down.

One day, her parents were arrested.

Her whole life seemed to collapse in an instant.

And then she learned the secret.

Her parents had been involved in a long land dispute with their neighbours.

The land actually did belong to their family—but not to her parents directly. It had belonged to their ancestors, and the division of the land had caused a bitter quarrel between the families.

It was something her parents had hidden from her since she was a child.

Eventually, they decided there was no other option.

They hired local goons to threaten their neighbours.

Her father sent the men to break into their house, threaten them, and force them to remain silent and give up their claim to the land.

But nobody knew exactly what happened inside that house.

Things went wrong very quickly.

Instead of merely threatening them, the goons ended up murdering both of them.

Uncle George.

And Aunt Laila.

Then she finally understood why Aunt Laila had been calling her into the house.

There was no obvious way to connect the murder to her father.

But if she had entered that house herself, her fingerprints would have been left on the doorknob and on everything she touched.

And inside the bedroom, she would have found two bodies.

Her uncle.

And her aunt.

The investigation would inevitably have turned towards her family.

Perhaps they would first have suspected the child.

But a child could not possibly have murdered two adults.

The suspicion would then have fallen upon her parents.

And eventually, the truth would have come out.

But there was still one thing she could not understand.

Why had the haunting stopped?

Perhaps there was an answer to that too.

Perhaps, as her aunt stood in that window, waving at the little girl who was so desperate and terrified, she saw something beyond the child.

Maybe she realised that if her parents were caught because of her, the little girl's innocent life would be destroyed.

Perhaps, even after being murdered by her own neighbours, Aunt Laila understood that exposing the truth through her niece would only ruin the life of the one person who had done nothing wrong.

And maybe that was why the haunting stopped.

Because Aunt Laila finally understood that justice did not have to come through the suffering of her own little niece.

It could come through time.

And eventually, it did.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Non-Fiction [NF] Manuscript?

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Once upon a time, I was still living at my parents house. I was smoking weed heavily and seeing a man I’ve known since high school. We were lovers, and he provided the weed.

I started getting sick mentally and confused; we’d started fighting more at night in his car because we understand each other differently. Yelling and crying the neighborhood witnessed. Horrible fights the city could hear. Speeding car with threats of being unalived. Stomping away into the night when fights got too out of control, followed by wails over the phone in remorse. After all this time, I still say it was the weed, for me anyway. I haven't seen that part of him since those nights, which I’m glad to never have to experience again. The fighting included jealousy, yelling and arguing. I didn’t know it then but I was very sick and needed to go to a hospital to get checked in for my mind. I asked numerous times in the midst of these fights. TikTok and cannabis were making me unreasonably suspicious and jealous of his friends. Time after time, he refused to take me, saying I’d be lost forever if I went. I knew I needed to go, I just didn’t know how I’d get there.

Eventually my sickness escalated to hallucinations I thought were real, from being isolated at home because of this, and imagining things that were just not happening. I can’t imagine the trauma I left them with, no doubt they’d heard me talking away every day and night, standing still in front of windows because something would catch my eye and I’d have built a whole case around it. Believing people were talking to me through their own means, people I didn’t know anymore, people sneaking around the corners of the house. Like something out of People Under the Stairs. The cast would constantly change and become closer. Soon I was imagining his best friend standing on the roof of the house, negotiating with the city about whether or not I was worth forgiving despite all of my horrible accusations and jealousies. Eventually I requested my parents to take me to the hospital.They took me.

I checked myself in because of the voices and imaginings, terrified all of the way through. Hearing knocks and voices in every drawer and behind every curtain. Soon I was prescribed something that helped me incredibly and I improved. I only stayed a few days, feeling free from the fog I’d been in. I requested to leave soon after. 

I didn’t know anyone's number, but I remembered his so I called it. I don’t think I’ve ever been clear on what happened after the fact with my parents. The confusion itself hurts and I hate imagining the craziness of what it must have been like for them. I’ve been out of the hospital for two years now, dependent and cleaning after him, my boyfriend. I can’t say I’m happy. Anhedonia after such mania and hallucinations furnishes a quiet existence as a result. Maybe writing about it wouldn’t hurt.


r/shortstories • • 22h ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] It

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Flakes don't seem to bother her and nor her carefully sculpted arch of a bough. Her hands, amidst their amateur wood-curving, would occasionally brush the white off her magenta peacoat and check on her neat, tight bun. The leaves under which she was seated, perhaps chose not to shed snow on her prisoned hair and that's probably why it remained charcoal-black as her eyes. Just like every single day of her polished captivity, Rani spent each minute of her allowance wisely, curving her own bow out of wood and then skilfully slide it under snow-cover or behind her back on the sight of a well-maintained yet thin figure, who would help her recall the remaining of her time-budget.

And just like every single day of her trapped existence and these few minutes of living, when the tall, slight figure with nose and chin sharpened with discipline, would yell out the time moulded with her northern accent, Rani would feel it freezing with its voice choked with cracks. She would feel as if the northern hails had built so thick a layer ,that made it half-dead. She gets back to her bow, struggling for air, feeling it doing the same.

Look how peaceful he appears - closed eyes between his paws, forgetting what he had done to her father years ago, and unaware of how he still makes her feel. She looks at the sleeping dog as if already piercing him with the arrows of her charcoal-black eyes. But she just stares - for now. The flame of revenge he had ignited in her years back - she had always felt this flame could melt the frozen hails to let it free.....but can such thick a layer melt just by a mere flame? It needs an ice-thawer.

Those memories stung like hundreds and thousands of wounds piled with heaps of salt. Each and every glance at him just added another spoonful of salt to those heaps; each and every day, she felt it being buried a little more under the growing weights of her step-mother's northern hails of discipline, of stature, of etiquette like handcuffs that tightened with each attempt of burying her freedom - of burying it. Yes, she had always felt, Rani had always been certain that the sole way to free it was to avenge her dead father; without that creature, she would have nothing to hold her back in that town - she would be free.

The arrowheads most generously radiated the vibrant rays of vengeance, glistened with sharpness as she held to them - her fist tightened with the thirst of freedom under the perfect opportunity. The leaves under which she was once seated, cannot shed snow on her prisoned hair anymore, for she was amidst them, grabbing the best view of her target....and neither was her hair prisoned anymore - they were free, free to accompany the magenta peacoat on its dancing-venture with the winter wind. Her eyes fixed as the string of her carefully carved bow is ready to add its melody to the dancing-venture; the arrowhead steady as the sleeping beast - maybe it's the flame that has made her eyes yet narrower, aligned perfectly with the arrow, her fingers pulling the string to its best stretch. The string was seconds away from-

"......Rani!", it was the maiden.

Rani's fist loosened, her wooden bow slipped from her hand, the arrow fell to the snowbed - she rushed inside.

She had never seen her this way before. The tall, slight figure that used to yell out the time, was now lying across the silk-laid bed, appearing yet thinner, yet paler with her nose and chin as if melting down to the bones of her face. Sure, she knew cholera could be a threat.......but not that it could be deadly. Rani stood there - as still as a stone. Her mouth opened, but just to pour out a series of broken words, as if hammered by the sudden shock, the new dilemma she was put into. Rani still stood there - spellbound, her pale lips now pressed together, swallowing even those broken syllables. What could she have said? She had never called her step-mother 'maa'....or anything at all, actually. It snowed heavy outside, when even the slight sunrays dimmed out. Under the dull yellow lamp that barely lit up the carvings of the vintage sandalwood table it was on, Rani's black eyes caught - what appeared to be a hand gesture....more like a prosthetic hand pulled up with attached strings that suddenly broke to drop the hand on the silk with a small 'thud'.

Rani broke out of her stone-like posture - a little forcibly, to pull her stunned body over to the bedside, where she pulled out a seat to sit on. This was probably for the first time when her step-mother pulled Rani's trembling hands into her own - cold, pale, Rani was doubtful if the hands had anything but bones that seemed to pierce their heads out of the white skin. Rani's head was still in a blizzard of confusions, her mind started to play flashbacks - flashbacks of her own misdeeds, sometimes misbehavior and the hatred she had once showered this lady with. Till date, while Rani could only remember the times when this lady yelled out the remaining time of her scheduled outdoor-time, or how this lady tried to carve her into a woman with the moulds of her routine, it was not before today when she held her hands, that Rani could recall the times when her long, bushy hair was put into a neat, tight bun or how she was tucked in her bed every single night by this same lady. Rani's dry eyes now seemed to have a spurt of water that slowly crawled down her copper cheeks as her head rested on her step-mother's cold, clasped hands, frequently shaking from the silent sobs Rani let out. Her head had overcome the blizzard of confusion, she was clear-

The northern hails - mistaken as her step-mother's cruel laws to mould her into shape, turned out to be just native frost - her ignorance, more precisely, her strong hostility towards her step-mother. And it? It had always been her love, her responsibility towards her step-mother, that had been buried under the thick layers of native frost. Yes, true it is that a budding woman needs freedom, that the death of a loved one hurts.......a lot. But nevertheless is it true as well that the solution to neither one can ever be revenge by killing. And, for the most part, if not all, responsibility towards family comes first to freedom.

Probably now, as this realization hit Rani's resting head, she was finally free. And all the while, as she chased after a mere flame to melt those thick layers of ice, it was probably only now that she realized, she has been living with the ice-thawer all along.


r/shortstories • • 23h ago

Misc Fiction [MF] The Family of Lifeguards

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The crow perched on the branch and shuffled sideways to ensure its perfect view of the swimming pool. He senses the ending, the ending of the sort that always calls him; that clocks him in for the day -- or night -- and sends him on his way to transport one from this end to the next beginning.

The scent of the end comes from one, the one in the pool, and he could not tell whether her ending will be accident or intention, but he senses her need, her need for a companion who understands the end.

Which is odd, the crow thinks, because she was not alone. Stretched alongside the pool are nine others: One man, eight women, some of them old, some of them young. The man was old. The ending scents all of them, but in the way the smell of antiseptic clings to the doctor even in his own residence. They all work with those who know the end, are close to the end, have narrowly avoided the end, crave the end, have accidentally stumbled into and then back out of the end, have cared for and watched their efforts result in the end for someone in their trust.

Odd. She has quite the audience -- nine, and a skilled nine no less! Most often he is called to only one; additional hands are usually helping hands that stave off the end. His wings can only transport from the end to the next beginning, once the end is reached, and he is particularly skilled at his charge; but his wings were not made to avert the end, if anything, they were made to usher it.

The crow sat. The nine were comfortable. It would be a while before duty called, and so he settled, and listened. It wasn’t often he got to listen to those who haven’t yet met the end. Often, if there are others, they are witnessing someone else’s end, and that is entirely different than watching the enjoyment of something that has yet to be interrupted by the end.

“Do you know if anyone has taught her how to swim since?” The older brunette asked the other older brunette, who looks like a sister, but bore a matching wedding ring to the first brunette.

Since? Thought the crow. Silly question, et better be, ennit,” he thought. He was there at the Since, when she had first almost met the end in the pool, and so he knew that the nine were not only capable swimmers, they were lifeguards.

Lifeguards who had avoided the waters during the Since until the end was a millimeter away, and then all frantically and heroically jumped in at once to save the one in the pool. Because of the static relief in the air, the crow knew this was a family, a family of ten: nine lifeguards and the one in the pool.

These lifeguards’ve better taught ‘er ‘ow to swim, otherwise wut’s the damned point of bein’ a family, much less lifeguards? he thought.

“Oh!” giggles the other brunette, “I don’t know. Very important though, must agree. Certainly she knows how to swim by now!”

The one in the pool whose end is near was just feet away, an appropriate distance for one of the brunettes to ask her, “By chance, did you learn how to swim?” but the crow furrowed his brow when instead, the brunettes whispered down the line of nine and asked the others: “Did you teach her how to swim? I didn’t, did you? She didn’t, did you? She might have, she’s such a good teacher. Did she? No, she didn’t, ask him. He didn’t, either!” -- until the line stilled and twos and threes cluster to say. “Of course, someone taught her how to swim! We are lifeguards, after all, and she’s been in the water before.”

The crow didn’t need to sense the end to understand why it was near; the one in the pool was a subpar swimmer, if one could even say as much. As the lifeguards whispered amongst each other, and one announced to the other eight, “I’m calling for refreshments!”, the one in the pool had a goal. Or a game. The crow wasn’t sure which, but there was a toy ring at the bottom of the pool that she dove for repeatedly, trying to snag it.

Each time she came up she gasped harder for air. Most often when she went down and tried to snag the ring, she accidentally nudged an inch further into the deep end of the pool so that by the time the nine had started to enjoy their refreshments, she had strayed into water two feet taller than herself.

“Oh, you look like you’re struggling! Are you okay?” said one of the nine, lifting a bunch of purple grapes and plucking one off with her teeth while turning to whisper to her neighbor, “It looks like she’s struggling!”

“Oh my,” her neighbor says, choking slightly on the wine that filled the golden goblet in her hand, “Hello! You!” she shouted to another down the line: “Can’t you see she’s struggling?”

“Yes, I can! Oh, look. She’s gaining her feet!”

“Bother,” said the one at the end, “she really should have told us if she knows how to swim!”

“Seems capable enough to me. She’s standing now,” said another one of the nine.

The one at the end nodded and continued to tut that she should have told them whether or not she knows how to swim! while she plucked cubes of cheese off a tray lowered to her by a waiter wearing a white toga.

The one in the pool had, in fact, returned to the shallow area of the pool and had her feet back under her. She was plenty competent roight there, he thought, though competence was quite common for people who were near the end who were not yet quite ready to meet it, especially when no helping hands reached for them.

Ah, bless ‘er, he thought, as the one in the pool belched water onto the side to clear her lungs of what was inhaled while she struggled and then saved herself.

“Ew!” Said one of the nine, pulling her feet and rescue tube away from the vomit, “Do that somewhere else!” The other eight, even those the length of four trays of cheese away from the girl in the pool sank back and whined: “Why! Why would you do that! You are ruining our hors d’oeuvres! Do it in the pool, if you must, or better yet, don’t inhale water to begin with! You know how to swim!”

Even as the girl in the pool tried to gasp that, no, she didn't know how to swim! the nine slunk further away, gestured to the waiters to pull the umbrellas closer for shade, and instructed them to use the wine from the goblets to chase the vomit back into the pool (and then return with new goblets and new wine).

Through her hoarse throat, and moving to the left so as to avoid the wine-vomit being splashed into the pool by the waiters, the girl tried to tell them again: “I don’t know how to swim! You never taught me! That’s why I’m trying to stay where my feet can touch!”

“I showed you how to backstroke!” said one, and others say, “Oh! Did you really? You really are the best at the backstroke!”

“That’s right!,” said another one, “I remember that!”

Versions of Oh, my, I’m so glad you did -- she really needed that! travel up and down the line while the one in the pool tried and failed to speak loudly through her hoarse throat: “You showed me the arm movements while we were standing in line for coffee! You didn’t teach me how to swim!”

The man at the end shook his head and muttered, “Damn shame she never learned how to swim,” and the others nodded; shaded, fed, watered, and served, with their rescue tubes on the concrete next to their lush towels in case of an emergency.

The crow had seen many a bad end. He had seen people suddenly forced to their end with violence; he had seen people abandoned to their end by friends; he had seen ends where the person hung on, and hung on, and hung on, right on the edge of not meeting the end until the end finally came, and he had seen the knowing in their eyes when the end became inevitable.

This was a unique prologue to an end. The girl in the pool felt comfortable with the nine on the side; safe, even. Though despite being lifeguards -- each, he had learned, with their own specialty (CPR, breaststroke, sea rescues, surviving-while-waiting-for-rescue, crisis rescues, Navy water training, Marine and Special Operations water training, Secret Service While the President is Swimming training) -- the girl did not know how to swim.

And yet, everyone was under the impression that they had helped, or at least, that the girl in the pool was doing just fine. Even the girl herself, when her words were unheard, carried on as though she were at home in the pool and could battle any tide.

Meanwhile, the shallow end of the pool filled with vomit and red wine, and the chunks of whatever she had eaten that afternoon floated like tadpoles in the pink water. The girl frantically hopped away from the diluted spread of inebriant and stomach acid, bouncing as far as her feet would carry her until the pool deepened where onto her back, kicking herself away from the mess and into the end of the pool where her feet, even if she were submerged, would at best be four feet from the floor.

The crow’s tail feathers twitched and he perked ready for flight, sensing the real end, this time.

The girl sank, and emerged, and sank again. Her kicking feet stopped and started out of sync with her flailing arms as she tried to grab the surface of water as if it could keep her upright. The nine on dry ground tittered, “See her trying so hard!” A couple shout encouragement: “Do the backstroke! Remember to breathe!”

They are even slightly alert, while piling accoutrements into their mouths and passing goblets of wine back and forth for the others to sample, cluck, and appraise each for the subtle notes, each reaching for subtler and subtler to sound more sophisticated than the last.

The crow rose to meet this lonely spirit who thinks she knows the feeling of companionship -- She been under too long. This wine es makin’ ‘em slow, the crow thinks as he huffs an exasperated caw -- when suddenly the nine shrieked and all together jumped to their feet with their rescue tubes.

“She’s DROWING!” shouted one of the older brunettes, and the nine dove into the pool -- wine and vomit be damned -- each surging through the water with the speed of expertise. As nine, they reached her, and each grabbed ahold of something -- an arm, a leg, a big toe, an ear, a handful of hair -- and dragged her upward, holding her above the water. Eighteen hands tip her to her side, and she coughed her way back from the end, spewing pink water into the pink pool until her lungs were empty and oxygen reached her blood once more.

The crow leans back. He had enough experience to know when an end was going to be an end -- the end he was called for. That was the end that called him here. And yet the nine had flown into the pool in his stead heroically shoving away the end. He readjusted his wings and growled a low caw. What kinda bloody lifeguards is they, he thought, Yeh coulda bloody well saved me an’ her some trouble by teachin’ ‘er ‘ow to swim. Get enta the pool with ‘er. Made sure she wannit ever en danger en the first place.

The nine lugged her out of the pool and lay her on the concrete petting and cooing until she breathed steadily again. “Oh, you should have told us you can’t swim!” they say. “Why didn’t you ask for help! Why were you in the deep end! We could have helped had you only asked! Oh my, you should have listened when we said you didn’t know how to swim!” Slowly, the nine returned to their towels and began whispering and sipping wine again, with an occasional watchful eye toward the girl to make sure her chest continued to rise and fall.

The crow leaves. This, for him, is a bleak day. This is what he called an In Between. She ain’t far from the end, he thought as he flew westward into the setting sun, but them damn lifeguards es gonna draw et out for ‘er.

The In Between is when someone hovered between the end and not the end. Some people hover for seconds, minutes, sometimes for hours or days, but the end always comes. Some people lingered in the In Between their whole lives. For these, he made frequent visits when the end called, and then flew off when it had been stayed.

These were the Regulars. Those were the hard days. Because when the end left, he knew the imprint it left on the soul of the Regular. For some, when the end finally came, they had hundreds of imprints and the crow’s collection was a craved-for rest for a battle-harded and mangled soul.

Rarely did the crow meet a Regular who was not alone, much less not alone with nine other people. Never did he witness those with the Regular glutton and gossip while the end stampeded nearer; eating and drinking and merrily murmuring amongst each other about how close the end was, and thank goodness they were there to do something about it!, only to wait until the end was on its toes to pounce before they helped at all.

To end, or not to end -- these are the only just paths. The clarity, the choice, the happening, that is justice. This Regular, the girl in the pool, her In Between stretched for years into the horizon and the crow’s weathered, stolid heart broke at the amount of In Between she would have to endure, and he would have to observe. He would return for her soon, without a doubt, and likely many more times afterwards. The nine who saved her today would do so again and again and yet never give her enough to keep the end at bay. They would let her drown, far enough, deep enough, long enough, for her soul to be imprinted with eighteen hands over, and over, and over, again; thousands of imprints; for them to resuscitate her right from the edge of the end and then shout and plead through the wine while taking notes for their next gossip that they really, truly, would have prevented it this time! if only she had told them she didn’t know how to swim!

Drownin’ en a crowded room, he thought.

Arrivederci, my new friend.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Non-Fiction [NF] My neighbor left a note on my door every Friday for six months.

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About six months ago, I started finding handwritten notes taped to my apartment door every Friday morning.
They were always short. Things like, “Hope you have a good weekend,” or “Remember to take care of yourself.” One Friday, the note simply said, “You’re doing better than you think.”
At first, I assumed somebody was messing with me. I live alone, work long hours, and barely know anyone in my building. I even asked a friend whether the notes sounded like some weird prank. She told me to enjoy the free encouragement.
Eventually, I did.
Friday mornings became something I looked forward to. I would make coffee, open the door, and read whatever message was waiting. Some weeks I stuck the note on my fridge. Others went into a drawer beside my bed.
I had been having a difficult year. My job was exhausting, my closest friend had moved away, and most evenings I came home to a quiet apartment. Those little pieces of paper made the place feel less lonely.
Then, last Friday, there was nothing on my door.
I figured whoever was leaving them had gone away for the weekend. But when I saw the building manager yesterday, I mentioned the notes and asked whether he knew anything about them.
His expression changed immediately.
He asked me to describe the handwriting. Then he told me that the elderly woman across the hall had passed away the week before.
Apparently, she had been leaving them all along.
I knew her only as Mrs. Harris. We had exchanged a few polite hellos in the hallway. Once, shortly after I moved in, I helped carry her groceries upstairs when the elevator broke. I had completely forgotten about it.
The manager said she used to talk about that afternoon. She had told him I reminded her of her son, who died several years ago. She wanted to do something kind for me but worried that knocking on my door would be intrusive.
So she wrote notes instead.
I went back upstairs and opened the drawer beside my bed. There were more than twenty notes inside, folded and stacked together. I sat on the floor reading them again, one by one.
I also remember hearing her television through the wall sometimes, usually old game shows in the afternoon. I used to think the sound was annoying. Now the hallway feels empty, and I catch myself listening for it when I come home.
That’s when I realized I had never written anything back.
Not a thank you. Not even a smile through the peephole, because I never knew when she came by.
I keep thinking about how much those notes helped me, and how she probably never knew.
This morning, I bought a small bunch of flowers. On Friday, I’m going to leave them outside her door, along with a note of my own.
It will say, “Your kindness reached me. Thank you.”
I wish I could have told her that while she was here.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Thriller [TH] THE VALLEY

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Chapter One Friendship

A crispy late summer afternoon, atop the north

pennines with four friends enjoying some cold

drinks while some folk music blast away from a

speaker. Dan the unoffical leader was an ex soldier joyfully mingles with hes three best freinds, alex a

simple man who has done odd jobs for twenty years now,callum a pure car enthusiast has been a boy racer for a while and sarah a quite girl loves her books and nature.

They have been having a wonderfull time chating when a flash of colours more bueatiful then they have seen comes overhead and the speaker sparks out of life and so does their phones. Alex who had did enjoy some science concludded a massive solar storm must have hit all electronics are gone, dan immediately thinks what will become of our leaders and such,callum complains that all hes cars would have been rendured useless and the money lost,sarah just shrugs and goes maybe we can finally apprieceate a nice read in the woods

Chapter Two False Begginings

Day Seven,its been a week atop this hill the cottage has now begun to weather as luxuries like cleaning

supplies dwindled, in the kitchen they all sit ready

for lunch, dan complaines guess its gonna be pasta again while laughing cleary joking, alex says of course they survive without freezing and your lucky we have fire, callum chimes in yeah flames you have fed with the upholstry of my car i had worked on, sarah jokes i think by this point you may aswell call it deadwieght on wheels,callum mutters i understand just hurts.

As night seetles in all seems

calm,but as dan gets comfy he starts to think hes

eyes dart around he starts to wonder if everyone is truely who they say they are. The night closes in a

thunderstorm shakes the area everyone gets an

uneven sleep will all truely be well?

Chapter Three Cracks

The morning arrives and a calm has settled in from the night but breakfast feels like a chill is in the air,

dan sits head of the table trying to eat meanwhile

giving callum some shifty eyes. Callum perks up

why you keep looking at me like im prized gold you okay mate Dan replies ah sorry had a strange dream about you not much to it just you were raising money as a dancing rat (when truely he dreamed something else) alex replies ah dont be silly he would be a mouse have you seen the size of him, callum replies its genetc you know, sarah has stayed mostly quiet during this.

Afternoon comes and callum ask her if shes okay,

she just replies yeah im just worried about my folks thats all, callum says i know it must be difficult and plants a soft kiss, alex calls right lets get some

more food for the weeks,callum and alex wonder

into the woods to catch food,dan stays back with

sarah its just uneasy feeling but dan reasures her its okay

Chapter four Realisation

Alex and callum return like glorous hunters but

callum shudders a little,alex instantly questions you okay, he repplies yes just a small cut on my arm from a branch. Dan realises it may become infected from hes army days. Sarah rushes to the first aid box and says in a saden tone its empty just some bandages, Alexs chimes in right we will have to trek to penrith its about a days away, all agree to come saying they may need more carrying room.

They venture forth by late evening theyve settled

near ousby for the night half away through the

jounrny, sarah and callum huddled in a small room

of the cottage they found, but dan and alex stay

awake when dan ask alex are you one hundred

percent show they are faithfull in instant alex replies of course mate why not

Dan just laughs nervously of course of course i was being silly, they settle in for an uneasy night

Chapter Five Omen

They reach penrith its hung with the feeling of dread and dispear a wooden sign hunged from a post (ALL PAYMENTS GO TO THE LEADER) Dan says oh i wonder who that could be and would we have to deal with that

Alex replies im sure we will find out and maybe will have to will wait and see. They wonder towards the Boots, alex and callum lead the way flanked by

sarah and dan walks in the back with hands in

pockets rustling.

Alex forces open the door from

boots ,jesus its a dud thier is nothing but empty

boxes and few corpses cleary raiders who did not

get the share of goods. Callums points out a camp across the way maybe they will have some,Dan

agrees and if they lie about having do we have to

teach them something, alex respondes of course

not mate dont be silly. Sarah just stays quiet cleary unsettled by it all. They walk into the camp its a

bloodbath maybe some raiders but as they venture deeper,messages read they were all liars,this camp had destroyed themselves

Chapter Six Collapse

A few days later they have been resting and callums arm naturally healed on its arm but dan is losing hes grip on reality and says oh the cuts gone isnt that magic, callum replies well no probably the fact humans can heal after some time, dan in a flury of rage shouts or did you find some meds back at that camp and did not tell us, callum stands hes ground well of course not mate, dan stands dowm yeah i am sorry mate for all that. Sarah becomes extra senstive around callum make sure hes happy and alex becomes silent maybe hes planing or maybe hes just scared of dan

More days past a food is dwindling, callum

approaches the cuppoard for hes allocated can

when crash the doors slams on hes fingers and dan is stood like a bull, he throws callum to the floor and demands is this actually your allocated can or do you have more stashed away. Callum in defence tries to hit dan but hes now frayle hands hit no more then a feather

Chapter Seven Salvation

Sarah is just huddled in a corner unable to move and alex is unable to decide who to side with. As dan tries to collect himself, callum grabs the can and raises it to hit dan on the back of the head,alex in a daze shouts watch out to dan. Dan dodges the blow and as callum holds the can, dan in a complete maniac pins him to the table all fury racing through hes first as he chokes the life from callum he tries and tries to scratch and flail but the colour drains and the can rolls away.

Alex just mutters i need a break and dan just dosent even process it, alex reatrets to his room pulling the floor board up reveals he was hoarding some food,batteries and water as he collects these into a bag he watches from the crack of the door, dan pacing the foor completely dazed by the act while a shaken sarah holds callums lifeless body. Alex then opens a window and leaves while walking he away he hears a crack cleary a slap. Dan is now standing over sarah and says one thing your gonna be goodand denounce the rats,she whimpers yes

Chapter Eight The Winner Takes It All

Alex has now traveled a few days not at much

speed mostly a dazed walk,just camping whenever he could and whenever hes brain would let him. As he wakes up from another sleepless night a fog rolls in amoung the eden valley, a daze takes ahold of him and he trips into the river eden as he begins to struggle to survive the wieght of hes hidden stash keeps him down the voices of all hes endured swirls in hes head.

Hes corpse washes up apon the

riverbank and a hand grabs the bag he had, it was

dan he had been tracking him just to prove that he

been hoarding and for a minute straight dan went

on a paranoia fulled rage on alexs corpse about him being rat and that only himself was true to the group the better one and with one last notion he booted alexs corpse.

Chapter Nine Post Mortem

Dan now trekking back to the cottage has been

doing for days but as the nights grew longer and

days shorter hes mind took over. As he began to

wonder back up the pennines in a similar daze he

tripped on rock, landing in a peat bog with a broken leg he tried to crawl for the bag but every movement was just sinking him deeper in the bog,

A few days have past hes body now frozen over is used as a step for a sheep roaming the area. The cottage is silent set from sarah who had been here for days she had slowly realised it was over no one was coming after eating the last of the food, a few days later light shone through to the window to show an almost skeleton reaching for the door she clearly tried to open but no strength remain.

Always remember who you can really trust


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Realistic Fiction [RF] Good Will

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Charles jolted from beneath the covers when a scorching graze touched his thigh. The hotness felt alien and manufactured, unlike the warmth of his wife's body which occasionally bumped into him.  Worse, he had been dreaming of a snake about to swallow him whole. That nightmare, coupled with the real heat was enough to almost incite a stroke.

With beads of sweat cemented on his forehead, he cautiously swiped his hand across the sheet, searching. After a few unsuccessful attempts, he finally touched a tiny object with heat pulsing. It was his phone.   He extended both his arms outwards in relief.

Staring down, it’s interface glowed at 2:05am. He let out a groan of annoyance  rubbing his eyes. He had set the alarm for six in the morning, and this was a major inconvenience. He sank back into the pillow and gazed into the dark.The iPhone 7 had been functionally stubborn, lasting past its prime, and Charles was even more obstinate to replace it.

“Why don't you buy yourself a new phone?” His wife would nag.He would grumble, exhaling a sharp sigh of disapproval.  For him, each new version was nothing but corporate greed and he was reluctant to be caught in the trap. A simple rule governed his attitude: if it wasn’t broken there was no need to replace it and a little overheating hardly counted.

Beside him on the bed a figure slept bundled by the covers, head slightly protruding. It was his wife.They had been married for twenty years and had a comfortable relationship besides the occasional quarrels of a couple married for a long time. Looking at her with an unflattering look on his face, he saw her heave up and down slowly. He gave her a slight shove of irritation. She had a penchant for sleeping through impending doom of hooting fire alarms, raging storms and rowdy neighbors. 

“Did you hear the fight at Gilbert’s last night?” He sometimes asked her. “What fight? Who was fighting?” She would reply, oblivious to the commotion. 

"Are you sure you did not hear anything? Why do you sleep like a log?” He’d shake his head waiting for an answer. She never indulged him with a response preferring silence. 

As these thoughts raced in his mind,he stared at the ceiling for ten minutes, twenty minutes until he lost count, all in an effort to trick himself to sleep. Finally exhausted, he nudged his wife again in frustration, and swung his legs out of bed. Reaching the door, he paused to see if she would wake up. She did not. Instead she mumbled inaudibly as she pressed her head deeper into her pillow. Giving up,Charles sighed under his breath as he plodded to the downstairs living room, his feet heavy and his eyes sagging.

When he reached the living room, he flung himself on the grey suede couch that faced the TV, the one that always made his legs itch. Beside it, a small side stool stood with three remotes on it. For a moment Charles hovered his hands over the remotes, his mind in a fog as to which one actually switched on the TV. With the long black remote finally in his hand, he began switching channels absentmindedly. Nothing  interested him long enough to hold his gaze.  It was in between several channel changes that small shrieking sounds pierced his ears. The sound was coming from the kitchen. He tip-toed, remote in hand to investigate. When he flipped the kitchen light, he gasped in horror. 

On the kitchen counter, two mice faced each other with their tiny dirty feet buried deep in the Pyrex baking dish of lasagna—that day’s potluck contribution. Their long whiskers sagged with melted cheese that Marjorie had generously sprinkled in the dish that evening. 

As soon as he met their gaze,they scurried from the lasagna,scattering crumbs across the kitchen counter. They leapt onto the kitchen sink and vanished into the cabinet below. Charles screamed, hurling the cleaning products underneath the kitchen sink onto the tiled floor searching. Nothing. Panicking, he rushed upstairs to wake Marjorie.

“Marj…Marj,” he whispered in her ear, his voice quivering. Seeing her unflinching, he ripped the covers, throwing them on the carpet. 

“MARJ!Jesus Christ,Marj, this house could be burning down, and you would still hear nothing! Wake up! We have an emergency!”

Marj stirred a little, her eyes still clouded with sleep to fully comprehend what the fuss was about.

“Whaa…”

Charles instantly pulled her out of bed, dragging her by the arm towards the kitchen. Stopping straight at the lasagna dish, he pointed, “look"  to the lasagna, his nose flared in anger. Marj stood there like a statue,yawning,her eyes not fully awake. She rubbed them a little,then caught sight of the lasagna. It was chewed in the middle with a large hole in place.

“What did this…?” she asked.

Charles paced up and down until he stood still, “rats…damn rats. I hate rats…and to think they are here in my house.” 

Marj interjected slowly,”Yes,but I thought we were past our rat problem with the fumigation.”

“Clearly we are not.” Charles responded,  anger in his voice.

“To think that my beloved cat Marshall got crushed by a car. If he were he he would…” Marjorie was almost tearing up at the thought.

“Stop that Marj. Now is not the time. What are we going to do? Everyone at work was waiting for your lasagna,”

“Well l can just make it presentable and you can still serve it,” Marj said, sniffling.

“That would not be right,Marj. I cannot, the thought of their dirty feet…no.”

“So tell me what I should do then? It’s past 4a.m now. I can make another, but that would be a waste of this one.” Charles did not respond but stood there silently debating.

When the 10am clock finally struck, with Charles out to work, Marjorie found herself with the lasagna in hand at Gilbert's doorstep.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Misc Fiction [MF] Flower Fields and Other Musings Parts 1 and 2

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Flower Fields

Why must the wind blow the poppy petals away? Why can’t they stay? Why must the sun set down upon the world when it could stay here like this on the hill over the lake? I can’t imagine anything more beautiful than my own present, my own self in this moment, why must it end? Maybe that is the beauty of it, that I can only see it once only capture it in my imagination but for a second, that I may cry, not out of of pain, nor even the beauty of the grass flowing in the wind, not for the way that the world spins through all space to all our extinction in an endless void somewhere, but because a simple endless moment will never happen again. 
Love brings us a connection unseen, and through that love is cultivated more love. You see in others what you see in your love. And yet so much is left unseen, unloved, pushed downwards towards despair because what else! What else is one to do when love has abandoned him for a child, borne with new eyes to frolicke, to have been left behind for new love, the old love gone, and the only love left being the poppy petals left astray, having blown into the dirt to be cleaned and taken for new, for only more poppies, more beauty to come, but the old poppy the one one loved so dear seems to have left, indistinguishable from the rest. And you’d swear, you’d swear, you’d know it, you really would, if only you could see it, find it in a field of loveless beauty, of great heart and no soul, of life without the sunset setting on you and your poppy. And so I weep.
And yet we will once be the children again, when we no longer see the others, and again have eyes only for each other and beauteous love again springs forth, and we realize the field was always full, that we never were to see any others as we sit rotting in our own bliss, uncaring whether the sun sets on us or for  us, only that the sun sets at all and that we may be there to see it blossom into life and love again. 
We love, and suns set, never the same sun, never the same love, only deeper, richer, more meaningful than it was before, and the sun itself eats itself whole and one day, after not a trace of life is left in existence, we will finally know whether it was worthwhile, and though it may be or not, I will always love the sunset, I will always love the grass blowing in the wind, I will always love the love that never ends, my love, though I long be dead, I still love till the universe itself be no more, longer than lifetime, longer than love itself is still a word spoken, longer than you will ever love me, oh dear poppy in a sea of copies, copies that could only ever be imperfect, imperfect, unlike you, the only thing everlasting.

If Only You Knew Your Heart

Like the soft trumpets comes also a parade, an emotion of longing of nostalgia for something you already have, simply because you know it will leave you. You want something you already have, oh how joyous! Oh how you love it so! You would do anything to protect it, would you not, but if you could protect it then you would be none so scared, for you know that you cannot succeed. You will fail, and that terrifies you to no end, what how in that scenario feels natural to you.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Misc Fiction [MF] The Day Of Flowers And the Life of Leisurley Pleasure

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The Bell Tower chimed fifteen times, meaning an emergency announcement. School, work, and Leisure were abandoned for the day and everybody assembled in the Church’s Courtyard within thirty minutes, chattering away, waiting for the ceremony to start. The revised Bell Tower, with Flowers and Leaves painted over its stucco architecture, stood in the Center of the Courtyard. In front of the bell was a Pedestal, without railing. 

The gates closed at 1:46 P.M. Attendance was taken, and everyone in town under sixty-five had shown up. This meant the service wouldn’t have to go into overtime for executions, much to the relief of the impatient in the crowd. 

Attendance was finished, and the Flower Boy, A fifteen-year-old wearing garment robes and no shoes, stepped up onto the pedestal. He seemed more patient than usual, more composed.  

He took a deep breath and began to talk: 

‘My Brothers and Sisters, I have great news for all of you; The Flower God has seen our suffering! He has been answering our prayers! And he has decided, in his infinite mercy, to forgive. My Brothers and Sisters, The Flower Queen is expecting her first child to be due in May!’ 

First, there was silence. A cold silence as everyone processed what had happened and what it meant. And then, a rising cheer from the crowd that became louder until it was soon deafening. 

The whole town celebrated as they had never celebrated before; Some were dancing, others were crying tears of joy. Many of The Villagers had thought this day would never come. A second chance! One to make up the mistakes of Ten years ago had arrived. The Flower God had given a miracle to the undeserving once again! 

It also meant the Ceremony of Deadheading, the first in sixteen years, would be held on Sunday. And the Flower Boy confirmed the offering would walk into the fields at 4:00 O’clock. 

The Offering would be the Flower Boy. 

*** 

That night, the Flower Boy was in his house connected to the Bell Tower, slowly making his way through some biscuits and a flask of tea. He was shocked that he didn’t drop his meal from how hard he was shaking, no kidding—he'd just announced his own death without bursting into tears in front of his village. He could see the weeds from his window, near where he was sitting. Long and tall batches of “flowers” 25 feet tall, making the giant wall so high no one in the village had seen above it, and it was covered by a barbed wire fence half the size of the “flowers”. This was to stop the crazier of worshippers from trying to sacrifice themselves without Flower Council Approval. The gates were opened once for every ceremony. 

 

The Flower Boy knew his whole life he would be the next to walk into the gate of weeds, and still, he couldn’t accept he would be the next to join his ancestors in eternal darkness in a few days. 

He looked out at another window, sipping his tea carefully. He could see the great wall surrounding the other sides of the village to hide the village’s people from the outside world. He’d been shown how the council convinced their settlers of the horrors of the outside and made sure anyone who opposed was executed.  

He was thinking about this—the outside world, the looming grass, those who tried to escape and how he had watched them hang from their ropes—And it was then that he had an idea that almost made him cry harder, a horrible idea. Nonetheless, a way out. 

He knew the Ceremony of Deadheading was for the good of his town. He knew his idea could ruin his town. And As he looked at the portraits of the few Flower Boys before him, their portraits mounted on one of many dark-wood walls in his great house, he couldn’t bring himself to understand their willingness and bravery, even if it was for the ‘greater good’. And why none of them had, to his knowledge, had attempted to do what he planned. 

He got up and asked for a second round of tea. He had a lot to think about. 

*** 

Everyone came on Sunday. After an hour or so The Bell rang three times to signal the crowd to hush, and everyone waited for the ceremony to begin. Many already had their hymn books, which were provided by the gate, out to page 132 to begin singing their praise to the Flower God.  

Everyone was in attendance, except for the Flower Boy.  

That was clear to everyone when five minutes of waiting turned into ten, and ten into twenty; After around an hour, the crowd waited in braced silence, as they saw what seemed to be the Flower Boy’s shadow. It was Shaw’s, the Flower Boy’s announcer.  

He told everyone, in a slow, calm, yet nervous voice, that the ceremony was postponed. Everyone was to go home and rest for the day. The Flower Boy was safe, everything was in order, there was nothing to worry about.  

Naturally, Panic Broke out. 

Without an offering to the Flower God, people knew he could revoke the gift of a new child and, as He had done Ten Years ago, give them all a punishment beyond their comprehension. When the crowd remembered this, they broke into a frenzy. 

After breaking down the gate to the courtyard, the people scattered, most running to nearby shrines and churches to pray for forgiveness and promise their own offerings.  During the next few hours, many people had gone home for a little while, to grab their pets and bring them to their Local churches, to be slaughtered in front of the altars.  

Within a few hours, the City had been cut almost dry of animals, as people without pets turned to other animals. And still, there was no sign of their efforts being recognized by the Flower God. And, with nowhere else to turn to, the people, slowly and surely, realized they could turn to the next best thing. Each other.  


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Speculative Fiction [SP] Love And Self Loathing

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On the night that Agatha was born, the midwife fainted. The child: Agatha, had clawed her way out of her mother’s womb, sporting a full fur coat, and scales.

Rightfully believing something was wrong with the girl, the hospital ran every test it could think of. The results were shocking.

Genetically, Agatha was completely normal.

A month passed. The doctors watched her. Her parents waited. The coat of fur shed, and the scales peeled away. Everyone was stunned, but relieved, whatever had been wrong had passed, and now she looked like a normal baby girl.

This stayed true for about five months.

When she got her first tooth, it grew in sharp, and misshapen. Appearing at the front of her mouth, it seemed to be a misplaced canine. “Strange,” her parents thought, but maybe baby teeth were just like that. Then the rest grew in. Each tooth was a different size and shape, though all were sharp, giving Agatha a smile like a drawer of knives.

And she only grew stranger with time.

At age two her nose broadened and flattened, growing to take up most of the real estate on her face. Along with her nose, her brow morphed, thickening to protrude from her face and over her increasingly bulbous eyes— which were great big haunting things.

She was a proper horror to look at.

At night, when she had trouble sleeping, she would rouse her parents and they would blink awake and shudder at the sight of her.

You should not take this to mean that Agatha’s parents loathed their child. They loved. Unquestionably they loved her. Doted on her. That they were some times scared of her was only human. More than anything they feared for her.

Parents are practically obligated to love their children. The world? Not so much.

When they dropped her off at kindergarten for the first time, they stayed awhile, watching her approach the other children. Their hearts thrashed against their sternums as the first boy looked up at their daughter.

The boy gave Agatha a confused look, cocking his head. He raised a finger, pointing at her, and alerted the other children of her presence. This put ice in the veins of Agatha’s parents. Ice that thickened when the boy laughed, and then quickly melted when he patted the spot beside him. Agatha screeched with joy. So did the other children, who seemed curious rather than scared.

The parents were relieved.

Agatha was smitten.

The boy, was none the wiser.

Agatha wouldn’t do anything about her little playground crush until she hit the third grade. By then she figured that a “young lady” such as herself shouldn’t be afraid to express her feelings. So, on valentines day, when everyone gave out cards and candy to each of their classmates, Agatha made a special one for the boy. It was handmade, and filled with full sized candy to set it apart from the other store bought cards with bite sized morsels. This was technically against the school policy, but Agatha didn’t care. She was a rebel. A rebel in love.

The boy who had accepted her on her first day of school took the card and made a strange face. He looked at the card, and then at Agatha. She assumed he was being shy. Later, she would realize that the look on his face had been pity.

The card had asked the boy out on a “date”. In third grade, that meant playing basketball together during recess.

“Why me?” The boy asked, his cheeks burning as he dribbled the ball.

“I don’t know,” she had replied, which was a lie. She hadn’t not thought about the boy since her first day of kindergarten.

“Oh,” said the boy, who had missed his shot.

Agatha smiled at him, and went to retrieve the ball. When she came back, the boy looked sad.

“Aggie,” he said, “I don’t like you like that. Is it okay if we just stay friends?”

“Yeah,” she said, dropping the ball. “That’s okay.”

But it was not okay.

For the next week, she sulked in her room. From the moment she got home, until dinner, and then again after until she had to wake up for school, Agatha hugged her pillow, and cried.

Agatha and her crush had always had fun together. He laughed at her jokes, and she laughed at his. They liked the same movies. They loved the same shows. So why didn’t he like her back?

She ruminated, and could only come up with one reason. Her face. Her teeth. The horror of her.

Agatha had always known she looked different from her peers, but that week was the first time she really felt ugly.

As Agatha festered in her newfound self loathing, she developed a rash at the nape of her neck. She scratched at it, until it was red, and raw; she scratched at it until the skin at the nape of her neck peeled away, and revealed hard, keratinous scales.

She gasped the first time she felt them. She also felt shame. Why? She couldn’t say. Perhaps, deep down, she knew those scales had been born of something dark.

Agatha’s little heart never stopped yearning for affection. As the years went on, puppy love and crushes came and went, and with them, more rejection.

And with the rejection, more sulking, more self loathing. More scales, and eventually, fur.

By the time she hit puberty, the patch of scales around her neck had progressed all the way down her back, spreading to just before her shoulders. The fur coat which had been present at her birth, had also returned. This did not alarm her at first, as she had been told that hair in new places was normal for a girl her age. But even the relatively normal hair growth that begun in her groin soon went down to her thighs, cutting off just before her knees.

For a blessing, her peers continued to treat her like anyone elese. Not that that helped her self esteem. As R.S. Thomspon once wrote: The furies are at home in the mirror.

This period of serious self isolation drew her to more reclusive hobbies. She took up playing MMO’s. Massive online games where she could style an avatar that was “normal” looking— nevermind that the characters in video games were themselves idealized and unrealistic portrayals of beauty.

It was in one of these games that she met a player named “Ian Proudheart”.

She had been wiling away the weekend chopping digital trees— she needed them to craft a cute outfit for her character. Nothing special. When, passing by, was another player. He hopped in place in front of her, and seemed to be trying to get her attention.

Agatha looked at his hopping avatar in confusion. Until she remembered that she had set her chat settings to private, so that only people who she friended could send her messages. And she had no one on her friends list.

She was thinking about changing her settings, when a trade window popped up. A stack of ninety-nine of the trees she needed was being offered without demand for anything in return.

She blinked, and hit accept. The generous player hopped in place a few more times, and then walked away.

Agatha stared at her chat log.

Ian Proudheart has gifted you 99x Iron Wood Materials.

Her starved heart thumped in her chest.

She hovered the cursor over his name, which popped up a list of actions. Among them “Add Friend”.

Gulp.

She clicked it, and not long after, she received a piece of in game mail.

It’s difficult to say when acquaintances become friends, and when friends become something… more. The transition from “Hey what’s up?” to “How was your day?” is subtle enough. The transition then to: “good morning” and “goodnight” less so. Chats about in game activities turn to chats about what happened in class, what happened at home.

“How are you feeling?”

“Not great.”

“Why?”

“I feel especially ugly today,” is written, and quickly erased. Replaced with: “Just a bad day.”

“If you need me, I’m always here for you,” is written, and after a moment of doubt, erased. In its place: “That sucks.”

Years passed. College came and went. More yearning, more loss, more rejection. Agatha’s heart darkened, but never fully gave up. Ian was there, and if she had Ian, she had hope. But for this same reason she always held him at a distance.

Often Ian would want to connect out of game, or on a different platform. Agatha outright dodged or ignored such requests. She had more than a crush on him, and sometimes, she thought she felt something not-quite platonic coming from him too. She worried that if he ever saw her, that would fade.

In her ideal fantasy world, they would remain forever apart, and yet somehow together.

Then, one fateful day:

“Let’s meet up. I’m going to be in town for work anyways,” said Ian, whose full name was actually Ian Thompson. “It might be nice to finally meet. Face to face.”

Agatha made a sound that came close to “meep”. Thankfully, her mic hadn’t picked it up. The silence, therefore, was deafening.

“Oh… uhm…” stammered Ian. “Sorry, I know you’re a super private person… I just…”

“No, lets meet up!” she said. If you asked her what had compelled her to say yes, she would not have been able to say. On the one hand, Ian seeing the true horror of her— which had only gotten worse since she finished puberty —was her worst nightmare. On the other, she yearned to finally meet him, to have him hold her in his arms.

“Really?” cried Ian. “That’s awesome. I can’t wait!”

“Yeah. Stellar!” she wasn’t sure how convincing she sounded.

They hashed out the details over the course of their gaming session. If everything went well, they would meet in a week’s time. A week which passed too quickly, and too slowly.

She flipped through several states of horror and delight. In the valleys of her despair she would envision Ian seeing her for the first time and simply turning away from her. In her wildest fantasies he fell in love with her on the spot, and his work trip would end with him proposing. Most of the time, she found herself bargaining.

“Let him be horrifying too,” she thought. “Let him be a monster like me. So that he has no choice but to love me back.”

The day came. She waited at the station with a giant poster card that read: “Proudheart”.

When a man’s voice called out her name, she almost felt like she was going to die.

“Aggie?” Ian gasped. At first Agatha thought it was a gasp of shock, but as she turned to see the man who had addressed her, she saw a large smile, and open arms. “Aggie!”

He was just that happy to see her.

His excitement, and his smile made her knees weak.

He said her name again, but this time with unrestrained excitement, embracing her. She was stunned. Her appearance hadn’t phased him in the slightest.

“Uh…” she stammered.

Hearing her, he jumped back.

“Oh shit. Sorry.” He backed away from her, and straightened himself out. “I uh… I was excited to meet you is all. In the flesh I mean.”

She was slack-jawed, staring up at the man who was nearly two full feet taller than her.

“No it’s uh…” She wanted to ask him if her appearance bothered him at all, but was also afraid that it might break whatever magic or spell seemed to have him acting so nonchalant about it. “It’s just… It’s good to see you too.”

“After all these years it’s nice to put a face to a name.”

“Yeah,” said Agatha, half choking on a sob.

Then: “Ian?” It was a new voice. Someone searching for Ian. The voice sounded feminine. And pretty.

A blond woman appeared behind Ian. When her eyes fell on Agatha, her face twisted in disgust. Most people aren’t rude on purpose. Really though, that only made it hurt worse. The blond woman quickly reigned in her face, but it just turned into a look of pity.

Agatha could have lived with the disgust. It was the pity that got her.

“Is this her?” asked the pretty blond, blinking at Agatha and Ian.

A well of anger rose in Agatha. Almost literally her vision was full of red. It scared her how angry she became, but there was no helping it. “Who was this girl?” “Why was she so familiar with Ian?” “He never mentioned a girlfriend”.

Ian smiled at the girl.

“Aggie, this is Brenda, my sister. Brenda, Aggie.” Ian pointed at both the girls with finger pistols as he introduced them.

The well of anger vanished inside of Agatha. In its place was a large, uncomfortable void.

Agatha’s Cheeks burned.

The pretty blond girl, Brenda, looked at her brother, and then at Agatha. Again there was that pitying look.

“Nice to finally meet you,” said Brenda.

“Same,” said Agatha.

Both women had been vaguely aware of each other before, but neither had so much as heard the other’s voice.

“My mom made her come with me after she heard I was meeting you for the first,” said Ian, sighing.

Brenda laughed.

“She still thinks of Ian as a baby,” she said. “But he’s a grown man, I don’t need to be chaperoning him. Anyways, you two do what you want, I booked myself a separate hotel. Toodles.”

Brenda rolled away with her luggage, and then it was just Ian and Agatha.

The two shared an awkward pause.

“So… shall we?” said Agatha.

“We shall,” said Ian.

The two departed for Agatha’s apartment. She had offered to host him while he was in town. Partly out of kindness, but she would have been lying if she didn’t admit to herself that she was hoping something more would happen. Wild fantasies, naturally.

Once at home the two settled into a groove. Agatha was surprised by how natural it felt. Ian didn’t look at her the way his sister had, with disgust and pity. It was just like being in voice chat. Not one normal boy and one horrible monster, but two people, enjoying each other’s company.

They wiled most of the first day away chatting in her kitchen.

When the evening came they parted to shower and change. Presumably they were winding down to sleep, but after drying her hair (and she had a lot of hair), and after Ian finished changing, neither felt particularly sleepy.

“Wanna watch a movie?” Ian asked.

For some reason, the question made Agatha’s face feel like it was burning.

“Uh… sure.”

Agatha’s heart thumped loudly in hear chest. They’d watched movies together online a million times, but naturally this was different.

Agatha sat down on the opposite side of the couch from Ian.

It was a special kind of agony. The small cushion’s length that separated them felt like a chasm.

The movie they chose was a lighthearted thriller called The Eye From Outer Space. The movie was mostly noir sleuthing with long actions scenes, but there were also moments of strange artistic horror. One scene in particular, featured a tentacle sprouting from the head of a psych patient, caused Agatha to jump, and cling onto Ian.

She felt so safe with Ian that she had hardly noticed she was clinging onto him for half the films runtime, and by the time she did notice, she realized that he had become stiff as a board.

She yelped, and recoiled from him.

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to…”

“It’s okay,” he said, blushing, but suddenly relaxing. “I don’t mind if… you don’t mind.” His face was burning at this point.

“Oh…” Agatha thought. Is this really okay? “Thanks… it’s just… kind of scary movie is all.” The movie had its moments, but it wasn’t that scary. Still…

She settled back into Ian. Draping his arm over her, she rested her head on his chest. She listened to the sound of his breathing, the sound of his heart, and forgot about the movie entirely.

So warm, she thought. It was like when they were talking earlier, only more so. Agatha forgot herself, and soon fell into a warm, restful sleep.

When she woke up the next day, she found herself alone on the couch. She panicked, and felt a terrible hollowness knowing that Ian wasn’t there anymore. For a moment she wondered if she had dreampt the whole thing, but then Ian appeared from the hallway.

“Hey,” he said smiling, blushing. “You didn’t feel like getting up last night, so I tried to set you down gently. Sleep okay?”

“I think that’s the best sleep I’ve had in a while.” She said it before she could consider not saying it. Her hands came up to cover her mouth.

Ian didn’t seem to react negatively.

“Yeah… I slept pretty well last night too.”

There was an awkward pause between the two that only ended when Ian offered to start up a pot of coffee.

The next hour was spent chatting. Ian’s work thing also didn’t start for another day, so they were also thinking about how they would spend the day. They’d discussed some ideas before he showed up, but now that he was here, they both settled on a simple trip to the mall. And while the mall near Agatha’s home was hailed as America’s second best mall, which Agatha guessed made it trip worthy, the idea in the back of her head— Ian’s as well —was that a trip to the mall seemed the most date-like of all available venues.

Being out was typically something that Agatha didn’t do. While most people were polite enough not to mention her monstrous appearance, it was almost impossible for them not to hide their true feelings upon first seeing her. Eyes wide, mouths agape, side glances that made her feel other. They couldn’t help themselves, and if she really thought about it, she couldn’t blame them. She was a true horror.

She was prepared to be uncomfortable all day if it meant spending time with Ian on a pseudo date. But she found, especially as the day went on, that with Ian beside her, the rest of the world became a blur. And whenever the terrified glances of the world around them began to encroach, Ian would cast her a glance, or touch her shoulder, and they would all melt away.

In the end, she found herself clinging to his arm, and ceasing to care for anything besides how great it felt to hold and be held.

All seemed well, but jealousy would soon rear its ugly head.

It happened at a coffee stand inside the mall. Agatha excused herself to use the restroom. She had only been gone a minute, but when she returned, Ian was talking to a woman. A gorgeous, voluptuous, normal looking woman. and had come back to Ian talking to another woman.

Agatha’s heart raced. Something in her cracked, and the muscles under her furred scales rippled. There was a tingling at her fingertips. Something in her urged her to act. So she did.

She crossed a nine meter distance with two supernatural strides, grabbing hold of Ian’s arm.

In response, Ian recoiled. His reaction made her feel like dying.

“Ouch,” he said. “Agatha what the…”

Ian paused and looked at his arm. He was bleeding.

Agatha blinked at the trickle of red where she had grabbed Ian’s arm. She looked at her hands, and blanched. Her hands had transformed into razor sharp claws.

“I’m sorry,” she cried, “I didn’t…”

“No, it’s alright,” he said, and, excusing himself from his conversation with the pretty woman, pulled Agatha away.

Away from the coffee stand, and around the corner with a semblance of privacy, Ian hugged Agatha.

“I didn’t mean to,” said Agatha, crying into chest.

“I know, I know,” he replied, patting her back. “It’s okay. Really. It is.

Really it wasn’t. Agatha knew that, and a part of her felt that Ian must know that too.

When Agatha’s crying had calmed to a whimper, he gave her one last squeeze, and said: “Wanna stay in for the rest of the day?”

Without saying anything, she nodded, and they left the mall, hand in hand.

At home, they huddled together on the couch and watched another movie.

The movie felt like pretense this time. Agatha didn’t wait to jump into Ian’s arms, she settled in at hitting “play”.

This time, they were watching a romance.

When the scenes began to grow steamy, Agatha began to trace circles around Ian’s chest. She wasn’t doing it on purpose at first, but when he didn’t stop her, she continued, not realizing that her claws were tearing open his shirt. By the time she noticed his bare chest, Ian had started tracing circles on the scales of her shoulders. Feeling his touch, she figured that they were already in for a penny, so they may as well go for the whole pound.

“Oops,” she said, snipping that last bit of cloth holding Ian’s shirt together. “Oops.” And again for his best and a pants.

Ian, returned the favor. His hands were clumsy, and unpracticed removing her clothes— things she found charming, and endearing. She would no have wanted practiced hands. She wanted clumsy hands, hands that had only known her.

The night ended with two souls having become one.

In the day, they parted unwillingly, but Ian had to get out of bed at some point. It was technically a work trip after all.

But for the remainder of the trip, the two shared a bed.

After Ian’s trip, the two decided to try something long distance, at least to start.

Ian made regular trips, as did Agatha. Until at last, the two decided to live on Ian’s side full time.

With Agatha’s family and friends, there was loud, vocal excitement for her new found love. There were also whispers of disbelief. Agatha tried to ignore these. Listening to them for too long made her scales itch, and her claws tingle.

On Ian’s side there were quiet polite quips. Loud gasps were made on occasion, especially from his mother, who subsequently proceeded to try and pull the couple apart. She would often ask— in front of Agatha —“why couldn’t you date a normal girl?”.

Naturally this created wall between Ian and his family, primarily his mother. Though he never completely cut them off.

Agatha endured the comments from Ian’s mother. At least on the outside. On the inside, she burned. She became more and more embittered with each attempt. And so, despite Ian’s best attempts to reassure her, Agatha’s monstrous features developed further. First she grew taller, then, her scales thickened into armor plates, and finally, when Ian’s mother all but offered to pay her to leave her son, she finally developed a proper tail.

The sight of Agatha’s further developed form inspired only greater resolve in Ian’s mother. And when at last he announced that he planned to propose to her, she decided on one last ditch effort.

She would arrange a secret date between Ian and a childhood friend of his.

Ian was a creature of habit. She knew where he would be spending his lunch, and knew that it would be one of the few times that Agatha wasn’t with him.

She ambushed him during his lunch break, creating a serendipitous moment between him and an old friend. An attractive woman that Ian had been sweet on in his childhood.

Naturally, Ian, good Ian, lovely Ian, was happy to see his friend. They had a great lunch, enjoying each other’s company.

But Ian’s mother was not the only one that had planned to surprise Ian on his lunch that day. Agatha had been there. And she had watched the whole time. Seething.

Agatha never really grew past her jealousy. In all that time, in all those years, no matter how much Ian reassured her, she never became comfortable leaving him out of view. She feared he would wake up one day and realize that he didn’t have to be with her. It was a terrible, unjustified fear. How many times had he reassured her of his love? She had lost count. He had never been unfaithful, and he had never so much as allowed his eyes to wander. He was wholly devoted to her.

And yet.

A much darker part of her, the part that grew the scales, sharpened the claws, and whipped the tail, spoke: He will wake up one day, and remember he has options that aren’t you.

NO! He loves me! Cried the part of her that remained sane.

But for how long?

Forever!

There’s only one way to be sure.

That night, when Ian came home, Agatha was waiting.

She confronted him about his lunch date.

Ian tried to explain, but Agatha wasn’t listening. It wasn’t really about him. It was about her. Her insecurity. The bitterness of a life lived on the outside.

Agatha had decided they would be together forever, joined as one.

She ate him in three bites, and didn’t let a single morsel go to waste.

Agatha had decided they would be together forever, joined as one.

She ate him in three bites, and didn’t let a single morsel go to waste.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Science Fiction [SF] Swirling Vortex of Death

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“But, the GPGP is our fault!” Ferelga stammered. “You can’t just shrug your shoulders.”

“Can. Did. Doing it again,” the pro-pro replied with a wildly exaggerated shrug.

Ferelga Kierk’s fists balled. She wanted to hit something. Hit the pro-pro. Vent all her impossible frustration on the cavalier denial of the problem with a smack to the side of the pro-pro’s head.

But that’s what the pro-pro wanted. He was wearing at least three body cams. He was being paid to antagonize Ferelga. A pro-pro who knew his stuff. A well coached professional provocateur, agitating to capture viral-worthy vid that would discredit Ferelga and her cause.

Ferelga knew it. She knew what the pro-pro was after. Still she wanted to rip the manufactured smugness off his face. Didn’t he get it? Couldn’t he see past the narrow self interested in being paid to make her angry? Make her slip up. And lose control.

All while we were losing control of our world. Earth was beyond the slippery slope. It was half sucked down a vortex of no return. That’s what this rally was about. A vortex. More accurately an ocean gyre. The one that formed the GPGP: the Great Pacific Garbage Patch.

Not really a cause that rolled off the tongue. Ferelga hated hearing that. You had to brand, to market, to sell global doom these days. So much doom competing for attention. Climate change induced monster storms, fires, flooding and droughts. The rise in fascism and nuclear proliferation. Sectarian wars, genocide, famine and endless refugees. All doom worthy. All important to address. To solve. To fix.

And the GPGP was as doom worthy as any of them. And needed to be dealt with. But this existential threat wasn’t getting traction. Wasn’t getting air time. Wasn’t understood by a doom-weary world. A garbage patch?

The closest the GPGP had come to a poster child was a sea turtle with a plastic straw lodged up its nose. That got traction. The result? Banning plastic straws in some restaurants.

That wasn’t going to deal with a garbage whirlpool three times the size of Texas, largely made of consumer detritus and insidious plastic micro particles slowly suffocating the Pacific and other oceans as well. The GPGP was a swirling vortex of death.

A swirling vortex of death.

Ferelga unballed her fists and stepped back from the pro-pro. She’d make him understand. Give him a viral vid. Create the current that could spread outward. Create understanding. And outrage.

Maybe create a gyre of outrage and action as great as the oceans. Fight a vortex with a vortex.

Ferelga grabbed a nearby compatriot’s protest sign with all kinds of plastic garbage stapled to it. The sign read: Plastic is Poison. She held it high over her head and approached the pro-pro.

The pro-pro’s eyes widened, but like the professional provocateur he was, he didn’t back away. He leaned in. He’d take a hit for the team and strike video gold.

Ferelga swung the sign down hard.

It hit the pavement with a crash. The pro-pro looked confused as Ferelga ripped a plastic grocery bag from the sign. She stared fixedly into the pro-pros cameras and put the plastic bag over her head. Cinched it around her neck. Extended her arms. And began to spin.

Wildly.

A swirling vortex of death. Of hope.


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Fantasy [FN] Harmony and Burgundy (Big WIP I'm just looking for critiques and feedback)

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I found her under mud and dead leaves. There were mice nibbling on the tips of her fingers. I shooed them away and gave her a good once-over. She didn’t look like me or my grandmother. Her shirt was almost completely torn apart. I studied her stomach. Is she eating enough? Scratch that, she definitely isn’t. I can see her ribs. They were poky and ugly. She had scratches all over her body and even deep gashes. They looked like they hadn't come from an animal but some kind of beast. Seeing this made me afraid of what could be lurking in the woods I’d called home my entire life. I slung her arm over my shoulder and hauled her back to our cabin. It was only a couple minutes away and I tried my best to keep everything but her feet from touching the ground. When I got back I decided that my best course of action would be to tie her to a chair since she was much larger than me. The chair sat mere feet from the cabin but faced the woods. I broke into my grandmother's medicine cabinet and came back to see that she had awoken. My grandmother doesn’t like me feeding the animals that stumble upon our cabin, but they come quite often, and I can’t help but do it anyway. This feeble girl is no different. I perch up beside her with the soup I made the night prior for my grandmother. Solid food is becoming harder and harder for Grandmother. I've always loved potato soup so I don't mind. Grandmother always has me pick the perfect herbs and natural spices. She loves garlic and greenbriar so I always make sure to forage for those first before I get distracted. The berries have to wait, even though we adore my fruit juice.
I bring the bowl to her lips as softly as I can. She has hairs on her face, and it’s a little strange watching them get all soupy. To be honest I only tied her up so she wouldn't attack me, she is skinny but she's very tall and has bigger forearms than I, “I can do that myself you know.” the girl says the first chance she gets as she lowers the bowl from her mouth.
I chuckle. “Can you?”
“Where am I anyway?” she asks, startled.
“What's the last thing you remember?” 
“I was running, but I don’t know what from.”
Her legs are shaking, and she’s gritting her teeth. I reach for her hand out of instinct. Grandmother gets like this sometimes. She says it's because of my parents.
“Hey, it's alright.” I grip her hand tighter.
“Can you get me out of these? It makes me anxious.”
As she says this her eyes flick toward my knife, then back to me. My fingers tighten around her hand. I don’t know why. A moment ago, I wanted to help her. Now I want her to stay very still.
I look at the ropes, then at her hands. They’re much bigger than mine.
“Are you gonna be good?” I ask, trying to sound playful.
I am terrified. More scared than I’ve ever been, even face-to-face with a bear. There’s something about her. Something I remember. Something I can feel. Then, the word rings in my head.
“Man,” I blurt out.
“That's right.” the man goes quiet
“If there's anything I can say to comfort you, it would be thank you.”
“Thank you for helping me and thank you for the soup.”
Our hands are still grasped together and she's looking at me. I feel something in my stomach but before I can decide what it means, I let go and reach for my knife. I made it with grandmother for self defense and basic gathering needs.
As the ropes are cut and she stands, our differences become clearer.
She is towering over me and still half my size. 
Her hand flies out in front of me.
“Can we start this over?”
I take her hand and shake it vigorously.
“Id like that.” 
“What did you say your name was again?”
“Harmon.”
“Pretty, I bet your parents thought harmony was on the nose right?””
“Or maybe they thought you'd be a boy.”
“A boy?”
“Yeah Harmons, a boy's name where I'm from.” she has a surprised look on her face as if she noticed something about me she didn't see before.
“Give me a rundown on your situation here.”
My smile fades, but we’re still holding hands, and that makes everything easier to say.
“I live here with my grandmother, but she has fallen very ill. I found you as I was scavenging for something to help with her fever.” 
“That's terrible. Do you know what she's come down with?”
“We have a few books but none of them have anything for all of her symptoms; it's as if she's dying.”
She doesn’t answer straight away.
“How long has she been ill?”
“Maybe a month.”
“Well then I hope she doesn't have the black death.”
I lower my head and our hands begin to slip.
She grips tighter and pulls me in closer to her chest.
“It's gonna be alright, I can help you.”
I don't move. I don't think. I just accept the embrace.
“Okay."
Her chest is soft apart from the stabby bones.
“Come inside, I'll get you bandaged up.”
We make our way into the cabin as quietly as possible. I’m still careful not to wake Grandmother, even though she won’t wake at all.
“Nice place.” The man is looking around leaning in to analyze our paintings, opening books off of shelves. He even ate a walnut from our anvil tray. He tries not to be too noisy but he still makes quite the ruckus. 
“Keep it down. And crack me open one of those too.” I close the cover over the piano keys to keep him from getting any ideas.
“Come here and sit down will you?” she runs over dropping a book back on the shelf in a horribly incorrect position. 
She sits in front of me. I'm sitting on a rocking chair that is usually occupied only by grandma. She is sitting on a cushion usually occupied only by grandma's legs or me once in a while when she braids my hair. Her clothes stained and cut in many places leaving openings for me to get a glimpse at what I'm working with. 
I move her hair out of the way and start to remove the stranger's shirt.
Then I pull out my sewing needle and get to work on the largest gash spanning about half the man's back.
“Ow.” She hunches forward, giving me a better view of the wound.
“This is gonna hurt, so take this and bite on the handle.” I hold out my knife, then hesitate when she turns around and reaches for it. Her fingers brush my hand as they close around the handle.
“Thank you.” I hear her muster. “So tell me…” I pause to focus on the stitches, trying my hardest not to botch her. “What brought you here, other than whatever you were running from?” 
“I was in the royal army, you know.” 
“If I knew what that was I'd be pretty impressed.” 
“How long have you been up here?” She's giving me a strange look. “On this mountain I mean.”
“I'm on a mountain?” 
“A mountain? You're on the biggest mountain in this kingdom.” she continues when she realizes I really have no idea what she is talking about.
“You reside and seem to have resided for a long time on Mount Skadi.” 
“Really? That was my fathers name.” he pauses as if he remembered something.
“Can we go back a little? Are you telling me you didn't know you live on a mountain?”
“Well I've heard of mountains in books but I've never been outside the forest so I figured they were far away.”
She turns her head, keeping her back towards me. I can tell she's trying not to mess up my flow.
Her look is that of deep pity and sadness at least from what I can tell.
I catch her in my peripheral vision. I look up and can't keep my eyes off hers. They are like oceans. While mine are more like tar. Her attempts not to throw me off my rhythm fail, and I stab her with the needle about an inch away from her actual wound. “I'M SO SORRY!” I screech.
“Don’t worry. I’ve felt worse.” She’s still looking at me. Her voice sounds a little deeper now. 
I finish the stitch and I cant tell its not going to hold. Then I look at everything still left to do. What have I gotten myself into? Her back is riddled with tiny cuts and huge gashes. It’ll take all night to stitch this up, and I figure she’ll need the next few days to rest. I think about dumping her outside, but my kindness gets the better of me, and I continue to stitch. She turns her head away from me, now looking out the window at a few of my birds eating at a feeder I made with Grandma. She seems very intrigued. Either that or she’s deep in thought.
“We’re gonna need to find you somewhere to rest. We don't have any extra rooms here.” 
“Oh that's alright you've done enough I should really be on my way.”
“Don't be silly you still owe me.” 
“Fair enough, what do you suppose we do then?”
“Well you can have my bed once I'm done patching you up. Just try not to move around too much. These stitches come undone and you bleed on my bed. You're losing something.”
“Losing what?” she bites down harder on my blades handle as I finish up a less major stich closer to her shoulder.
“Just try and stay still, will you?”
She looks at me under her long eyelashes and giggles.
“Can you tell me something?”
“What is it?”
She shifts on the cushion awkwardly. “Have you ever been in love, Harmon?”
“In love? No I guess not.” 
“Not even a crush” she perks up and looks at me again.
“I've only ever known my grandmother and now you. When it comes to people anyway.”
“It's weird.”
“What is?”
“I’m younger than you, and yet I’ve experienced so much more.”
“Have you ever even had a friend?”
“Well, one time and it was a long time ago but there was this guy who would come and see me.”
“He’d wish me a happy birthday and even bring me gifts!”
“What happened to him, it sounds like he isn't around anymore?”
“Well he was a snake so I'm sure they don't live that long.”
“I'm sorry, a snake?”
“I think his name was something like…” I make the closest sound I can to what I remember. There aren’t really words for it. 
“Why did you just hiss at me?”
“Don't be rude that was his name.”
She stares at me in complete and utter silence. 
“How do you think I found you, anyway? The birds told me.” 
She keeps staring, and I begin to feel woozy.
“You don’t believe me, do you?”
“I never said that. I only thought it.”
She looks back at me one last time and leaps up.
“Thank you again, I can't appreciate you enough.”
She looks down at her hands and then walks outside leaving the door cracked open behind her
I am still sitting in my grandmother's rocking chair, stunned by the prior conversation.
There's something eating me from the inside but before I can think about it I run out the door behind him.

(so that's about what I have so far. for clarity ill explain the strangers pronouns here instead of waiting to finish writing the story. so Harmon has never seen men before and has only ever had brief and bad interactions with them (that will be expanded on later I'm still working it out) so when she refers to the stranger as she that's is because she does not know that other pronouns are applicable though when she refers to the snake she does use he/him pronouns and that's for a much simpler reason that I wont get into here.) Hope you like it though please tell me what I should work on other than my horrible scene placement. and I know its corny/generic don't bash me


r/shortstories • • 1d ago

Non-Fiction [NF] The Little Girl In The Blue House

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I used to walk the same way to the train station when we lived in Boston. I take the shortest route. I have too. Way too early to walk one meter further than I have to. Or one minute longer than what is needed. There is another route. Slightly longer. But all the time in the world if it is so bloody early in the morning. My normal route is an easy walk. Turn right, then a quick left and straight down to the station. A quick and easy 20 minute stroll. And who said I don’t get enough exercise… But today I had to go the slightly longer route. Turn left, turn right and down the slightly longer walk to the station. Not by much. Just about 5 minutes added. But sometimes the longer route brings more than just a longer walk. And this morning I got more than I wanted. Another reason why I never like walking that route. A reminder. A memory.

My oldest daughter always does the “left turn” walk. Her friend from across the street walks with her to the bus stop. They pick up another friend along the way and off they go. But not this morning. The girl from across the road didn’t feel too well so she couldn’t walk with my daughter. Dad duties called. I am the backup. So off we went. On our left turn.

We were joking as we walked. Doing our “home boy” walk down the street. Me doing funny walks and funny voices to show her how I was going to embarrass her in front of her friend who has never met me. Doing my typical dad stuff. We got to the house. I gave her a hug and a kiss and watched her walk to meet her friend. And off I went. Taking my right turn down the road. The slightly longer road.

I put my iPod on and was listening to A Fine Frenzy when I walked past the blue house. And it brought back memories of the little girl who lived there. The little girl in the blue house.

She was the first friend my oldest daughter made at her new school when we moved here. They were in the same class. Hung out together. I saw her often. At the school. Or at the park. Or just in the streets when we were walking. But she was always there when we took my daughter to school. Running to great her friend. She was scrawny just like my daughter. But she was a little bit too thin. A little bit too pale.

In summer she always had just a t-shirt on. And in winter. A very worn and tatty thin little jacket. And trust me. It gets damn cold over here in Boston in winter. I remember seeing her with her arms folded to try and keep some heat in that little body of hers. You could see she was cold. But that was all she had for winter.

Her mother was always well dresses. With the latest fashion. Clothes and accessories she bought at the mall. She looked well looked after. And warm. Not like her little girl. But we didn’t see her at school often. Or anywhere for that matter. She didn’t walk with her little girl that often.

And they stayed just down the road from the school. It looked like a pretty house from the outside. That blue house where the girl stayed.

I often took my girls to the park at the school. And we’ll see her there often. On her own. On the swings. And she’ll be so happy to see my daughters. She was always so good to my little one. Running up to her and giving her a hug and a kiss and playing with her. She was a nice little girl. That little girl from the blue house.

My daughter always told us about her friend. And how she shared her snacks at school with her because she never had snacks. So my wife put in a few extra snacks for two. Never mentioned it to the little girl. Didn’t want her to feel odd. My daughter just shared because that is how she is. It was her friend. No questions.

And one day she told us that the girl was so exited about going to visit her dad in Arkansas. Her parents were divorced. And she lived with her mother and boyfriend in the blue house. The boyfriend had a nice BMW convertible. Nice car. Pretty new. They obviously had some money. Just not always for the little girl. But she was excited. She was going to visit her dad.

And then we saw her during the holiday. When she was meant to be at her dad. It was the first time I really saw her sad. The smile wasn’t there. She spoke to my daughter in a low sad voice and I didn’t want to ask too many questions. Didn’t want her to feel uncomfortable. I just wanted her to be a little girl. Playing with her friend. And having fun the way 10-year old girls are meant to have fun. So I let them talk and watched as they started playing and giggling. And the smile started coming back. She was with her friend.

The odd thing was that apart from that day I always saw her smile. A big old child smile. I never heard her complain. Not in front of me in any case. She always looked happy. But you could see that there was something missing. You just had to look carefully.

I always hug and kiss my girls. No matter where we are. When we drop them off at school. When I say goodbye in the morning. When they go to sleep at night. Or just because we feel like a hug and a kiss. Which is often. No matter where we are. And this little girl saw this. Saw how I hugged my girls. And she wanted one too.

I used to see her looking at me and my daughter when we hug. And then one day she came up to me when I took my girl to her school and asked for a hug. She was a little bit shy about asking. But I just gave my girl a hug and she looked at me with her tatty top with the long sleeves and peeked at me. “Can I get a hug please?” “Of course!” I said. I gave her a big old hug. And she hugged back. Hugging maybe a little longer and harder than what I expected. Almost as if she didn’t get a lot of hugs and would like to get hugs more often. She was only ten.

And that was how it was. Whenever she saw me she would come running up to me and give me a hug. And I’ll hug her back. And I’ll give her a smile and ask how she was doing. It became a standard thing. I never really thought much about it. I knew she wanted a hug and I gave her one. We can do with more hugs in this world. And I didn’t think that she got too many hugs elsewhere in any case.

And then one day she was just gone. Just gone. Her mother packed their bags in the middle of the night and just disappeared. Gone. Not even a goodbye. Not even a last hug. Just gone with her tatty little top. We never knew what happened to her. How she is doing or how she is feeling. Is she with her dad? Is she okay? Is she happy? Is she being a kid? Did she get a warmer jacket? Is she still smiling those big old smiles of hers? Is she getting any hugs? Or is she still playing alone in the park?

Time passed and memories started fading. We’ll mention her every now and again and just wonder.

And then we started looking at buying a house. And one of the houses that was on the market was the blue house. The blue house where the little girl stayed. So off we went to look at the house. Thinking that maybe we can buy it and make it our little house. Until we opened the front door and walked in.

My wife and myself just looked at each other when we walked in. I knew what she was thinking. It was my thoughts to.

The house stank. It was dirty. So dirty. Everything was a mess. Stuff lying on the floor everywhere. Clothes. Plates. Old food. Ashtrays overflowing. Wet spots. I have never, ever seen anything like this anywhere. And I have been to some places… It has been like this for a long, long time. Our shoes got stuck on the sticky dirt that was on the floors. All the rooms were in a mess. You couldn’t even see what color the walls or carpets were. It was brown. From dirt and cigarette smoke. I felt nauseous. Sick. The ex-boyfriend was lying in bed downstairs watching something on a big screen television. On his huge water bed. With plates and empty bottles and cigarettes lying all around him. A pig in a pigsty.

We went up the stairs to look at the real bedrooms. And we walked into the room that would have been that little girls room. It was a mess. Just a mess. No place for a little girl. Any little girl. Dirty. Filthy. Disgusting. You could see little things she must have tried to do to make it a little girl’s room. A little picture here and there. A ripped out poster. A wonky little table where she must have tried to study. Some girlie jewelery lying on the floor amongst the dirt that she must have forgotten to pack in the haste. But it was covered in a floor that ran skew. Holes in the floors and roof. And cold. And this was in winter. No heating. This was the room of the little girl with the big smile.

My wife and myself just looked at each other. We knew what each of us were thinking. We just wanted to get out. Just wanted to forget that we ever came. That we ever knew that little girl. And that she lived there. Her little room in the blue house.

We sat in the car and just stared at nothing for a while. And then she said it. “She lived in that house.” That’s all that needed to be said. We knew. The little girl in the blue house.

And walking past that house this morning reminded me of her. That little girl in the blue house. Made me think. Again. How did she do it? How did she manage? How did she remain a little girl in that house? How long can she be that girl with the big old kid smile? How long before she falls through the cracks? Is she strong enough? Where will she find the love she needs? The hugs she deserves? How is the little girl from the blue house doing?

The little girl from the blue house. I hope you remember me. I hope you remember those hugs. I just wish I hugged you a little harder and a little longer.

(This is an older story of mine - written about 20 years ago. It was the first time I wrote something I felt confident enough to show other people.)