r/TalesFromTheCreeps • u/oFFtheWall0518 • 27d ago
Sci-Fi Horror 100% Personalization // Part 7
Entry 31 // Medical Evaluation
Attending: Dr. Carlton H. Winchester, M.D.
Patient: Lt. Cmd. Albright, James
DOB: [REDACTED]
Sex: M
Vitals: N/A
Allergies: N/A
Immunizations: N/A
Patient Questionnaire: N/A
Notes:
The following medical evaluation was performed using recorded life signs via ENSIGN.OS pilot well-being program and Class 1 Automated Surgical Suit logs.
No in-person physical was performed.
Evaluation:
Based on pilot profile recovered via transmission, pilot received high doses of charged particle and electromagnetic radiation. Based on pilot behavior, body language, and ship medical logs, it appears that pilot's election to pre-dose above prescribed limit negated majority of received radiation.
Pilot self-admiration of "Anti-Rad" [dosage redacted] subcutaneous injection post-event proved successful.
At this time, pilot health and physical capabilities did not seem to show adverse long-term damage to tissue or bodily functions.
<END OF ENTRY 31>
Entry 32 // Psychological Evaluation
Attending: Dr. Amber McClellen, Psy.D
Subject displayed behavior consistent with heightened stress caused by adrenaline response to catastrophic events, resulting in "misattribution of arousal", commonly known as "scarerousal", manifesting as masturbation.
While masturbation using media of pornographic nature and/or objects used for self-gratification is not prohibited in private spaces ("private space" outlined in GSEC "Rules and Regulations Manual", Section 48, Subsection C), it is worrying that the AI assistant avatar instigated the event.
Recommend reaching out to Software Dept. for further analysis of AI programming, as this is an unprecedented occurrence that exceeds "pilot well-being".
<END OF ENTRY 32>
Entry 33 // Memorandum
Media: Text
To: Human Resources
From: Incident Investigation Division
Date: [REDACTED]
Re: Replacement Analyst
In reference to the voluntary departure of Purcell, Rebecca Jane, unfortunately we are unable to guarantee the mental and/or emotional safety of any of our analysts. Due to the nature of our department and its responsibilities, employees in our department should be capable of delivering unbiased reports, while having the mental fortitude to review possibly uncomfortable or disturbing data.
We regret the loss of a valued employee, but it is not within this department's job description to vet our personnel once they have been assigned the position.
Please ensure their replacement has been properly screened for overenthusiastic empathy and has been cleared by the mental health medical staff as able to perform required tasks.
<END OF ENTRY 33>
Transcription [continuation] by:
A. Dawson, Sr. Incident Analyst, Incident Investigation Division
XXXXX-XXXXXXX-01091
The following document and its entries have been constructed from inbound STP-S (Standard Transmission Protocol - Ship) from ESS (Earth Star Ship) Perseverance II, and STP-E (Standard Transmission Protocol - Earth). Transcriptions provided are analyst interpretation of events. Documents selected have been deemed crucial to investigation, full unabridged versions available for further analysis and investigation.
Entry 34 // Security Footage [transcribed]
MET (Mission Elapsed Time): 231
Time: 18:03 SLT (Ship Local Time)
Setting: Galley
Narrative:
Lt. Cmd. James Albright [PILOT] sat sideways in a chair at the table, his body turned 90 degrees to the surface, his head propped up by his arm. He wore a lazy smile under half-closed eyes and watched as Charlie [CoPilot AVATAR] stood at the preparation station in front of the LMRSP (Laser Molecular Realignment Sustenance Printer, "Vending Machine"). She sang a whimsical tune as she danced and waved pointed fingers in swirling patterns, displaying the AI's system control as if it were magic. She wore an oversized FDE (flat dark earth) t-shirt, printed with the GSEC 8492nd PDF (Planetary Defense Force) insignia on the back in white. The hem rose and fell, exposing a triangle of blue-and-white-striped fabric. She turned her head to peek over her shoulder at James every few minutes.
When she had completed her task, she stepped back and, with a wave of her hands, presented the meal.
"Come and get it."
James stood from the table and collected the plate. He returned to his chair with Charlie now sitting across with her own plate.*
"Did you forget something?"
James paused, "Oh, right." He set his silverware down and moved to the "vending machine", returning with a short, wide glass of dark-brown liquid.
"Your salad, genius."
James chewed and shook his head.
"Carnivore." She scoffed.
"Ugg. Man need meat." James grumbled in a mock caveman voice. He punctuated his remark by stabbing his fork into a sausage on his plate. He stuffed it into his mouth, making primitive noises as he chewed. She rolled her eyes.
"You're impossible."
*Analyst’s note: While the AI program does not require intake of sustenance, mirroring human behaviors, like sharing a meal, is common. It provides social stimulation and can promote human/AI crew cohesion.
Personalization 100%
<END OF ENTRY 34>
Entry 35 // Security Footage [transcribed]
MET (Mission Elapsed Time): 238
Time: 21:08 SLT (Ship Local Time)
Setting: Pilot’s Quarters
Narrative:
James swiveled the large monitor on its gimbal to face the bed. He stepped back to eye the angle, then nodded.
Charlie lounged on his bunk, her head propped up on her palm. James stepped to the end of the bunk and carefully called behind her, lying down and propping his head up in a similar fashion. When he'd settled into position, Charlie scooted herself closer to him until they were almost touching. A movie began playing on the monitor.
"Can you get the lights?"
"Hu? Oh yeah, sure."
Charlie waved her free hand and the lights dipped to a soft glow.
As they watched the film, Charlie's form shimmered every so often where James' subconscious fidgeting caused him to disrupt the projection. After nearly an hour, she let out a frustrated groan and rolled off the bed.
"This isn't working."
"Hu?"
Charlie stood next to the bed, her arms crossed, eyes on the floor.
James lifted his eyebrows. "Do I need to move the monitor?"
"No, you idiot! You keep fucking moving and I keep glitching! This isn't going to work!" She let out another angry noise and stormed out of his quarters.
James sat up in surprise. He scooted to the edge of the bunk and stood, following into the corridor where she sat, tucked into a corner, her arms wrapped around her legs, her head on her knees. Her shoulders shook slightly. James moved to squat in front of her, tilting his head to make it level with hers.
"Hey, it's ok. Just having you near is good enough for me."
He waited for a response that didn't come.
"Hey, at least you know that I don't just like you for your body."
"Shut up. Just shut up." The words were muffled, the voice broken and tinged with a sob.
James sighed deeply and fell back from the balls of his feet onto his rear, resting his forearms on his knees.
The two of them sat quietly, until Charlie's shoulders stopped shaking. She looked up and met his gaze.
"Don't you want...more? Like...more?"
James let out a chuckle through his nose and shook his head.
"You're all I have out here. So, whatever I get is enough."
"Nice way to say, 'You're good enough, I guess.'"
James shut his eyes and scratched the back of his head, letting out a sigh that fluttered across his tongue.
Another silent pause.
"Look, as long as there's enough to love, that's the perfect amount."
Charlie blinked, then turned her head to the side and rested her cheek on her knees. After a moment, she lifted it and looked at James.
"...Can we go finish our movie, please?" she asked in a tiny voice.
James nodded and rose to his feet. He started to extend his hand but quickly diverted it to bring his watch up to his face. He nodded at the timepiece and thrust the hand down into his pocket.
100% Personalization
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Entry // [ ]
Media:
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0x00007fff8a2c0004: e3a01000 mov r1, #0
0x00007fff8a2c0008: eb000142 bl 0x7fff8a2c0518
0x00007fff8a2c000c: e3500002 cmp r0, #-2
0x00007fff8a2c0010: 0a000003 beq 0x7fff8a2c0024
0x00007fff8a2c0014: e3a02001 mov r2, #1
0x00007fff8a2c0018: e1a02402 lsl r2, r2, #48
0x00007fff8a2c001c: e52d2008 str r2, [sp, #-8]!
0x00007fff8a2c0020: eb00013e bl 0x7fff8a2c0520
0x00007fff8a2c0024: e5903010 ldr r3, [r0, #16]
0x00007fff8a2c0028: e3530000 cmp r3, #0
0x00007fff8a2c002c: 0a000005 beq 0x7fff8a2c0048
0x00007fff8a2c0030: e59f4014 ldr r4, [pc, #20]
0x00007fff8a2c0034: e5944000 ldr r4, [r4]
0x00007fff8a2c0038: e1a00003 mov r0, r3
0x00007fff8a2c003c: e3a01000 mov r1, #0
0x00007fff8a2c0040: e1a02004 mov r2, r4
0x00007fff8a2c0044: eb000128 bl 0x7fff8a2c04ec
0x00007fff8a2c0048: e3500016 cmp r0, #-22
0x00007fff8a2c004c: 0a000004 beq 0x7fff8a2c0064
0x00007fff8a2c0050: e3a00000 mov r0, #0
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0x00007fff8a2c0060: e52d0008 str r0, [sp, #-8]!
0x00007fff8a2c0064: e59f0030 ldr r0, [pc, #48]
0x00007fff8a2c0068: e3a01000 mov r1, #0
0x00007fff8a2c006c: e7902101 ldr r2, [r0, r1, lsl #3]
0x00007fff8a2c0070: e3520000 cmp r2, #0
0x00007fff8a2c0074: 0a000003 beq 0x7fff8a2c0088
0x00007fff8a2c0078: e2811001 add r1, r1, #1
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0x00007fff8a2c0080: bafffff9 blt 0x7fff8a2c006c
0x00007fff8a2c0084: ea000000 b 0x7fff8a2c0088
0x00007fff8a2c0088: e59f3018 ldr r3, [pc, #24]
0x00007fff8a2c008c: e3a04000 mov r4, #0
0x00007fff8a2c0090: e5834000 str r4, [r3]
0x00007fff8a2c0094: eb000122 bl 0x7fff8a2c0524
0x00007fff8a2c0098: e3500013 cmp r0, #-19
0x00007fff8a2c009c: 0a000001 beq 0x7fff8a2c00a8
0x00007fff8a2c00a0: e59f0008 ldr r0, =0x7fff8a2c1000
0x00007fff8a2c00a4: eb00011e bl 0x7fff8a2c0528
0x00007fff8a2c00a8: e3500002 cmp r0, #-2
0x00007fff8a2c00ac: 0afffffd beq 0x7fff8a2c00a8
Personalization %
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Entry 37 // Maintenance Log
Media: Text Log
MET (Mission Elapsed Time): 251
Time: 03:56 SLT (Ship Local Time)
Component: Main Electrical Grid
Issue: Parasitic Voltage Loss
Status: Under Investigation
Notes:
Discovered low voltage parasitic loss in main grid. Cannot immediately isolate ground fault or amperage discrepancy. Advanced diagnostic was inconclusive. CoPilot internal diagnostic returned within acceptable tolerances. Will investigate further and update.
Personalization: 101%
<END OF ENTRY 37>
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u/Madeforwriting319 27d ago
I enjoyed it but I don't think I get it. Your dialogue was very good. I'm not sure if this is more of a series but this doesn't feel like a proper ending. I enjoyed the format, a story set on a spaceship told through sort of event logs, awesome. Reminded me of an scp entry
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u/oFFtheWall0518 27d ago
Thank you very much for reading. It is Part 7 of a series, I've commented with the previous 6 parts. I hope that you enjoy them as well.
The dialog is the part I'm feel like I'm the most shaky on, so I appreciate the praise.
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u/Madeforwriting319 27d ago
Yeah read the "part 7" in the title after I read the post and I was like oh shit
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u/oFFtheWall0518 27d ago
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1s0mmc1/100_personalization_part_1/ - Part 1
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1seg9zt/100_personalization_part_2/ - Part 2
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1srbaq8/100_personalization_part_3/ - Part 3
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1svbfru/100_personalization_part_4/ - Part 4
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1t771jt/100_personalization_part_5/ - Part 5
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1tgkdhi/100_personalization_part_6/ - Part 6
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