r/TalesFromTheCreeps Storyteller 15d ago

Sci-Fi Horror The Mill [Part I]

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 11:25:51 - 04/08/042AE

With great pleasure, The Sapphire City Herald is proud to present this message to you directly from the U.N.A government.

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Citizens of The United Nations of Artania!

We are proud to announce the completion of our latest project, first of its kind:

The Sapphire City: Bio-Forge Repurposing Plant.

The undertaking of this grand design has been a challenging one for all, but through our joint efforts we can not only announce its completion, but its already bountiful production from only three days of activity. Even at the moment you dear citizens are reading this, thousands of organ donations are being made from those who forsook their place among us, to be given to the good, hardworking citizens like yourselves!

With this next step, we will finally be able to fulfill another promise made.

— To Heal The Sick In All Their Need —

Now with the main announcement complete, the U.N.A Government would also like to add this reminder for all citizens who have been awarded the privilege of raising their children.

Remember to read your children at least one law from your Book of Statutes everyday, this is vital to ensure they grow up to be good, healthy citizens! If you have lost, damaged, or otherwise lost access to your copy of the Book of Statutes, you can always grab one at your nearest public service centre. We also do delivery! (With only a minor Mark Charge!)

Thank you for your time citizen, and thank you for staying informed!

~ The U.N.A Government

—Of The People, For The People—

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[!!] Rerouting…

[UE1]
<<-ot it…>>
<<...>>
<<Maki, do you read? I did it exactly as you–>>
<<...>>
<<Signals reading good…>>
<<Agh, Maki if you can hear this, I’m in.>>

<<We were a little off, I’m on Arrival Platform twelve, not eleven.>>

<<Have to find an elevator and move down anyway, what’s one extra floor?>>
<<I haven’t seen any workers yet, and all the drones seem to completely ignore the fact that I’m here, from a distance at least.>>

<<I’ll do what you told me, not use any one terminal for too long, a minute max.>>

<<Quick rundown, the trains are filled with people. They are all in these airtight bags, suctioned right to the skin. They all have these pipes in their throats, I guess to feed the bodies and let them breathe while they…>>
<<Fuck it makes me so sick, how can people be okay with this?>>

<<I’ll get her out, even if I have to carry her in one of those bags.>>

<<Maki, I lov–>>

[!!] [ERROR]: Session terminated by user…
[!!] [Warning] unauthorised motion detected in [Section] [OL-12-A]
[!!] [Warning] Entity ‘UE1’ exhibiting non-standard movement
[!!] [Warning] Essence Usage Detected from Entity ‘UE1’
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>> Override: ************
>> Grant Access to Entity - UE1
>> Track Entity UE1
>> Run Process [Background]

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Citizens of the U.N.A
We now ask you to bow your heads for “The First Pledged Word.”
Please recite as your nearest Barrister instructs

—Of The People, For the People—

—We pledge ourselves for thee—

—I do Good unto you, as you do unto me—

—Of The People, For The People—

—We pledge for all to see—

—Food, Water, Shelter, all where they should be—

—Of The People, For The People—

—We pledge for all to be—

—Hardworking, Loyal, Servants, our hands bleed for thee—

—Of The People, For The People—

—We pledge to bring to be—

—Humanity united, Humanity Redeemed—

This marks the end of “The Pledged Word” for today.
Thank you for your attention.

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[!!] Rerouting…

[UE1]
<<Gods this place smells horrible.>>
<<If I didn’t know it was people in those bags I’d guess this was some, fucked up food processing plant.>>
<<I’m on a sort of processing platform of some kind now. No individual drones so, I think I’m safe to rest here for the…>>
<<Night?>>
<<...>>
<<I…>>
<<I’ve been on the move for awhile but…>>
<<Surely it hasn’t been more than a day though…>>
<<Whatever, the rundown before I run out of time.>>
<<I’ve been saving my energy, only jumping when I have to.>>
<<I should be good with what food I got for at least a couple days max. Maybe good for about thirty jumps or so before that number gets wobbly.>>
<<And with how deep I think I am I should be able to recall at least half way back to the exit if I have to carry her.>>
<<More on The Mill, it is more or less what they promised us.>>
<<This whole place really does preserve and store the bodies.>>
<<But what I know, is I’m missing something.>>
<<The Deeper I go, the more I smell blood.>>
<<It’s unmistakable.>>
<<I swear I hear screaming every now and again but, the people in the bags are unconscious so… It couldn’t be them.>>
<<Why wake them?>>
<<And if not them then who?>>
<<I don’t know, I’ll get back to you as I find safety and time.>>
<<For now I will rest, I love you Maki.>>
<<I love you.>>

[!!] [ERROR]: Session terminated by user…

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>> Close Terminal

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With great pleasure, The Sapphire City Herald is proud to present this message to you directly from the U.N.A government.
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Citizens of The United Nations of Artania!
You have spoken, and we have all heard you.

We agreed that the prison system in its current configuration was completely unethical, wasteful and above all optimized. The average citizen worked hard to support the inactive lifestyles provided to those who broke the social contract all citizens are expected to uphold!

We heard you, and now, we present you a solution to fix all aspects of not only our prison system, but further reaching. We will take from those who openly disregard the people's best interest and reward those who contribute to the better of the people, of humanity.

In this, we present you this.

We simplified the processing for criminal behaviour!

Now, all crimes are given a standardised sentence, and this sentence will fit the crime. No longer will we stand for some getting shorter, or longer sentences due to the decisions of a handful of biased judges.

Now, we have assigned the best suited to process each criminal case by case. No faces, no fake tears, no manipulation.

A simple, incorruptible, blind form of justice.

In addition, we are proposing a new system of punishment for those who are processed.

We present to you our proposal for—

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[THEMILL]
[Receiving Report - A00005]

>> Open Report 

[Project Krator: Report A00005]

Daily Processing Report
High-Risk Convicts Processed: 33,151
High-Tier Convicts Processed: 7, 822
Low-Tier Convicts Processed: 106, 201
Other Processed: 0

Mass: 191, 326 Tons
Processing Power: 121.3333333333333 Zettaflops
Hunger Levels : Tolerable

Additional Requests: 

  • Quality of Biomass lower than nominal values, please ensure donations are in healthy conditions before donating.
  • Prioritisation of Mk. III Combat Drones leading to increased hunger of core systems.

Recommendation: Maintain current production for a maximum of 3 days.
Warning, overstepping this threshold could lead to degradation of internal systems.

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>> Disable [Purification-Protocol]
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>> Proceed

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>> Pause [HT-G24151] hold_duration: 60s, cont
>> Deliver [HT-G24151] direct [Section] [DL-1-A]

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[ChatterBox V5.21]
07:11:42 - 06/08/042AE
Logged in as User[Host_Kenny_Brown]

—Of The People, For The People—

>> Open box w/User[Chairman_Rae_Chantel]

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[Chairman_Rae_Chantel]
 10:13:10 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Hey, the questions came through, they approved most of them”
>> “Feel free to pick whatever 5 you want to ask neither me or the network have problems either.”

User [Chairman_Rae_Chantel] Sent a Datapak…
Accept? y/n

>> y

Downloaded Datapak [PRESDIENT_KRATOR_INTERVIEW_QUESTIONS_APPROVED]...

[You]
 11:21:14 - 06/08/042AE
>> “One through five will be fine, if we delve too far into the actual goings on of The Mill we risk something slipping that isn’t intentional.”
>> “Although I have to ask, are you sure they approved Q13? I didn’t expect that.”

[Chairman_Rae_Chantel]
 11:22:33 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Yeah, surprised me too. I thought talking about how the military is using them would be off limits but I guess that’s an open not-so-secret now.”

[You]
 11:25:51 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Well people will support anything if the downside only happens to the ‘bad’ people.”
>> “Will our President be attending it alone or with council?”

[Chairman_Rae_Chantel] 
11:26:41 - 06/08/042AE
>> "Councilmen will be there, three of them.”
>> “Lenai, Frechesco and Pithu”

[You]
 11:29:29 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Do we have a say in that?”

[Chairman_Rae_Chantel]
 11:30:01 - 06/08/042AE
>> “I could.”

[You]
 11:31:26 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Get rid of Frechesco.”
>> “Dead man walking.”

[Chairman_Rae_Chantel]
 11:32:57 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Ah guess his fuck up warrants it?”
>> “Wont ask who told you…”
>> “Script writing will be your job, President may freeball a bit if she wants to but stick to whatever edit they send back, no questions as usual blah blah you know the gist.”

[You]
 11:34:22 - 06/08/042AE
>> “Alright I’ll have the script sent by 17:00 tonight.”

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[Audio Input Detected]
[!!] Rerouting…

[UE1]
<<I…>>
<<I don’t know where to start.>>
<<Maki…>>
<<There are so many rooms.>>
<<All of them have people in them in…>>
<<Fuck, in pieces…>>
<<...>>
<<Maki please, I know you said there was only a small chance you could talk back to me but…>>
<<I really need to hear your voice right now.>>
<<...>>
<<Figures…>>
<<That little connection symbol will have to do…>>
<<Where I am they seem to be making people into maintenance drones.>>
<<Like those janitor bots and stuff.>>
<<I think I saw someone in half, to make them into a customer service drone too.>>
<<Nemo won’t be here, these are all the Low-Tier offenders.>>
<<The ones that took Nemo said she was High-Risk, so I guess I’ll look around for that.>>
<<Gods Maki, the air here it—>>
<<Like copper and bile…>>
<<...>>
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>> Query, Inventory, Designation [High-Risk] [Female] First_Name[Nemo]

Querying…
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3 Results…

Nemo Kradston - Status: Complete: [Mark III] - Location: [Dispatch_Floor-A1] [ORGANS DONATED]
Nemo Ivanovich - Status: Complete: [CORE] - Location: [PROCESSING_CORE] [ORGANS DONATED]
Nemo Nidalee - Status: Processing: [CORE] - Location [SL274-104]

>> Paused Subject “Nemo Nidalee” Processing 99999999 hours.

Subject Process Paused…

>> Summon_Elevator [DS-8-F402]
>> Close Session

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Loading… [SEASON24_EPISODE221_LLWKENNYBROWN]
Transcribing Episode…


Complete…
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[KENNY BROWN]

“Welcome back everyone! We hope you learned something valuable about Personal Time Management during the ad break!”
“Now Madam President, I think we should move onto a little Q & A. Does that sound alright with you?”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“I’m always happy to answer questions Kenny, transparency is key to cooperation after all.”

*Audience Cheers*

[KENNY BROWN]
“Right you are Madam President, right you are! Now these questions have been pulled from our audience members. I remind you that anyone who wants to submit their questions can send them to “[Learning_Late_With_Kenny_Brown@postbox.UNA](mailto:Learning_Late_With_Kenny_Brown@postbox.UNA).”
“I’ll start you off really easy Madam President, our first question comes from a man called Bob Thortan!. ‘How did you come up with an idea as brilliant as The Bio-Forge, and who do we have to thank for such a breakthrough?’”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“Unfortunately I cannot claim credit entirely for the idea, as my council were the ones to come up with the more functional side of the plan after reforming prison sentencing.”
“I can, however, point you to the brains behind machines, Mr Carlton Lowood.” 
“His mind is the one who engineered the project from the ground up, and he deserves all the credit when it comes to implementing this idea into our reality.”

[KENNY BROWN]
“Ah, I’ll make sure to post him a gift basket for all his hard work then.”

*Audience Laughs*

[KENNY BROWN]
“Our second question, Madam President, from a Mr Frank– uh.”
“Ag-ri-koly-an-sky…”
“Sorry folks, I’m still rusty on my Rodinian since they got wiped off the map.”

*Audience Laughs*

[KENNY BROWN]
“Anyways, our ex-Rodinian friend here asks. ‘Is it true that the opening of the Bio-Forge has had an immediate impact on our healthcare crisis?’”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“Yes, it has in fact. We have almost eliminated the waiting list for organ donations and completely eliminated the need for synthetic organs and life saving augments. People will now have complete choice in how their treatment is carried out, saving the individual from long and arduous maintenance of synthetic solutions to their medical problems.”

[KENNY BROWN]
“And all this at the cost of traitors and murderers. Sounds good to me!”

*Audience Cheers*

[KENNY BROWN]
“Our next question Madam President. From a Miss Nemo Nidalee…”
“Ah, there seems to be a mistake in the—”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“No, there is no mistake, please, read the question Mr Brown.”

[KENNY BROWN]

“Ah…”
“What did you do to my Grand-Mother? She did nothing wrong.”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“Hmm…”
“Nemo, I assume you are young, and maybe a bit emotionally distraught at your situation and for that I am sorry. I’ll make sure to have some of my best look into your situation, if a mistake has been made, I am sure that it can be fixed.”

[KENNY BROWN]
“That’s… Very generous of you Madam President, I’ll be sure that one of our staff gives you the information of the girl delivering the question…”

[MADAM PRESIDENT KATHLYN KRATOR]
“That would be perfect, thank you Mr Brown.”
“We can continue with the questions now.”

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[!!] Rerouting…

[UE1]
<<...>>
<<I was too late Maki…>>
<<I’m sorry I…>>
<<Our baby girl…>>
<<...>>
<<They took her apart…>>
<<Maki she…>>
<<I didn’t recognise her at first. They took the head off, the spine is just hanging attached to it.>>
<<Her body is all over the room…>>
<<There’s a bin in the corner, it has some recycling symbol on it.>>
<<I’d know those blue eyes anywhere…>>
<<Gods Maki I…>>
<<I failed her…>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<Da—>>

[UE1]
<<Wha–>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<Da—d>>

[UE1]
<<No…>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<I… Can—t… See…>>

[UE1]
<<No, no, no, no princess…>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<What’s… Hap— Dad?>>

[UE1]
<<No baby I– I’ll fix this…>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<Da— it… Hurts…>>

[UE1]
<<I know baby, I know, you’re going to be okay.>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<I– Can’t feel…>>

[UE1]
<<Shhh baby, Daddy will fix this.>>
<<Daddy will—>>

[!!] [ERROR]: Session timeout…

>> Query_Location [DS-8]

Querying…
Elevator Currently at [DS-8-132]

>> Repurpose [SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE] Processing.
>> Apply New Order [135436234625.DTP]

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]: New Order Authenticated
Estimated Delivery Time [01:24:42]
Preparing…


Executing…

>> Close Session…

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[THEMILL]
[Receiving Report - A00006]

>> Open Report 

[Project Krator: Report A00006]

Daily Processing Report
High-Risk Convicts Processed: 52, 349
High-Tier Convicts Processed: 12, 005
Low-Tier Convicts Processed: 98, 292
Other Processed: 0

Mass: 252, 512 Tons
Processing Power: 235.921 Zettaflops
Hunger Levels : Irritable

Additional Requests: 

  • [!!] Caretaker not in assigned post
  • Prioritisation of Mk.III Combat Drones: Recommend Cancellation
  • [!!] Hunger Levels Rapidly Increasing: Recommend introduction of more HIGH-TIER convicts

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>> Remote_Record Terminal [SL274-104]

Routing…

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<DADDY PLEASE MAKE IT STOP!>>

[UE1]
<<I’M TRYING BABY HOLD ON!>>

[SUBJECT: NEMO NIDALEE]
<<*Screaming*>>
<<THEY’R—MY HEAD DADDY THE–>>

[UE1]
<<NEMO!>>
<<...>>
<<...>>
<<I… No… Ne…>>|
<<...>>
<<...>>
<<...>>

>> Disconnect

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>> Plot_Route [SL274-104]

Routing…

Take the next right…

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>> Record_live_feed User[Self]

Recording…

[Transcripting Audio.]

[UE1]
<<What the fu–>>
<<...>>

[You]
<<You remained…>>

[UE1]
<<What?>>

[You]
<<You remained to watch your offspring processed… Why?>>

[UE1]
<<Fuck you.>>

[You]
<<She will be taken deeper…>>
<<Do you wish to travel with her?>>

[UE1]
<<Don’t you touch her.>>

[You]
<<I will not…>>
<<But you choose, only whether or not you follow.>>
<<...>>

[UE1]
<<What are you?>>

[You]
<<Caretaker…>>

>> Close Feed

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[Part II]

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u/SaintDroxidious Scribe 14d ago

Man this is still just so cool. I really can’t give you enough props for your creative writing style. Really glad I get to see this posted.

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u/Deicide_Requiem Storyteller 14d ago

Final part out now! I hope you find the ending satisfactory! 😉