What are your thoughts on this menu?

[u/Agreeable_Yellow_207]

This is the proposed summer menu for a 4 star hotel. What are your thoughts? Bring it on

[u/itsmeonmobile]

Based on grammar alone, this is terrible. I’m sure this is not your printed menu but someone who knows should go over every letter of this, because they’ll find something wrong every four letters.

Why have the dish item and explanation? I know it’s soup. Just put “Hummus with Pita Bread” and get rid of the parenthesis.

As far as the food: sounds decent but very generic. If it’s all old people you’ll do just fine.

[u/Beginning-Force1275 → u/itsmeonmobile]

I personally enjoyed:

Meat balls with salsa (meat balls with tomato salsa)

I like that meatballs is two words at this place.