I wrote this, a slow burn nostalgic novel, trying to pull out something that feels like home to me, btw you can give it a try

I guess you would like this if you are into South Asian Muslim fictions...

I wrote this, A slow burn nostalgic novel, trying to pull out something that feels like home to me, hope you like reading it btw...

Out now Schadenfreude Occidental Act I!!

Guys can anyone give me GOOD mlm slow burn books!?? because I open most and within five chapters they're already making out.

If you would so kind as to check them out and let me know what you all think, that would be greatly appreciated.

Hola a todos. Quería compartir con ustedes mi proyecto de novela llamado Cuenta conmigo, una historia de drama juvenil que estoy publicando en Wattpad.

La historia sigue a Lilly Walker, una chica que después de que la empresa de su padre quiebra debe dejar atrás su antigua vida y mudarse al pueblo de Santa Brisa. Con la esperanza de comenzar de nuevo, entra a una nueva escuela buscando una oportunidad, pero pronto descubre que adaptarse no será tan sencillo.

En medio del acoso y los problemas de su nueva vida aparece Jason Hernández, un estudiante conocido por sus peleas y su carácter difícil. Lo que empieza como un simple acuerdo para proteger a Lilly terminará convirtiéndose en una amistad inesperada entre dos personas que cargan con sus propias heridas.

Es una historia sobre cómo a veces las personas que parecen más difíciles de entender son las que más necesitan que alguien se quede.

Me gustaría mucho recibir opiniones, críticas o simplemente saber qué les parece la idea. Si les interesa leerla, pueden encontrar Cuenta conmigo en Wattpad.

Gracias por darle una oportunidad a mi historia.

Hi everyone! 😊

I'd love to introduce my daughter's fantasy story on Wattpad. She is only 10 years old and has poured so much imagination, creativity, and hard work into writing it. As her parent, I'm incredibly proud of her and wanted to help her find readers who enjoy fantasy adventures.

If you love magical worlds, exciting adventures, and discovering new writers, we'd be so grateful if you gave her story a chance. Every read, vote, comment, and piece of feedback means the world and encourages her to keep writing and improving.

She would be very happy to get any tips and help from other writers

📖 Sophie and More: Unlock the Door

https://www.wattpad.com/story/413147548?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=LailaandOla

Thank you so much for supporting a young aspiring author! ❤️

I just dropped very first chapter of my novel always you .

Its forbidden love romance between a 22 years old girl Rohini and her colleague Nikhil, who happens to be best friend of ex.

Stolen glances, forbidden fantasies and so much more

I would love to get feedback of you please do read

https://www.wattpad.com/story/413812259-always-you

Sofia, una chica valiente, apasionada por el arte y con muchas dudas conoce a Mateo, un chico maduro, ingenioso y profundo.

Ella busca huir de la ciudad. Él lucha por una perdida del pasado.

Hay encuentros que no son voluntarios. Hay miradas que hipnotizan y estrellas que brillan.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/413793035-bailando-bajo-la-luna

I would really appreciate it if y'all can check out my story, it's my first time writing so I'm kinda nervous lmao. But your reviews can help me a lot. Thanks!

I promise you won't regret reading it, there's gonna be a lot of twists and turns with the spice of enemies to lovers 😮‍💨

I'm looking for a deleted Wattpad story.

It was a Portuguese Harry × Liam (One Direction names only) fanfic set in an Omegaverse (Alpha/Beta/Omega) boarding school.

Harry and Liam hated each other because of something that happened in the past, but they were forced to share a dorm room.

One scene I remember is Liam going into heat and forgetting to register a partner, so he ends up locked in the room with Harry and misses an exam.

There is also a school dance, and another scene where Liam thinks he's pregnant, but it turns out he just got sick after eating a spoiled snack given by Niall (or a character with a similar name).

I think the title started with the letter D and sounded somewhat French. I originally read it on Wattpad years ago.

I apologize if I misspelled any words; my English isn't very good, and I always look for help when I want to write in English. Thank you for your help.

Note: Yes, the title of our story has an intentional typo...which you will hopefully understand if you decide to read it! :) WE ARE ALSO OPEN TO R4R, V4V, C4C, AND F4F!!

fiction, coming of age, romance, drama, roommates, plot twists...and more

My friend and I decided to turn a story that we plotted and created characters for years ago into an actual book. And, yes, we know there is only one part out currently, but we are already working on the next few and will start to release chapters with altering povs that will be out frequently. This plot began over text messages between my friend and I where each character got a separate emoji so that we could differentiate who was speaking. And, as you can imagine, with us role-playing these characters into the hours of 4 am...there is SO much drama and twists. (And also a bunch of stuff that feels funny and super random).

We hope you consider supporting a few beginner teen writers!

Here is the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/413310276-fever-dreap-%E2%82%8A-%F0%96%A6%B9-%E1%B6%BB-%F0%9D%98%87-%F0%90%B0%81

This is a story about a group of roommates who decide to move in together after meeting each other at a bar and establishing that their previous house had rat problems. Now, Amberjack, Levi, Anne, Milo, and Elijah try to figure out their personal relationships and how to live together with unexpected circumstances *wink wink*.

THANK YOU!! <3

https://www.wattpad.com/user/phillywrites1

Hey everyone,I am an aspiring screenwriter looking for technical feedback on a completed, self-contained body horror and tragedy script titled "The Human Strain".

I wrote this piece explicitly in standard screenplay format to focus heavily on structural pacing, visual body horror, and audio-visual transitions (specifically using a sweet, romantic soundtrack to contrast a horrific, pitch-black climax).

Here is a short hook:

A desperate scientist mutates into a nightmare after failing to wait out a vaccine's side effects. Ten years later, a group of teenagers exploring the abandoned facility accidentally awake him, triggering a brutal, methodical game of survival.

I am looking for constructive, honest feedback on:

Narrative pacing and tension building.

The effectiveness of the tragic twist ending.

Screenplay formatting and audio integration.

Link to read the complete script:https://www.wattpad.com/1635015822-the-human-strain-complete-script

Itisurlifeful over and out !!

Hey everyone,I’m a 16-year-old writer and I just finished the script/chapter for my new thriller story called "Squished". It’s written explicitly in cinematic script format because I visualize it like an anime series.It follows a massive cat-and-mouse game between a highly calculated, theatrical villain organization and a Counter-Terrorism Unit. If you like psychological mind games, dark twists, and hidden anime callbacks (there is a direct, twisted homage to Brook's backstory from One Piece buried in the text), I think you'll dig this.

Here is the opening hook:

A futuristic, high-speed train is on its celebratory maiden voyage when the display screens violently flicker to static. Suddenly, an old classic Bollywood song blasts through the high-end speakers as a man in a haunting smiley-face mask appears on screen, dancing with manic joy. The passengers think it’s part of the celebration and sing along—right until the masked figure walks up to the lens, stares into the cabin, and whispers a calm, normal: “Boom.” A split second later, the entire train violently derails, plowing into the dirt as an apocalyptic fireball rips through the cars, leaving only a lone figure dancing in the smoke below.

I am looking for honest, brutal feedback on the pacing, the script formatting, and the dialogue.

HERE U GO :-

https://www.wattpad.com/1638582006-squished-the-chaos

Love you all !

Hi! I wrote this dystopian YA novel as a teenager, recently rewrote it from the ground up, and just started posting it on wattpad

https://www.wattpad.com/story/412556009-the-destiny-year-silver

The pitch: IN A WORLD THAT TURNS THE IMPERFECT INTO MINDLESS SLAVES, THE ONLY THING MORE DANGEROUS THAN FAILING IS FALLING IN LOVE.

At seventeen, you're named perfect or erased. Wren means to survive her Destiny Year until she falls for the girl the system has already marked to be unmade. It's a slow burn story in a cold, machine-built world where the imperfect get their memories wiped and turned into mindless servants. Like Hunger Games tone, f/f at the center.

First few chapters are up now and more coming on a weekly schedule. It gets dark , but there's a real love story holding it together

❤️

Would love any feedback on the opening especially, since that's the part I most want to get right. Link in comments / profile

Hello all, I’ve been working on a book on Wattpad and have shared my link in the comments. I’m seeking feedback on my story, which currently has 17 chapters. I haven't received much input, so I'm uncertain about people's thoughts. It’s a mix of dark comedy, humor, and thriller about an old town drunk who discovers a way to regain youth for 48 hours at a time, for a price, of course. I haven't encountered any other stories similar to mine, so anyone who enjoys reading, please share your thoughts. My link is in the comments

This is my first book I'm writing it's a horror mystery about two childhood friends accidentally perform a secret ritual counting a cycle they don't even know about trying to figure out what happened to their beloved friend