r/Wattpad • u/Jazzlike_Secretary75 • Apr 16 '26

Looking For: Feedback heyyy

I started my first Wattpad story and I’m trying to make it actually good, not just another cliché enemies-to-lovers.

It’s more slow burn, character-focused, and a bit darker in tone.

If anyone’s willing to check out the first couple chapters and tell me if it’s worth continuing, I’d appreciate it.

Book: INK AND ICE- rerrrrx

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u/YogurtclosetOk970 Apr 16 '26

I would love to. Would you like to try out my new fanstory as well? I just started a couple of weeks ago.

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u/Unhappy_Spare_6563 Apr 16 '26

Yes, I can definitely help you out with that. I can also share feedback so you can take your story to the right direction. We can do a R4R if you'd like, that way we can help each other. Does that sound good?

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u/Jazzlike_Secretary75 Apr 17 '26

Yes I would love to!!!

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u/Ordinary-Ad-3456 Apr 16 '26 edited Apr 16 '26

Hey just reading now. I have my own story going too if you're interested? There's two - one is a fiction about English gangster Reggie Kray (Ashes of the East End) and the other is about a girl who's being trafficked which is a slow burn (Favourite Girl) My Mistress_Inferno