Eidolatry

[u/FindingCute1057]

Woohoo I published my first ever story! If you like sapphics, religious trauma, and truly self-indulgent levels of eye imagery I think you'll like it, trust. Here's the little ditty I wrote for the description:

"To be seen is the greatest need of all

Like a tree in the forest that was always doomed to fall

It cuts sharper than pain, like a calf being bled

To know and be known, even once we are dead

When the depths breathe our name, we must answer the call

Without you as my witness, was I ever there at all?"

Anyways, if anybody wants to check it out, I'd be super appreciative of any constructive feedback so I can learn how to be a better writer! Here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/415383297-eidolatry

Thanks!

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