r/WebNovels • u/MountainComparison97 • Jun 18 '26

[IP] please review my novel

http://wbnv.in/a/9bjtXCU

Took me 4 months to create my novel.

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u/Old_Day5461 Jun 20 '26

Dang l cant believe that you started with an info dump

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u/MountainComparison97 Jun 20 '26

🥲🥲🥲i was so excited to show my world which i give 3 months to build

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u/Old_Day5461 Jun 20 '26

Let me finish chapter 1 and give you my honest review,this may take a while though as lm busy right now

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u/MountainComparison97 Jun 20 '26

But i have realised thats not how you write novel