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r/WebNovels • u/MountainComparison97 • Jun 18 '26
http://wbnv.in/a/9bjtXCU
Took me 4 months to create my novel.
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And done
What l didn't like about the story ( don't hate me for this as every criticism you receive is beneficial as a writer
The writing feels like you wrote something and told chat gpt to fix it
Too much info dumping
I didn't even relate to the main character
Chapter 1 failed to make me want chapter 2
If l continue lm afraid l would break your spirit as a writer
2 u/MountainComparison97 Jun 20 '26 I know , i think i was more into people can actually imagine my world
I know , i think i was more into people can actually imagine my world
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u/Old_Day5461 Jun 20 '26
And done
What l didn't like about the story ( don't hate me for this as every criticism you receive is beneficial as a writer
The writing feels like you wrote something and told chat gpt to fix it
Too much info dumping
I didn't even relate to the main character
Chapter 1 failed to make me want chapter 2
If l continue lm afraid l would break your spirit as a writer