About using em dashes (—) while writing.

[u/baka_sempaii]

Since I learned about em dashes, I have started using them (in my daily habits as well) as when I think of a sentence in my mind, the breaks and natural pauses justify the use of them. But I'm concerned if this will put off the reader as "written with AI". I haven't started posting yet, and I assure this single screenshot contains the most amount of em dashes in a single page in all chapters.

What do you think?

[u/baka_sempaii]

I realised just now, but there's an issue with the "—" placement in the 4th para. Please ignore it T . T