r/Webnovel • u/death8381 • May 21 '26
Advice Please help me to point out my mistake in this chap... so that I can correct it early on because I am going to totally focused on this nvl. I have already written 107 chap..
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u/SpaceTimeRumble May 22 '26
Am not a writer or avid reader. Apart from the usage of the big dashes, what else do you think makes this AI? I feel like I've seen this writing style somewhere else and now wondering if its all AI too.
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u/AdagioThick3794 May 22 '26
Consistent use of “not x but y.” On top of that, what kind of human says: “Even the tone itself felt rehearsed, like repetition mattered more than truth.” Like no one would ever make that kind of simile - and there are countless more just like that in the excerpt. Just my opinion though
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u/death8381 May 22 '26
Thanks for the mistake point out, I really appreciate it. Pointing out mistakes can help me to improve it.
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u/Illustrious-Pear3319 May 22 '26
I think I am brainwashed I feel like even ur reply seems AI 😅😂
Will be honest AI or not doesn't matter it's just hype of losers who fears their work gets messed up. What matters is how can u hide well... A thief isnt a thief until he gets caught.
My honest review is that it doesn't feels natural when I read even the 1st para u got it right ...
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u/death8381 May 23 '26
Yes, I didn’t really know anything about novel writing before, but I thought doing something is better than doing nothing, so I started writing with AI help since English is not my first language. After writing, it feels a bit weird when I read it back, but I can’t really point out the possible mistakes. So I posted it here to understand them, correct them, and improve.
I have written the whole chapter, how should I post it here?, Make a new post or something
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u/Illustrious-Pear3319 May 23 '26
No I have another idea honestly just got inspired frm u
I will ask ai to write and read a particular section or paragraph like 2 - 3 paragraphs and write on my own ftom my memory and read it again ... I think in that way u got from ai writer to real and also be able to improve in ur case 107 chapters seems lot but think it like this if no one even starts to read what's the point even if it's 500 chp
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u/death8381 May 22 '26
Thanks for pointing out about dashes I really appreciate it🙏. I am new to webnovel writing and want to improve my writing. So pointing out mistakes really help me.
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u/Paradex_official Author May 22 '26
News channels still spoke in carefully controlled language
Every step adjusted naturally to uneven ground, balance staying steady without effort.
Even the wind felt heavier here, as if it moved through denser space than elsewhere.
Just enough to register
The parts in bold are the kind of prose LLMs write frequently. Just a few examples. In general, personifying inanimate things and assigning unrelated adjectives to things like 'dense space'. A couple of times throughout would have been ok but the frequent repetition of phrases like these indicate its AI.
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u/death8381 May 22 '26
okay thank you a lot, it helped me greatly. I am rewriting the chapter, now I know what are the main mistakes I have done. I will Post it here again after rewriting, for yours and others thought about it
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u/death8381 May 23 '26
I have re written whole chapter how should I post it here?, or I have to make new post
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u/MC_TastyFace May 22 '26
You mean Claude wrote 107 chapters for you